Text: these user pages have been visited 9606 times since 4/5/2011.

Correct capitalization: These user pages have been visited 9606 times since 4/5/2011.

Text: any circlemaker or mystery follower who would be directly affected by the most energetic part of the discharge of lightning, return stroke , not only that he was immediately killed instantly, but at the same time also exactly at the moment of impact of the forehead return stroke impulse exploded.

Correct capitalization: Any circlemaker or mystery follower who would be directly affected by the most energetic part of the discharge of lightning, Return Stroke , not only that he was immediately killed instantly, but at the same time also exactly at the moment of impact of the forehead Return Stroke impulse exploded.

Text: scuba diving is indeed an extraordinary sport. scuba stands for self-contained underwater breathing apparatus.

Correct capitalization: Scuba diving is indeed an extraordinary sport. SCUBA stands for self-contained underwater breathing apparatus.

Text: it is not possible to collect forgotten items at tap1.

Correct capitalization:
It is not possible to collect forgotten items at TAP1.