Text: then you can get them cleaned after every show, so that you'll always have something new to wear.

Correct capitalization: Then you can get them cleaned after every show, so that you'll always have something new to wear.

Text: following the kiel week bustle it went on the cozy summer trip to norway.

Correct capitalization: Following the Kiel Week bustle it went on the cozy summer trip to Norway.

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Text: this is important, should strive for parents.

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This is important, should strive for parents.