IN: It 's really cheesy . It 's really kinda bad , but pretty much every Stephen King movie is a big ol' cheese - a - thon . Anyways , as cheesy as it was , it was one of the grossest things I ' ve seen in a while . And of course the idea behind it was cool .
Why do they think Stephen King movies are cheesy ?

OUT: They are very fake .

IN: Maybe I ' m getting my period soon . Maybe I ' ve forgotten to take my thyroid pills once too often this past week . Maybe it was just hotter than usual yesterday , and all the sweltering and sweating had put me in a bad mood .
Why am I feeling the way I 'm feeling ?

OUT: A bunch of negative things happening all at once just puts me in a bad mood .

IN: The bond they had shared had been full of love and patience . He 'd taught her how to play the mandolin , lute , violin and viola da gamba at a very early age and , for that , she would always be grateful to him . It just was n't fair !
What kind of person was he ?

OUT:
He was a talented musician