Question: As Eisenhart indicated in the above quote this work was heavily influenced by Darboux s treatise on the subject and he received little supervision for his doctorate
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Fixed: [As Eisenhart indicated in the above quote, this work was heavily influenced by Darboux 's treatise on the subject and he received little supervision for his doctorate.]

Question: Acute lymphocytic lymphoblastic leukemia ALL ALL affects lymphoid cells and grows quickly
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Fixed: [* Acute lymphocytic (lymphoblastic) leukemia (ALL): ALL affects lymphoid cells and grows quickly.]

Question: Other scholars believe the day of the Lord will be an instantaneous event when Christ returns to earth to redeem His faithful believers and send unbelievers to eternal damnation
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Fixed: [Other scholars believe the day of the Lord will be an instantaneous event when Christ returns to earth to redeem His faithful believers and send unbelievers to eternal damnation.]

Question: In this manner he will albeit perhaps unwittingly do justice to the true sufferings of all victims of the Second World War
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Fixed:
[In this manner he will, albeit perhaps unwittingly, do justice to the true sufferings of all victims of the Second World War.]