Question: If you chose in addition the accommodation in a family you will have a good Spanish communication level after 3 or 4 weeks
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Fixed: [If you chose in addition the accommodation in a family, you will have a good Spanish communication level after 3 or 4 weeks.]

Question: It was quite early she kissed her old grandmother who was still asleep put on her red shoes and went alone to the river
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Fixed: [It was quite early; she kissed her old grandmother, who was still asleep, put on her red shoes, and went alone to the river.]

Question: Nightdress in chiffon in size 2XL and pear green color
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Fixed: [Nightdress in chiffon in size 2XL and pear green color.]

Question: Recommendation If you are inexperienced with updating Samsung device drivers manually we highly recommend downloading the Samsung Netbook Driver Utility This tool will download and update the correct Samsung Netbook driver versions automatically protecting you against installing the wrong Netbook drivers
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Fixed:
[Recommendation: If you are inexperienced with updating Samsung device drivers manually, we highly recommend downloading the Samsung Netbook Driver Utility. This tool will download and update the correct Samsung Netbook driver versions automatically, protecting you against installing the wrong Netbook drivers.]