QUES: He worked almost entirely alone although he kept up with the developments in the fields in which he initiated new ideas

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CORRECTED: He worked almost entirely alone, although he kept up with the developments in the fields in which he initiated new ideas.

QUES: His manifestations are thus to be expressed as manifestations of utter pleasantness to the same degree as he has acquired mastery over the energies

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: His manifestations are thus to be expressed as manifestations of utter pleasantness to the same degree as he has acquired mastery over the energies.

QUES: The revolutionary DIR File Analysis Tool scans analyzes and reports back every detail about your DIR file

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CORRECTED:
The revolutionary DIR File Analysis Tool™️ scans, analyzes, and reports back every detail about your DIR file.