in a couple of years, you will have developed your own style or stopped playing the drums. patterns, you see, can be a good tool for the novice, but the sooner you start playing yourself, the sooner you become a real musician.

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In a couple of years, you will have developed your own style or stopped playing the drums. Patterns, you see, can be a good tool for the novice, but the sooner you start playing yourself, the sooner you become a real musician.