QUES: The years 1461 to 1465 Regiomontanus spent as a member of Bessarions extended household based mostly in Rome

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CORRECTED: The years 1461 to 1465 Regiomontanus spent as a member of Bessarion's extended household based mostly in Rome.

QUES: 23 And as for the rest of the tribes from the east side to the west side Benjamin one part

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CORRECTED: 23 And as for the rest of the tribes: from the east side to the west side: Benjamin, one part.

QUES: On Saturday evening we hope to see all the participants and their familiesfriends at the dinner party at the beautiful four stars Hotel Bygholm Park Schttesvej 6 8700 in Horsens where it will also be possible to spend the night dogs are welcome

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CORRECTED:
On Saturday evening we hope to see all the participants and their families/friends at the dinner party, at the beautiful four stars Hotel Bygholm Park, Schuttesvej 6, 8700 in Horsens, where it will also be possible to spend the night (dogs are welcome!).