Question: The game has many units an complete storyline and over 50 waves of attacks to keep you busy for many hours
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Fixed: [The game has many units, an complete storyline, and over 50 waves of attacks to keep you busy for many hours.]

Question: Most of them are currently being addressed but porters may welcome help
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Fixed: [Most of them are currently being addressed, but porters may welcome help.]

Question: My striped sailor dress is also a piece I wear for days when my mood and confidence needs a boost It fits perfectly its nice and vintagy plus it draws compliments from everyone
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Fixed: [My striped sailor dress is also a piece I wear for days when my mood and confidence needs a boost. It fits perfectly, it's nice and vintagy plus it draws compliments from everyone!]

Question: NET STOP can also stop services not provided with Windows
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Fixed:
[NET STOP can also stop services not provided with Windows.]