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SecretaryGeneral of the United Nations Ban Kimoon reminded the religious leaders their obligation to manifest itself when the socalled followers of their faith commit crimes in your name Religious leaders have a crucial role to play in times of turbulence during the
Secretary-General of the United Nations, Ban Ki-moon, reminded the religious leaders their obligation to manifest itself when the "so-called followers of their faith" commit crimes in your name. Religious leaders have a crucial role to play in times of turbulence during the