QUES: Dress up Celine Dion and other famous celebrities on Stardoll

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Dress up Celine Dion and other famous celebrities on Stardoll.

QUES: You should therefore only use very fresh local lamb meat

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: You should therefore only use very fresh, local lamb meat.

QUES: Asian Japanese uncensored Japanese

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Asian, Japanese uncensored, Japanese