Question: This is a demand only expressed by those who wish to follow some kind of authority and a demand for replacing a religions catechism by something else even by a scientific one
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Fixed: [This is a demand only expressed by those who wish to follow some kind of authority and a demand for replacing a religion's catechism by something else, even by a scientific one.]

Question: Military communications have to be coded to keep them secret from the enemy
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Fixed: [Military communications have to be coded to keep them secret from the enemy.]

Question: Therefore the growth team had an interest in looking into how companies are experiencing the Danish implementation of EUrules as well as which challenges to growth and competitiveness are emphasised by the companies
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Fixed: [Therefore, the growth team had an interest in looking into how companies are experiencing the Danish implementation of EU-rules, as well as which challenges to growth and competitiveness are emphasised by the companies.]

Question: The revolution spread to Finland which led to a civil war and a new constitution in the form of a democratic republic that has today and even in Germany there was upheaval in the political system
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Fixed:
[The revolution spread to Finland, which led to a civil war and a new constitution in the form of a democratic republic that has today, and even in Germany there was upheaval in the political system.]