Question: This naked violence has many direct victims Women workers children the aged people of the poorer regions of the world anyone who asks for their rights and stands up to any oppression and anyone who has been branded as belonging to this or that minority
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Fixed: [This naked violence has many direct victims: Women, workers, children, the aged, people of the poorer regions of the world, anyone who asks for their rights and stands up to any oppression, and anyone who has been branded as belonging to this or that 'minority'.]

Question: But being able to feel pleasure in seeing other beings being tortured by suffering and anguish is as will be remembered a mental derailment we know under the concept of sadism
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Fixed: [But being able to feel pleasure in seeing other beings being tortured by suffering and anguish is, as will be remembered, a mental derailment we know under the concept of "sadism".]

Question: At the same time we must work innovatively and launch new digital concepts
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Fixed: [At the same time we must work innovatively and launch new digital concepts.]

Question: We should not give the impression that he did not travel during this time for his parents had many administrative duties which took them away and it is likely that Tycho sometimes went with one of them
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Fixed:
[We should not give the impression that he did not travel during this time, for his parents had many administrative duties which took them away and it is likely that Tycho sometimes went with one of them.]