Question: After completing her tack Red had all the rights of rule 11 ie Red has the right to luff unless her luff is so hard that Blue is not able to keep clear rule 16
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [After completing her tack, Red had all the rights of rule 11, i.e. Red has the right to luff, unless her luff is so hard, that Blue is not able to keep clear (rule 16).]

Question: His servants came near and spoke to him and said My father if the prophet had bid you do some great thing wouldnt you have done it how much rather then when he says to you Wash and be clean
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [His servants came near, and spoke to him, and said, My father, if the prophet had bid you do some great thing, wouldn't you have done it? how much rather then, when he says to you, Wash, and be clean?]

Question: Published 20 november 2012
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Published: 20. november 2012]

Question: Matt silver Polycarbonate frame and temples
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[- Matt silver Polycarbonate frame and temples]