Text: for what shall a man profit if he shall have gained the whole world, and have destroyed, or come under the penalty of the loss of himself?

Correct capitalization: For what shall a man profit if he shall have gained the whole world, and have destroyed, or come under the penalty of the loss of himself?

Text: they're durable, but lightweight - and built to last longer than any labeling tool you've used.

Correct capitalization: They're durable, but lightweight - and built to last longer than any labeling tool you've used.

Text: photos will come as soon as we have visited the place again.

Correct capitalization: Photos will come as soon as we have visited the place again.

Text: 4. review of the new "goodies" from 2011and watch this in 2012

Correct capitalization:
4. Review of the New "Goodies" From 2011and Watch This in 2012