QUES: 2527 And it came to pass in the seven and thirtieth year of the captivity of Jehoiachin king of Judah in the twelfth month on the seven and twentieth day of the month that Evilmerodach king of Babylon in the year that he began to reign did lift up the head of Jehoiachin king of Judah out of prison

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CORRECTED: 25:27 And it came to pass in the seven and thirtieth year of the captivity of Jehoiachin king of Judah, in the twelfth month, on the seven and twentieth day of the month, that Evilmerodach king of Babylon in the year that he began to reign did lift up the head of Jehoiachin king of Judah out of prison;

QUES: More importantly for the visitors All partners are represented at the Open House with a stand and answer questions from their customers

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CORRECTED: More importantly for the visitors: All partners are represented at the Open House with a stand and answer questions from their customers.

QUES: The dog sledge trip between Kangerlussuaq and Sisimiut is a remarkable opportunity to experience adventure

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CORRECTED:
The dog sledge trip between Kangerlussuaq and Sisimiut is a remarkable opportunity to experience adventure.