QUES: Why is it that millions of human beings in the most civilised countries are shivering in insufficient clothing though four of them can produce sufficient cotton or woollen cloth for one thousand of them

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CORRECTED: Why is it that millions of human beings, in the most civilised countries, are shivering in insufficient clothing, though four of them can produce sufficient cotton or woollen cloth for one thousand of them?

QUES: Aside from being the basis of stock car racing this became common after the war and as a result it is credited as being the origin of drag racing as well

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CORRECTED: Aside from being the basis of stock car racing, this became common after the war, and as a result, it is credited as being the origin of drag racing as well.

QUES: As I find maritime equipment more beautiful than mountaneering boots I have chosen to work with this

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CORRECTED:
As I find maritime equipment more beautiful than mountaneering boots, I have chosen to work with this.