The requirements are than translated into a data model

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The requirements are than translated into a data model.
And it helped me move in consciousness from feeling I was a victim of outside circumstances to understanding the part I played in creating my own life experiences

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And it helped me move (in consciousness) from feeling I was a victim of outside circumstances to understanding the part I played in creating my own life experiences.
6 And concerning the children of Israel and Judah that dwelt in the cities of Judah they also brought in the tithe of oxen and sheep and the tithe of holy things which were consecrated unto the LORD their God and laid them by heaps

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6 And concerning the children of Israel and Judah , that dwelt in the cities of Judah , they also brought in the tithe of oxen and sheep, and the tithe of holy things which were consecrated unto the LORD their God, and laid them by heaps.