Question: Here Marie and Knut Hamsun stayed for 10 months during the years 1909 1910 The Castle was Knut Hamsuns scriptorium
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Fixed: [Here Marie and Knut Hamsun stayed for 10 months during the years 1909 - 1910. The Castle was Knut Hamsun's scriptorium.]

Question: where s is Lifetime in seconds
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Fixed: [where s is Lifetime in seconds.]

Question: 26 And Jerahmeel had another wife whose name was Atarah she was the mother of Onam
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Fixed: [26 And Jerahmeel had another wife, whose name was Atarah: she was the mother of Onam.]

Question: Later on however it will be demonstrated conclusively that the number was actually far less for the Baseler Nachrichten accepted the Joint Distribution Committees figure of 1559600 survivors after the war but we shall show that the number of claims for compensation by Jewish survivors is more than double that figure
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[Later on, however, it will be demonstrated conclusively that the number was actually far less, for the Baseler Nachrichten accepted the Joint Distribution Committee's figure of 1,559,600 survivors after the war, but we shall show that the number of claims for compensation by Jewish survivors is more than double that figure.]