In the morning till eleven or twelve she is dull and weary but as the day advances she gains life and is quite fresh and funny at ten pm and sings old rhymes nay even dances

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In the morning, till eleven or twelve, she is dull and weary, but as the day advances she gains life, and is quite 'fresh and funny' at ten p.m., and sings old rhymes, nay, even dances.