Add spaces: BesidesthelargenumberofmuseumsandchurchesinRome,therearealsoplentyofcosyparksidealforapicnic,includingVillaBorghese.

Answer: Besides the large number of museums and churches in Rome, there are also plenty of cosy parks ideal for a picnic, including Villa Borghese.

Add spaces: Theexperienceofalliances,agreementsandblocswiththesocial-reformliberalsintheWestandwiththeliberalreformists(Cadets)intheRussianrevolution,hasconvincinglyshownthattheseagreementsonlyblunttheconsciousnessofthemasses,thattheydonotenhancebutweakentheactualsignificanceoftheirstruggle,bylinkingfighterswithelementswhoareleastcapableoffightingandmostvacillatingandtreacherous.

Answer: The experience of alliances, agreements and blocs with the social-reform liberals in the West and with the liberal reformists (Cadets) in the Russian revolution, has convincingly shown that these agreements only blunt the consciousness of the masses, that they do not enhance but weaken the actual significance of their struggle, by linking fighters with elements who are least capable of fighting and most vacillating and treacherous.

Add spaces: Also,IampleasedtobeworkingwithMargueriteDorger,whowillberepresentingmyworkastheUSdistributor.

Answer:
Also, I am pleased to be working with Marguerite Dorger, who will be representing my work as the US distributor.