QUESTION: Fix punctuation: With the successful return from this voyage around the world in December 1980 even Londons famous Tower Bridge was opened fully
ANS: With the successful return from this voyage around the world in December 1980 even London's famous Tower Bridge was opened fully.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This Agreement shall be binding upon and inure to the benefit of d2jsp and its successors trustees and permitted assigns d2jsp may assign this Agreement or any of its rights or obligations under this Agreement with or without notice to you
ANS: This Agreement shall be binding upon and inure to the benefit of d2jsp and its successors, trustees, and permitted assigns. d2jsp may assign this Agreement, or any of its rights or obligations under this Agreement, with or without notice to you.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Before long the plots were occupied and bustling with activity
ANS: Before long the plots were occupied and bustling with activity.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: In seconds you will learn exactly what type of ADOBENET file you have the software program associated with your file the publisher who created it its security safety status and a variety of other useful information
ANS:
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