QUES: After a break of three years he returned to MIT in the spring of 1946 but it was not clear at this stage in which area Kiefer wanted to make a career

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: After a break of three years he returned to MIT in the spring of 1946 but it was not clear at this stage in which area Kiefer wanted to make a career.

QUES: She made no answer but nodded a little with her head So he climbed up the tree himself carried her down placed her on his horse and bore her home

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: She made no answer, but nodded a little with her head. So he climbed up the tree himself, carried her down, placed her on his horse, and bore her home.

QUES: So when Im tempted to compare myself to others I know what I need to do I pray to God that He will strengthen me Thank you God that you have made me just as I am

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
So when I'm tempted to compare myself to others, I know what I need to do. I pray to God that He will strengthen me. "Thank you God that you have made me just as I am.