QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Preseason After season until 1 July from 1 September
ANS: Preseason & After season (until 1 July & from 1 September)

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Come by within the opening hours at the Zaha Hadid building at Ordrupgaard
ANS: Come by within the opening hours at the Zaha Hadid building at Ordrupgaard.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This also makes the panels much more readable and allows you to read the measurements and system status a much greater distance directly without the need to approach the panel
ANS: This also makes the panels , much more readable and allows you to read the measurements and system status , a much greater distance , directly without the need to approach the panel

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This hotel is 20 minutes drive from Fiumicino Airport Ottavia Train Station is 3 km away and provides quick connection to Rome city centre and the Vatican
ANS:
This hotel is 20 minutes' drive from Fiumicino Airport. Ottavia Train Station is 3 km away and provides quick connection to Rome city centre and the Vatican.