QUESTION: Fix punctuation: I had looked forward to our seeing much of each other during our lives
ANS: I had looked forward to [our] seeing much of each other during our lives.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Version of the classic BarWars where you show a bottle fill it with milk and serve it
ANS: Version of the classic BarWars, where you show a bottle, fill it with milk and serve it.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Aberrant playing times will be communicated if the information is available
ANS: Aberrant playing times will be communicated if the information is available.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: doctor double penetration double anal
ANS:
doctor, double penetration, double anal