IN: I wanted to tell her that she was the one thing I had hoped to see after the Ellimist had talked to me . I wanted to tell her how proud of her I was , how proud to have been her friend , her confidante . I wanted to say a lot , but my tongue was heavy and swollen .
What will happen when the narrator talks to the subject .

OUT: The narrator will have a deep conversation with her .

IN: Many of us are now showing an interest in alternative methods such as biofeedback as a way of improving and restoring our health . There are many of us who have become disillusioned by the high cost of mainstream medical care and the lack of viable solutions to their problems . For some , their primary motivation is finding ways to eliminate the use of prescribed drugs in order to avoid the negative side effects .
How would one describe the narrator 's view of traditional medicine ?

OUT: The narrator is highly skeptical .

IN: We did find the Yokohama Hard Rock Cafe and we had a delightful meal . Alcohol is very expensive but it was 2 for 1 , so I took advantage of it and had three . On our last night , Mark wanted to go to McDonalds as it is our tradition to do in every country we visit .
Why did I decide to splurge and have more drinks than I normally would ?

OUT:
There was a discount if you bought more than one .