QUES: National market share is 08 percent market share in the Urals region is 5 percent and in Yekaterinburg 20 percent

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CORRECTED: National market share is 0.8 percent, market share in the Urals region is 5 percent and in Yekaterinburg 20 percent.

QUES: For some groups they have almost disappeared completely others are hard at some

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CORRECTED: For some groups, they have almost disappeared completely, others are hard at some.

QUES: I now see a willingness of governments to accept stronger monitoring backed up by incentives for compliance and earlier sanctions

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CORRECTED:
I now see a willingness of governments to accept stronger monitoring, backed up by incentives for compliance and earlier sanctions.