Problem: How does the next paragraph end?

Several clips are shown of people climbing up and down rock walls while many others speak to the camera. several more people
A: are shown climbing on the rocks while speaking to the camera and making their way up and down.

Problem: How does the next paragraph end?

The old woman is sitting on a chair and knitting. The woman is showing her knitted item. the woman
A: put the two skeins for yarns on the table and then talked to the camera.

Problem: How does the next paragraph end?

A vet wearing scrubs is holding the left front paw of a black and white cat while someone else not in scrubs is also assisting. a white screen
A: appears and it includes a diagram of a cat's nails, the names of the parts of the nails, and where they should cut the nail.

Problem: How does the next paragraph end?

How to be a good editor
Work independently.
Editing can be a lonely job. You spend a lot of time with a manuscript, especially if it's a lengthy book, and being able to work independently is a valuable skill.
A:
Your author shouldn't give you direction on how to complete the editing. In fact, the author is expecting the opposite: he is expecting you to give him direction on how to improve the writing.