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The descriptions in the report are prepared from the extensive data collection made on basis of the status descriptions in the Technology Programme for Soil and Groundwater Pollution 2007 Information from the Danish Environmental Protection Agency No 1 2007 and on the basis of an interview survey in the Danish Regions the former counties private builders and education and research institutions
The descriptions in the report are prepared from the extensive data collection made on basis of the status descriptions in the "Technology Programme for Soil and Groundwater Pollution 2007", Information from the Danish Environmental Protection Agency No. 1 (2007), and on the basis of an interview survey in the Danish Regions (the former counties), private builders, and education and research institutions.