QUES: The living room forms a single space with the kitchen and displays a special decoration with unique wallpapers and brick veneer walls giving an industrial look to the room

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The living room forms a single space with the kitchen, and displays a special decoration with unique wallpapers and brick veneer walls giving an industrial look to the room.

QUES: Such doses wont create the enough added growth to warrant added physical stress

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Such doses won't create the enough added growth to warrant added physical stress.

QUES: Choose from our selection of refreshments pay by swiping your credit card and our crew will be right over with your order

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Choose from our selection of refreshments, pay by swiping your credit card and our crew will be right over with your order.