Question: Open on weekdays from 700 to 1600
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Fixed: [(Open on weekdays from 7:00 to 16:00)]

Question: The music of the wind rises the performance of a windmill to poetry
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Fixed: [The music of the wind rises the performance of a windmill to poetry.*]

Question: Works well if you can see that pa has a little room to move 13 pip minimum to resistance
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Fixed: [Works well if you can see that pa has a little room to move (13 pip minimum) to resistance.]

Question: A remarkable construction being its trademark the Seiko Titanium makes for some seriously remarkable presence
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Fixed:
[A remarkable construction being its trademark, the Seiko Titanium makes for some seriously remarkable presence.]