Using expanded metal made of stainless steel the artist Daniel Buren has arranged 170 light columns in the shape of a fan making this place magical at dusk

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Using expanded metal made of stainless steel, the artist Daniel Buren has arranged 170 light columns in the shape of a fan, making this place magical at dusk.
The mentioned newconstructions presumable were the boats S314 through S320 which were never commissioned

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The mentioned new-constructions presumable were the boats S-314 through S-320, which were never commissioned.
4 apply a thin layer of STAREFINISH taking care not to touch the cuticles

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4. apply a thin layer of STAREFINISH taking care not to touch the cuticles.