QUES: The sense of being alonea disembodied spiritin an immense abyss of limitless space gives a kind of shock to him unless he comes well prepared by metaphysical understanding and well fortified by a resolve to reach the supreme reality

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The sense of being alone--a disembodied spirit--in an immense abyss of limitless space gives a kind of shock to him unless he comes well prepared by metaphysical understanding and well fortified by a resolve to reach the supreme reality.

QUES: 1 12 cups grated monterey jack cheese or 1 12 cups Mexican blend cheese divided

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 1 1/2 cups grated monterey jack cheese or 1 1/2 cups Mexican blend cheese, divided

QUES: They decided to move to Canada where Claus is working with MetaSoft and Janet is studying at University of British Columbia UBC

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
They decided to move to Canada, where Claus is working with Meta-Soft, and Janet is studying at University of British Columbia (UBC).