Problem: Sentence: "It was daylight when he woke with Warren's hand upon Mark's shoulder."; Another sentence: "So Mark slept. It was daylight when he woke with Warren's hand upon his shoulder."?
A: yes

Problem: Sentence: "The delivery truck was going so slow."; Another sentence: "The delivery truck zoomed by the school bus because it was going so slow."?
A: no

Problem: Sentence: "mother was careful not to disturb her, undressing and climbing back into her berth."; Another sentence: "When Tatyana reached the cabin, her mother was sleeping. She was careful not to disturb her, undressing and climbing back into her berth."?
A:
no