Follow me Lucyy_John You bought a new Mac Book laptop and you changed one of the Volumes of the Mac hard disk to FAT32 in order to access this partition on both Windows and Mac OS

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Follow me: @Lucyy_John "You bought a new Mac Book laptop and you changed one of the Volumes of the Mac hard disk to FAT32 in order to access this partition on both Windows and Mac OS.