QUES: The many new people really make the camp move

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The many new people really make the camp move.

QUES: According to the story towards the end ot the second world war at around about 1944 1945

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: According to the story, towards the end ot the second world war at around about 1944 / 1945,

QUES: This is a picture of the Euro along with gold bars sitting on a white surface

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
This is a picture of the Euro along with gold bars sitting on a white surface.