Text: a guide to choosing, purchasing, and using, safe and reliable consumer fireworks.

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Text: 23.05.15 photography | two weeks with two different guest teachers.

Correct capitalization: 23.05.15 Photography | Two weeks with two different guest teachers.

Text: as yesterday, people in camp were doing two lines of work

Correct capitalization: As yesterday, people in camp were doing two lines of work

Text: 6. of course traffic is not everything, there are many factors.

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6. Of course traffic is not everything, there are many factors.