Add punctuation: If you monitor the outgoing connections on the device you will notice that rubywexe connect to various remote Internet hosts under the process ID pia_manager which is the main process of the Private Internet Access application
A: If you monitor the outgoing connections on the device you will notice that rubyw.exe connect to various remote Internet hosts under the process ID pia_manager, which is the main process of the Private Internet Access application.

Add punctuation: I think the better approach is to use the tools available like spaced repetition notecard software to pick up your vocabulary that you dont understand
A: I think the better approach is to use the tools available (like spaced repetition notecard software) to pick up your vocabulary that you don't understand.

Add punctuation: Registration 24 March 2007 1055
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Registration 24 March 2007 10:55