Question: Smoking becomes the best as such a large amount of vapor is released
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Smoking becomes the best as such a large amount of vapor is released.]

Question: Transfer from London SE21 Dulwich to London Paddington TRQQP Train station
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Fixed: [Transfer from London SE21 Dulwich to London Paddington (TRQQP) Train station]

Question: At this time he obtained a result that is particularly associated with his name when inspired by Mordell and Davenport he proved the analogue of the Riemann Hypothesis for zeta functions of elliptic curves
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Fixed: [At this time he obtained a result that is particularly associated with his name, when (inspired by Mordell and Davenport ) he proved the analogue of the Riemann Hypothesis for zeta functions of elliptic curves.]

Question: One can for example divide independent schools after their goal and specialties
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Fixed:
[One can, for example divide independent schools after their goal and "specialties":]