IN: Brushing it aside and not thinking much of it , I went to use the bathroom and noticed she had puked what looked like just her food . Nothing seemed unusual about it , just her entire stomach full of food . By then I was kinda worried . Approximately 20 minutes ago , I went to my bedroom to change into my pajama 's when I saw her laying on my bed .
Why was she laying on the bed ?

OUT: She was sick .

IN: Almost as it truly was a young girl speaking , steering away from complicated syntax . At the same time though it was easy to hold your attention because everything had a simple basic flow . There was n't anything that strained away from the main idea of telling the story , no random excerpts that branched away from one idea or another .
How would one review the story told ?

OUT: The subject told it in a simple way .

IN: She thought for a moment and said that she would consult with her boy friend ... So she called him and explained the situation . Her boyfriend says , " Ask him for $ 200 , and pick up the money really fast . He wo n't even be able to get his pants down . "
What may be a fact about this person and their boyfriend ?

OUT:
They are trying to scam someone out of money .