Add punctuation: 710 But if you are afraid to go down go with Purah your servant down to the camp
A: 7:10 But if you are afraid to go down, go with Purah your servant down to the camp:

Add punctuation: The last day and a half we establish setting up a thinbook factory replete with production manager service department and three production units
A: The last day and a half we establish setting up a 'thin-book factory', replete with production manager, service department and three production units.

Add punctuation: The modern era in Thai history began in 1932 when a westernized military elite staged a coup detat and made the king accept the role of constitutional monarch
A:
The modern era in Thai history began in 1932 when a westernized military elite staged a coup d'etat and made the king accept the role of constitutional monarch.