Text: 28:16 at that time king ahaz sent to the kings of assyria to help him.

Correct capitalization: 28:16 At that time king Ahaz sent to the kings of Assyria to help him.

Text: access to collected information

Correct capitalization: Access to collected information

Text: this is all that you would have round the clock access to them.

Correct capitalization: This is all that you would have round the clock access to them.

Text: individuals with surname boye

Correct capitalization:
Individuals with surname BOYE