Text: keep backup of all the files in a separate drive so as to get it back easily if any data loss occurs

Correct capitalization: Keep backup of all the files in a separate drive so as to get it back easily if any data loss occurs

Text: by simon vostre. there's a larger version here: virgin.

Correct capitalization: By Simon Vostre. There's a larger version here: Virgin.

Text: as you can see on the screenshot above, it came in second right after the local network nameserver used on the test device.

Correct capitalization: As you can see on the screenshot above, it came in second right after the local network nameserver used on the test device.

Text: and he sware unto her, whatsoever thou shalt ask of me, i will give it thee, unto the half of my kingdom.

Correct capitalization:
And he sware unto her, Whatsoever thou shalt ask of me, I will give it thee, unto the half of my kingdom.