QUES: Singapore Singapore pictures photos of Singapore Nature pictures Marina Bay in Singapore

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CORRECTED: Singapore, Singapore pictures, photos of Singapore, Nature pictures - Marina Bay in Singapore

QUES: The county boss denied Hagues request but the newly elected mayor granted it

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CORRECTED: The county boss denied Hague's request but the newly elected mayor granted it.

QUES: But owing to the sparse deposits from developed countries the Green Climate Fund has remained essentially empty Thus longterm finance became a major focus in Panama with a goal of developing an agreement that would ensure the Green Climate Fund could live up to developing country expectations and industrialized country commitments

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But, owing to the sparse deposits from developed countries, the Green Climate Fund has remained essentially empty. Thus, long-term finance became a major focus in Panama, with a goal of developing an agreement that would ensure the Green Climate Fund could live up to developing country expectations and industrialized country commitments.