IN: I remember my father , who was a doctor , taking my Girl Scout cookie sheet to the hospital , and came back with a couple hundred dollars worth of orders . He signed up for 60 himself . I knew it was he who deserved the patch for most cookies sold to immediate family .
What may be the reason I would get a Girl Scout patch if I did n't do the work ?

OUT: Because it only matters that the boxes are sold not that I sold each one myself .

IN: Hooray ! And so I start fiddling with another chapter , and it goes well , I ' m on my bed typing away listening to music in my pj pants , and then I think , hey would n't it be great if I could track my word count so that I can feel better about the world ? Like weighing yourself on a long - term diet except I want a higher number every week ? And I remember this writing contest thing , and it just so happens , that it runs ONLY in November , and it IS November .
What may be the reason they are writing in their pj 's ?

OUT: They write better when they 're comfortable .

IN: To be honest , I thought Will Poulter 's acting was really good ! He was my favorite by far . I found the cop scene particularly funny , mainly because of how Poulter seems to play my ( and obviously other people 's ) exact idea of how boring cop 's lives much actually be ( I mean come on , they hardly have jam - packed days of saving lives , rescuing people and stopping murderer 's , rapists and robbers do they ? )
How do I feel about his acting ?

OUT:
I thought it was perfect !