QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The most effective field commander for the Persian side was Memnon the leader of the Greek mercenaries fighting for the Persian Empire Memnon was not in favor of an immediate direct confrontation with Alexanders forces Memnon favored a scorched earth strategy with sporadic harrassment
ANS: The most effective field commander for the Persian side was Memnon, the leader of the Greek mercenaries fighting for the Persian Empire. Memnon was not in favor of an immediate, direct confrontation with Alexander's forces. Memnon favored a scorched earth strategy with sporadic harrassment.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The local team Natives living in the country with extensive ecommerce experience able to maintain your shop talk to your customers and give you the local input on your business
ANS: The local team. Natives living in the country with extensive e-commerce experience able to maintain your shop, talk to your customers and give you the local input on your business.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Registration 14 October 2008 1541
ANS: Registration 14 October 2008 15:41

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 18 1 The register of major citizens disfranchised shall be handled by the agency maintaining it separately from its other records except for the register and may be used for no other purpose than ascertaining suffrage data taken from it may not be disclosed for any other purpose
ANS:
18 (1) The register of major citizens disfranchised shall be handled by the agency maintaining it separately from its other records, except for the register, and may be used for no other purpose than ascertaining suffrage; data taken from it may not be disclosed for any other purpose.