QUESTION: Fix punctuation: He tries in one way and then another he moans and holds his breath Am I tiring her why am I not coming I wonder if she is still with me Id like to rest for a moment but then I might completely lose it ah now
ANS: He tries in one way and then another, he moans and holds his breath. Am I tiring her, why am I not coming, I wonder if she is still with me, I'd like to rest for a moment but then I might completely lose it, ah, now

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: All the Tools you need to Create Manage Promote Protect and Transform your Web Site Into an EyePopping Masterpiece
ANS: "All the Tools you need to Create, Manage, Promote, Protect and Transform your Web Site Into an Eye-Popping Masterpiece!

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: By creating donor embryos from fresh donor egg and frozenthawed sperm from our sperm donors fertilisation always takes place through the natural method by just mixing the eggs and sperm which allows natural selection as to which sperm will fertilise the egg provides maximal embryo quality and success rates
ANS: By creating donor embryos from fresh donor egg and frozen-thawed sperm from our sperm donors fertilisation always takes place through the natural method (by just mixing the eggs and sperm) which allows natural selection as to which sperm will fertilise the egg, provides maximal embryo quality and success rates.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 50mm is not whether these units rest on the bottom of the pontoon manufactured amplifier pontoon for your example
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50mm is not whether these units rest on the bottom of the pontoon? (manufactured amplifier pontoon for your example)