IN: When he said it , Sanzo knew that that was right . Somehow , he was remembering something , something important , something vital . Hakkai blinked at him . " What do you mean ? "
Why is Hakkai so apoplectic with Sanzo ?

OUT: They are surprised by what Sanzo said .

IN: And my God , I would not have him any other way . If I did n't know any better I would say that he is my true addiction . He makes all the flowers in my garden hide in shame , and he makes the doves outside my window covet the hands he processes , for their sweetest songs do not even compare the elegant notes that flow from his gentle guitar . His embrace around my little frame can only be compared to a mother and her baby .
How long did he play the guitar ?

OUT: He was a veteran guitar player

IN: Locusts ? My niece quit speaking to me back when the whole affair came to light because she said , " that could be me ! " and that was only after her husband accused me of coming onto him during Hanukkah . The old me was shocked but wanted to make sure he did n't feel embarrassed about what he was accusing me of so I kept stumbling over my shock and disbelief , the new me would have told him that he was out of his FUCKING MIND .
Why is the narrator upset at her brother - in - law ?

OUT:
He said she flirted with him .