Text: incomplete download: many times, we download winrar file from internet and you will not able to extract it if the winrar file is not downloaded properly.

Correct capitalization: Incomplete Download: many times, we download WinRAR file from internet and you will not able to extract it if the WinRAR file is not downloaded properly.

Text: however, in order to ensure that your child does not play games deemed to be too violent please follow the age ratings closely.

Correct capitalization: However, in order to ensure that your child does not play games deemed to be too violent please follow the age ratings closely.

Text: my compassion is aroused. 11:9 i will not execute the fierceness of my anger.

Correct capitalization: my compassion is aroused. 11:9 I will not execute the fierceness of my anger.

Text: the hotel offers luxurious rooms, 5 dining ...

Correct capitalization:
The hotel offers luxurious rooms, 5 dining ...