Text: when the collar measures approx. 22 cm (after row 2 in the pattern) inc 1 st in every 5 sts = 90-90-96-96-96 sts.

Correct capitalization: When the collar measures approx. 22 cm (after row 2 in the pattern) inc 1 st in every 5 sts = 90-90-96-96-96 sts.

Text: june 2012i could never repay you for the site!

Correct capitalization: June 2012I could never repay you for the site!

Text: with your revolvers clanking at your belt, stride down the dusty main street as gold nuggets burn a hole in your pockets.

Correct capitalization: With your revolvers clanking at your belt, stride down the dusty main street as gold nuggets burn a hole in your pockets.

Text: thoughts welcome to explain the actions of the person caught in this film...[more] time slips

Correct capitalization:
Thoughts welcome to explain the actions of the person caught in this film...[more] TIme Slips