Cubic metres per minute mmin

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Cubic metres per minute (m/min)
After education the adventure begins try to survive

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After education the adventure begins, try to survive!
Going back even further in time to Plato he talked about music as well and the arts and drama and how it affects people and how musicians especially should be licensed by the authorities because they could provoke into revolution so easily the young

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Going back even further in time, to Plato, he talked about music as well and the arts and drama and how it affects people and how musicians especially should be licensed by the authorities, because they could provoke into revolution so easily the young.