Question: 24 and one wing of the cherub was five cubits and five cubits the other wing of the cherub ten cubits from the end of one wing to the end of the other wing
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [24 and one wing of the cherub was five cubits, and five cubits the other wing of the cherub, ten cubits from the end of one wing to the end of the other wing;]

Question: Wouldnt it have been inconvenient to have to specify Boston Oregon or Boston Massachusetts Portland Maine comes up so infrequently that people know Portland almost always refers to Portland Oregon
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Wouldn't it have been inconvenient to have to specify Boston, Oregon or Boston, Massachusetts? Portland, Maine comes up so infrequently that people know Portland almost always refers to Portland, Oregon.]

Question: On 23 December 2012
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [On 23. December 2012]

Question: Starts giving shots taking temperature giving them medicine and checking heart beats so that they feel comfortable and pay you Lets find how well you manage all
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[Starts giving shots, taking temperature, giving them medicine and checking heart beats so that they feel comfortable and pay you. Let's find how well you manage all.]