input: Revolutionary TNT resistance system almost silent because it is based upon compressed nitrogen
fixed: Revolutionary TNT resistance system: almost silent, because it is based upon compressed nitrogen

input: The Holy Stone with its weathered soils devoted to Riesling just to name a few
fixed: The Holy Stone, with its weathered soils devoted to Riesling, just to name a few.

input: Latest visit 7 January 2006 1116
fixed: Latest visit 7 January 2006 11:16

input: The flat shape irritates me I feel as if I were shouting to my figures You are too fictitious for me you just lie there static and frozen together do something come out of there and show me what you are capable of So I make them come out of the plane
fixed:
The "flat shape" irritates me - I feel as if I were shouting to my figures, "You are too fictitious for me; you just lie there static and frozen together; do something, come out of there and show me what you are capable of!" So I make them come out of the plane.