QUES: If you will not hear and if you will not lay it to heart to give glory to my name says Yahweh of Hosts then will I send the curse on you and I will curse your blessings yes I have cursed them already because you do not lay it to heart

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CORRECTED: If you will not hear, and if you will not lay it to heart, to give glory to my name, says Yahweh of Hosts, then will I send the curse on you, and I will curse your blessings; yes, I have cursed them already, because you do not lay it to heart.

QUES: These people appear astonished when we tell them that we dont care about their problems on this level that they mean nothing to us that we dont make this kind of judgements

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CORRECTED: These people appear astonished when we tell them that we don't care about their problems on this level, that they mean nothing to us, that we don't make this kind of judgements.

QUES: This divine atmosphere embraces permeates and inspires all those people with open minds and loving hearts all those people who in contact with both the old and the new worldimpulses are engaged in transforming the Earth into a place where love peace and true harmony can permanently dwell

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CORRECTED:
This divine atmosphere embraces, permeates and inspires all those people with open minds and loving hearts, all those people who, in contact with both the old and the new world-impulses, are engaged in transforming the Earth into a place where love, peace and true harmony can permanently dwell.