Add punctuation: This experience occurred on the Tue 05 Mar 2013 0000
A: This experience occurred on the Tue 05 Mar 2013 00:00

Add punctuation: SL Very few people had long hair then
A: SL: Very few people had long hair then.

Add punctuation: We will pick you up directly from the entrance of your hotel you will recognize our driver by a sign with your name in his hand
A:
We will pick you up directly from the entrance of your hotel; you will recognize our driver by a sign with your name in his hand.