QUES: Think of the Sherry Rasmus leak in the blazing midday heat

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Think of the Sherry Rasmus leak in the blazing midday heat.

QUES: Also it is combined with more features such as scene capture that makes you enjoy yourself to the fullest with your mobile devices

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Also, it is combined with more features such as scene capture that makes you enjoy yourself to the fullest with your mobile devices.

QUES: He retired in 1981

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
He retired in 1981.