Article: Carefully read the obituary after you've written it to see if there are any sentence or spelling errors. Talk through the entire obituary slowly to catch any phrases that are worded incorrectly or read awkwardly. Note your changes with a pen or pencil so you know to go back and change them. If you wrote your paper on a computer, print it out so you can easily mark up the page with what you need to change. Give the obituary you've written to a close relative so they can see if they have anything to add or would like to remove. Write down any suggestions they have and try to work them into a new copy of the obituary. Talk to multiple people that were close to your loved one to see if they have any stories or details they think should be included. Read through the current obituaries for the paper you're planning on submitting to. Look at their structure to see if you need to change anything about the obituary you've written. Obituaries don't need to look exactly the same, but they should contain all the important information necessary.
Question: What is a summary of what this article is about?
Read the obituary out loud to catch any errors. Have a friend or family member read it to check for missed information. Compare your obituary to other obituaries in the paper.

Problem: Article: Once you've reflected on what went wrong, improved yourself, and caught his attention, there's nothing left to do but to tell him how you feel. This part will be hard, but you'll have to swallow your pride and get over the nervousness in your gut if you want results. Opening up and letting him know that you want to try again won't be easy, but it will be worth it. Here's how to do it: Pick the right place and time. Try to get him alone at a time when he's in a good mood and when there isn't a chance his friends will be lurking in the background. Swallow your pride. If you've made any mistakes, apologize for the past, and be as specific as possible to show that you're self-aware. Be honest. Tell him that you really miss having him in your life, and that you made a big mistake and want him back. Say that you want to make it up to him and to show him how much you've changed. If your former guy is receptive, then you'll start spending more time with him, whether he asks you out on a date or just spends more time with you in the company of others. You have to make the most of the time you have with him to make sure that you don't lose him again. Here's what you should do: Don't repeat your mistakes. Remind yourself of what went wrong and vow not to do the same thing this time. Remember how hard you've tried to improve yourself. Don't put too much pressure on yourself. If you're constantly worried about not messing up again, you won't be able to focus on the present. Start fresh. Think of this as starting a brand-new relationship while having a bank of information to work with. Don't dwell on the past or rehash old arguments. Be yourself. Though you're an improved version of yourself, you're still you at the end of the day, so remember to be the girl he fell for in the beginning. If you try too hard to prove how different you've become, you'll lose sight of who you are. If you've tried everything and then some, but your former man still won't give you the time of day, then too much damage has been done for you to pursue the relationship further. If he's ignoring you, resisting your advances, or just downright being mean to you, then it's time to walk away before you get even more hurt. Remember that not very relationship can be salvaged. You've done your best and can applaud yourself for trying. Walk away with your head high. Don't be embarrassed about opening up and sharing your true feelings.
Summary: Tell him how you feel. Keep him this time. Know when to walk away.

If you hear gulping noises, the baby may be eating too quickly and swallowing air. Swallowing excess air can cause an infant's stomach to distend, leading to hiccups. Take frequent breaks to slow the feeding session. The infant's lips should cover the areola, not just the nipple. An insecure latch can cause the baby to swallow air. This allows air in the bottle to rise to the bottom and away from the nipple. You may also want to consider using collapsible bag inserts for the bottle that are designed to reduce air swallowing. If the hole is too big, the formula will flow too quickly, and if it is too small your baby will grow frustrated and gulp air. If the hole is the proper size, a few drops should come out when you tip the bottle.
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Listen to the infant during feedings. Check that the baby is latched on correctly if you are breastfeeding. Tilt the bottle to 45 degrees when bottle-feeding. Check the hole in the bottle's nipple when bottle-feeding.