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CORRECTED: Some bloggers who find your post interesting because it is timely, funny, unusual or even challenging, will likely to re blog it, or promote it to other social bookmarking sites.

QUES: So much the longer time is necessary to reveal the creative consequences of the Revolution in all spheres of life

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CORRECTED: So much the longer time is necessary to reveal the creative consequences of the Revolution in all spheres of life.

QUES: WordPress themes are responsive to the latest fashion themes in WordPress and this is understandable

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CORRECTED:
WordPress themes are responsive to the latest fashion themes in WordPress, and this is understandable.