QUES: 12 And they sought to lay hold on him but feared the people for they knew that he had spoken the parable against them and they left him and went their way

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 12 And they sought to lay hold on him, but feared the people: for they knew that he had spoken the parable against them: and they left him, and went their way.

QUES: Immediately Wedderburn volunteered for the British Army but being an exceptionally modest man he enlisted only in the role of private

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Immediately Wedderburn volunteered for the British Army but, being an exceptionally modest man, he enlisted only in the role of private.

QUES: All in all this train is inexpensive and would make a perfect Christmas Home decor

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
All in all this train is inexpensive and would make a perfect Christmas Home decor .