Question: However the chances are that they have come to send the first Eees out before the launching date this is unknown
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Fixed: [However, the chances are that "they have come" to send the first Eee's out before the launching date, this is unknown.]

Question: Links Of London Sweetie BraceletsLarge tactile and fun alternative to the charm Links Bracelet with an expandable diameter to fit most sizes
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Fixed: [Links Of London Sweetie Bracelets--Large tactile and fun alternative to the charm Links Bracelet with an expandable diameter to fit most sizes.]

Question: A large enough section of the Black Market is devoted to documentation
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Fixed: [A large enough section of the Black Market is devoted to documentation.]

Question: So the chefs can be happy because at the discretion of the organizers there is also another prize to be awarded the smile grill for the most irreverent couple in the championship
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Fixed:
[So the chefs can be happy because, at the discretion of the organizers, there is also another prize to be awarded: "the smile grill", for the most irreverent couple in the championship!]