He quit the weapons business and joined the Autobot band led by Fortress Maximus When Fortress Maximus renounced war Crosshairs was one of the first to agree with him and one of the most vocal of his supporters

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He quit the weapons business and joined the Autobot band led by Fortress Maximus. When Fortress Maximus renounced war, Crosshairs was one of the first to agree with him and one of the most vocal of his supporters.