Question: The new space will become a breathing space and free space to roam and stay for walking running playing and sitting people
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Fixed: [The new space will become a breathing space and free space to roam and stay for walking, running, playing and sitting people.]

Question: A view from the West of the old camp right and the two new weatherports in the new camp area left
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Fixed: [A view from the West of the old camp (right) and the two new weatherports in the new camp area (left).]

Question: GM1 affected cats have very clear symptoms before they reach maturity GM1 affected females cannot manage to carry a litter or give birth normally GM1 affected males are sterile
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Fixed: [GM1 affected cats have very clear symptoms before they reach maturity - GM1 affected females cannot manage to carry a litter or give birth normally - GM1 affected males are sterile.]

Question: 27 And when the seven days were almost ended the Jews which were of Asia when they saw him in the temple stirred up all the people and laid hands on him
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Fixed:
[27 And when the seven days were almost ended, the Jews which were of Asia, when they saw him in the temple, stirred up all the people, and laid hands on him,]