Add punctuation: Later on we go to Altays girlfriends place where a group of people are gathered to watch dias from a trip to Paris Luxenborg and Barcelona about a month ago
A: Later on we go to Altay's girlfriend's place where a group of people are gathered to watch dias from a trip to Paris, Luxenborg and Barcelona about a month ago.

Add punctuation: Shoot either a clay or a penguin that are thrown out
A: Shoot either a clay or a penguin that are thrown out!

Add punctuation: melamine dog bowl China Hongkang Melamine
A:
melamine dog bowl - China Hongkang Melamine