Question: The crowd filled the stages and shared their honest opinion s afterwards
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Fixed: [The crowd filled the stages and shared their honest opinion s afterwards.]

Question: This is with very good reason Notably fish oil contains two types of fatty acid both of which are attributed with having a positive effect against many serious chronic diseases
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Fixed: [This is with very good reason. Notably, fish oil contains two types of fatty acid, both of which are attributed with having a positive effect against many serious chronic diseases.]

Question: David gathered together the sons of Aaron and the Levites
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Fixed: [David gathered together the sons of Aaron, and the Levites:]

Question: Dress up Camilla ParkerBowles and other famous celebrities on Stardoll
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Fixed:
[Dress up Camilla Parker-Bowles and other famous celebrities on Stardoll.]