IN: I stayed up way too late finishing this book ! It felt like every chapter ended on a cliffhanger and I needed to find out what woudl happen next . If you like the revenge plotline ( which I do !
What may have happened after they finished the book ?

OUT: They looked into other books that are similar .

IN: Because Auntie is going to spoil her . So towards the end of the trip I got sick . I think it was just the fact that I was up at like 6 am and not getting in to our room til like 1 am every night . The hotel was cool .
Why did the writer get sick ?

OUT: They were n't getting enough sleep .

IN: 15 seconds later and I glanced down . No Bag ! ! ! ! ! The girl had been working with someone else and when she distracted me , the other even more sneaky bastard swiped my bag from right in between my legs .
Why is the narrator experiencing such heavy anxiety at the moment ?

OUT:
The narrator has experienced a serious theft .