QUES: 21 And I will give this people favour in the sight of the Egyptians and it shall come to pass that when ye go ye shall not go empty

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 21 And I will give this people favour in the sight of the Egyptians: and it shall come to pass, that, when ye go, ye shall not go empty:

QUES: If you want to know in advance what turns me off you missing me

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: you missing me....

QUES: Latest update 8 March 2016 0700

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Latest update : 8 March 2016 07:00