Add punctuation: Mr Macdonald at once became the object of violent attack and began to wear the bewildered mien for which he became famous and which I observed when I met him in 1935
A: Mr. Macdonald at once became the object of violent attack and began to wear the bewildered mien for which he became famous (and which I observed when I met him in 1935).

Add punctuation: As I said before he in Africa He wanted to arrive early at the bivouac Thus he went to drive almost as if it was a special and I by good portant deau I had to be with him but around km 800 I was beginning to have some balls full of keep a pace like that so I went over and I gave him the famous tap to bring to your attention and warn that we could also slow down for a few kilometers Since it didnt seem like very late but he dropped that much on pace
A: As I said before, "he in Africa, He wanted to arrive early at the bivouac ", Thus he went to drive almost as if it was a special and I, by good portant d'eau, I had to be with him, but around km 800 I was beginning to have some balls full of keep a pace like that, so I went over and I gave him the famous "tap" to bring to your attention and warn that we could also slow down for a few kilometers, Since it didn't seem like very late, but he dropped that much on pace.

Add punctuation: He designed the in 1953 enamel bowl Krenit bowl The name Krenit is a contraction of Krenchel and eternit Only Light blue on stock
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He designed the in 1953 enamel bowl: Krenit bowl. The name Krenit is a contraction of Krenchel and eternit Only Light blue on stock