Text: modern personal computer can work as a power guitar effects processor.

Correct capitalization: Modern personal computer can work as a power guitar effects processor.

Text: registration 15 october 2012 13:12

Correct capitalization: Registration 15 October 2012 13:12

Text: this breed communicates with a noise that sounds like a little chuckle instead of a cat's normal mewling.

Correct capitalization: This breed communicates with a noise that sounds like a little chuckle instead of a cat's normal mewling.

Text: 10:28 and i give unto them eternal life; and they shall never perish, neither shall any man pluck them out of my hand.

Correct capitalization:
10:28 And I give unto them eternal life; and they shall never perish, neither shall any man pluck them out of my hand.