IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
Several people are preparing to play volleyball on the beach. the camera
OPTIONS:
- pans all around and shows and begins moving back and fourth toward the men in white shirts and wearing black hats.
- pans to show a host moving around the court with a volleyball net and people around the net preparing to play.
- pans all around the court and pans to a volleyball game of volleyball being played.
- zooms out and the people begin to play the game, tossing the ball back and forth to each other.

OUT: zooms out and the people begin to play the game, tossing the ball back and forth to each other.

IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
How to write a christmas newsletter
Tailor your news to your recipient.
Think about who you're sending your newsletter to. What sort of information would you like to include for that recipient? Possibilities might include marriage, moving in with your partner, vacations, new pets, children's news, graduations, new job and any significant changes in your life.
OPTIONS:
- Try to make people into people you really like by giving out the information for their interest. Consider who you'll be handing out the newsletter to.
- Change everything from a simple email to a newsletter. Change your subject line to add a bit of interest.
- There's no need to go into great detail. Just mention milestones and happy events that have occurred within the past year.
- Do not remove all of your information from your newsletter. This will make it more likely that your target audience will contact you.

OUT: There's no need to go into great detail. Just mention milestones and happy events that have occurred within the past year.

IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
How to be a good baseball coach
Get to know your players individually.
This will pay dividends in many ways. Ask them about their favorite teams and players.
OPTIONS:
- Learn their play style, weaknesses, best practices, etc. Write notes for yourself if a coach tells you to.
- This will help focus your efforts on the sport of which they would be most proud. Discuss strategies like switching teams based on the season and ages of the players you're coaching.
- Walk a fine line between being their friend and being their mentor. Be upbeat and positive (not too critical! ) in your suggestions and demonstrations of game skills.
- Learn what players think about their coaches. Are they polite, friendly, organized, willing to challenge or interfere, and dominant or aggressive? You may even be hired to do this.

OUT:
Walk a fine line between being their friend and being their mentor. Be upbeat and positive (not too critical! ) in your suggestions and demonstrations of game skills.