QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Stairs lead up to an elevated loft sleeping area furnished with an enormous bed dressed with sheets
ANS: Stairs lead up to an elevated loft sleeping area, furnished with an enormous bed dressed with sheets.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Time settings 30 sec 30 min pulse
ANS: Time settings: 30 sec - 30 min, pulse

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: resources are typically dedicated to the current job
ANS: resources are typically dedicated to the current job!);

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Our aim is Better Health Fairer Health It is amazing that someone with such a worldwide reputation is prepared to recognise and help with our work here in Newcastle
ANS:
Our aim is "Better Health, Fairer Health." It is amazing that someone with such a worldwide reputation is prepared to recognise and help with our work here in Newcastle."