Question: Originally posted by Destructoid
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Question: Epidat id 1230_hha The content of Epidat cannot be displayed here Press the link to Epidat
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Fixed: [Epidat id 1230_hha: The content of Epidat cannot be displayed here. Press the link to Epidat]

Question: Quite the contrary its impact lies in the unobtrusive subtlety of its design rather than its ability to make a bold fashion statement In essence its about maintaining a strict eye to detail throughout the development process Intricacies such as the radius and sweep of the lines the proportions and material thicknesses all of which add up to create an impression of harmony and a quality which the average user would be hard put to describe in explicit terms
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Fixed: [Quite the contrary: its impact lies in the unobtrusive subtlety of its design, rather than its ability to make a bold fashion statement. In essence, it's about maintaining a strict eye to detail throughout the development process: Intricacies such as the radius and sweep of the lines, the proportions and material thicknesses all of which add up to create an impression of harmony and a quality which the average user would be hard put to describe in explicit terms.]

Question: Some of the companies that participated in the process are already in the process of establishing commercial collaborations
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[Some of the companies that participated in the process are already in the process of establishing commercial collaborations.]