Question: The comparative pause in melting at the end of June and beginning of July and some heavy snowfalls in the south and east in particular were soon followed by strong melt events around the middle and towards the end of July as shown in Figure 1
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Fixed: [The comparative pause in melting at the end of June and beginning of July and some heavy snowfalls in the south and east in particular were soon followed by strong melt events around the middle and towards the end of July as shown in Figure 1.]

Question: Holiday House for rent Munkebo Denmark From vacation rental agency
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Fixed: [Holiday House for rent Munkebo Denmark - From vacation rental agency]

Question: But now I wont go near them I mean how do you deal with the dangerous longterm sideeffects
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Fixed: [But now I won't go near them. I mean, how do you deal with the dangerous long-term side-effects?]

Question: Concerts with the new concept programInstrumental Opera first time in Poland Premiere in Denmark in August
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[Concerts with the new concept program"Instrumental Opera" first time in Poland. Premiere in Denmark in August.]