QUES: 7 Not making a complete inventory of your personal property should in case a fire happens and you need to file a claim

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 7. Not making a complete inventory of your personal property should in case a fire happens and you need to file a claim.
Question: 2 Allen Orlinski from Turkey DLL Suite helped me solve my blue screen Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64bit issue today At first I thought the system Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64bit is crashed so I turned to DLL Suite Well I can only say Problem Solved hah hah
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Answer: 2. Allen Orlinski from Turkey: DLL Suite helped me solve my blue screen Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64-bit issue today. At first I thought the system Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64-bit is crashed so I turned to DLL Suite. Well, I can only say: Problem Solved, hah hah...
Thus we have an indicator value that shows how many more resources can be saved by improving the existing treatment

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Thus we have an indicator value that shows how many more resources can be saved by improving the existing treatment.
input: Kidnap for ransom is a very real threat in many parts of the world and global corporations have a duty of care to their local traveling and expatriate staff An organization dealing with an incident faces potential losses from ransom payments business interruption litigation adverse publicity and longterm damage to reputation
fixed: Kidnap for ransom is a very real threat in many parts of the world, and global corporations have a duty of care to their local, traveling and expatriate staff. An organization dealing with an incident faces potential losses from ransom payments, business interruption, litigation, adverse publicity and long-term damage to reputation.
input ---- The rhythm is created by a rotating plate with holes through which a number of small bulbs illuminates activates photoelectric cells These cells are part of the oscillator circuit of the tubes and thus determines the speed of the rhythm
output ---- The rhythm is created by a rotating plate with holes through which a number of small bulbs illuminates (= activates) photo-electric cells. These cells are part of the oscillator circuit of the tubes - and thus determines the speed of the rhythm.
Add punctuation: 2 Julius Speigel from Papua New Guinea DLL Suite helped me solve my blue screen Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64bit issue today At first I thought the system Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64bit is crashed so I turned to DLL Suite Well I can only say Problem Solved hah hah
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2. Julius Speigel from Papua New Guinea: DLL Suite helped me solve my blue screen Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64-bit issue today. At first I thought the system Windows 7 Home Premium Edition 64-bit is crashed so I turned to DLL Suite. Well, I can only say: Problem Solved, hah hah...