Add punctuation: Godly sorrow is accompanied by an acknowledgment of my own sin or lack and produces repentance which helps me advance on the way of salvation and transformation
A: Godly sorrow is accompanied by an acknowledgment of my own sin or lack, and produces repentance, which helps me advance on the way of salvation and transformation.

Add punctuation: You can get many functions such as dynamic IP DNS service smart dialup control automatic Windows Messenger sending elaborate activities log convenient domain name management
A: You can get many functions such as dynamic IP DNS service, smart dial-up control, automatic Windows Messenger sending, elaborate activities log, convenient domain name management.

Add punctuation: Angelina Jolie called you the other day to make an appointment in your salon When she arrives make sure you pull out all the bells and whistles to make her look as good as possible
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Angelina Jolie called you the other day to make an appointment in your salon. When she arrives make sure you pull out all the bells and whistles to make her look as good as possible