Question: It suffices to say that gigantic enterprises with over a thousand workers each employed in the United States less than 18 per cent of the total number of industrial workers In Russia it was over 41
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Fixed: [It suffices to say that gigantic enterprises, with over a thousand workers each, employed in the United States less than 18 per cent of the total number of industrial workers. In Russia it was over 41%.]

Question: If you want everyone to respect animal souls and live in harmony with all of Nature you share her vision
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Fixed: [If you want everyone to respect animal souls and live in harmony with all of Nature, you share her vision.]

Question: It has not been possible to perform a validation of the model against experimental data since a sufficiently controlled set of data was not found
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Fixed: [It has not been possible to perform a validation of the model against experimental data since a sufficiently controlled set of data was not found.]

Question: But even if there has not yet been found conclusive evidence but not either rebuttal on the supposed Atlantis former existence it would be unscientific to behave arrogantly smarter than the old writers by simply rejecting Antiquitys information on the subject
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Fixed:
[But even if there has not yet been found conclusive evidence (but not either rebuttal) on the supposed Atlantis' former existence, it would be unscientific to behave arrogantly "smarter" than the old writers, by simply rejecting Antiquity's information on the subject.]