QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Select your upgrades timely and be the king of the hill
ANS: Select your upgrades timely and be the king of the hill....

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Thank Heaven said she Now we shall have plenty of milk and butter and cheese on the table
ANS: "Thank Heaven," said she. "Now we shall have plenty of milk, and butter, and cheese on the table.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: You need to have a network before you become professional Charlotte Giese and Morten Hartz Kaplers arranged for the Palestinians to participate in a program in Denmark which included meetings with The Danish Film School International Media Support and CPH DOX
ANS: You need to have a network before you become professional". Charlotte Giese and Morten Hartz Kaplers arranged for the Palestinians to participate in a program in Denmark, which included meetings with The Danish Film School, International Media Support and CPH: DOX.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: They will no longer fear death for they will learn that there is no death only a change from one condition to another a transformation through reincarnation or rebirth which in itself is a development
ANS:
They will no longer fear death for they will learn that there is no death, only a change from one condition to another, a transformation through reincarnation or rebirth, which in itself is a development.