April 6th 1996 What a feeling to land again in Kathmandu Airport Even though the city has grown more noisy and polluted if possible since my first visit at the MtEverest expedition in 1994 the city IS fascinating The combination of mysticism hinduism and other isms on one hand and a country in development on the other

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April 6th. 1996: What a feeling to land again in Kathmandu Airport. Even though the city has grown more noisy and polluted (if possible) since my first visit at the Mt.Everest expedition in 1994, the city IS fascinating: The combination of mysticism, hinduism and other -isms on one hand and a country in development on the other.