QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Often we spend our lives trying to be noticed by other people wanting their attention and respect
ANS: Often we spend our lives trying to be noticed by other people, wanting their attention and respect.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Regarding the manner in which the revisionist struggle is to be waged it goes without saying that the revisionists are divided between supporters and opponents of a kind of political realism
ANS: Regarding the manner in which the revisionist struggle is to be waged, it goes without saying that the revisionists are divided between supporters and opponents of a kind of political realism.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Peterson Manufacturer and designer of a variety of leather wallets Polland
ANS: Peterson - Manufacturer and designer of a variety of leather wallets. Polland.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It doesnt include orthodontia but remember you can pay for your kids braces out of your HSA
ANS:
It doesn't include orthodontia, but remember, you can pay for your kids' braces out of your HSA.