Question: Saturday November 14 at 1630 the film will be shown in over 30 cinemas across the country
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Fixed: [Saturday, November 14 at 16:30 the film will be shown in over 30 cinemas across the country.]

Question: news feed page generated in 20 ms powered by PEM
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Fixed: [news feed - page generated in 20 ms - powered by PEM]

Question: The bodies of healthy human beings are destroyed to a lesser extent but the beings feel a natural tiredness in the evening a state that vanishes after a good nights sleep in which the natural wear and tear on the nervous system or wiring is repaired
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Fixed: [The bodies of healthy human beings are destroyed to a lesser extent, but the beings feel a natural tiredness in the evening, a state that vanishes after a good night's sleep, in which the natural wear and tear on the nervous system or "wiring" is repaired.]

Question: If we are not satisfied with our blog and want to stand out from the average we can take these tips to take it to a higher level
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[If we are not satisfied with our blog and want to stand out from the average, we can take these tips to take it to a higher level:]