QUESTION: Fix punctuation: When the first young seedlings poke their heads out of the soil they should be watered sparingly but frequently at the base
ANS: When the first young seedlings poke their heads out of the soil, they should be watered sparingly but frequently at the base.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Put your grill in the middle of the oven and place your cheesecakes there Let them bake for 45 minutes
ANS: Put your grill in the middle of the oven and place your cheesecakes there. Let them bake for 45 minutes.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If you want to know in advance what turns me off freeloaders that are so perverts and rude
ANS: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: freeloaders that are so perverts and rude

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The 201 update will supposedly fix bugs and other glorious things which is always a good thing Supposedly the OTA update that will hit the DROID will also include DROIDspecific issues such as improving the cameras autofocus much needed and voice reception was it even an issue
ANS:
The 2.0.1 update will supposedly fix bugs and other glorious things, which is always a good thing. Supposedly, the OTA update that will hit the DROID will also include DROID-specific issues such as improving the camera's autofocus (much needed) and voice reception (was it even an issue?).