Add punctuation: And this was Solomons foundation for the construction of the house of God The length by cubits after the first measure was sixty cubits and the breadth twenty cubits
A: And this was Solomon's foundation for the construction of the house of God. The length by cubits after the first measure was sixty cubits, and the breadth twenty cubits.

Add punctuation: Densities arent compartmentalized and there are no sign posts indicating where one density stops locationwise and another begins and the same is true of soul evolvement In both there are many gradations which you could think of as shades on a color chart that move from the faintest tinge all the way up the spectrum to the colors full intensity
A: Densities aren't compartmentalized and there are no sign posts indicating where one density stops location-wise and another begins, and the same is true of soul evolvement. In both there are many gradations, which you could think of as shades on a color chart that move from the faintest tinge all the way up the spectrum to the color's full intensity.

Add punctuation: This area offers many amenities including shops shopping centers cinemas and has excellent connections to the city center thanks to the good public transportation network that serves this area
A:
This area offers many amenities including shops, shopping centers, cinemas, and has excellent connections to the city center thanks to the good public transportation network that serves this area.