Question: DVD in computerPC recorderburner share of DVD equipment in total
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [DVD in computer/PC (recorder/burner) (share of DVD equipment in total)]

Question: On both boats there five men were slightly wounded
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [On both boats there five men were slightly wounded.]

Question: Dear friends and prospective customers
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [Dear friends and prospective customers,]

Question: That means youre not allowed to share your access data with any third party or forward your access data to any third party
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[That means you're not allowed to share your access data with any third party or forward your access data to any third party.]