Question: There are plenty of stalls on the edge of the square where you can sample traditional fast food
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [There are plenty of stalls on the edge of the square where you can sample traditional fast food.]

Question: 21 Supported architectures 22 Whats new in the distribution
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [2.1. Supported architectures 2.2. What's new in the distribution?]

Question: Fresh off the reports that the HTC Sense UI will not be available to Android phones with Google branding the great Android user base has managed a way to flash the SuperHERO rom g3 onto their HTC Dream aka TMobile G1
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Fresh off the reports that the HTC Sense UI will not be available to Android phones with Google branding, the great Android user base has managed a way to flash the SuperHERO rom g3 onto their HTC Dream aka T-Mobile G1.]

Question: And at dawn the men with their asses were sent away
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[And at dawn the men, with their asses, were sent away.]