Question: On next round keep the first 12131414 sts on needle for heel slip the next 24262828 sts on 1 stitch holder mid on top of foot and keep the last 12131414 sts on needle for heel
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Fixed: [On next round, keep the first 12-13-14-14 sts on needle for heel, slip the next 24-26-28-28 sts on 1 stitch holder (= mid on top of foot) and keep the last 12-13-14-14 sts on needle for heel.]

Question: His opponent had little chance in the political debate which followed
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Fixed: [His opponent had little chance in the political debate which followed.]

Question: You will find individuals that would probably utilize the outdated technique for increasing weight utilizing steroid drugs
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Fixed: [You will find individuals that would probably utilize the outdated technique for increasing weight utilizing steroid drugs.]

Question: Eliminates frizz Use after shampooing apply and comb through the lengths and ends
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Fixed:
[Eliminates frizz. Use: after shampooing, apply and comb through the lengths and ends.]