QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 11 And anyone on whom the unclean man puts his hands without washing them in water is to have his clothing washed and his body bathed in water and be unclean till evening
ANS: 11 And anyone on whom the unclean man puts his hands, without washing them in water, is to have his clothing washed and his body bathed in water and be unclean till evening.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: UNESCOs World Heritage status is 635 million Danish crowns worth a year
ANS: UNESCO's World Heritage status is 63.5 million Danish crowns worth a year

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: These are just a few suggestions which mistakes to avoid when creating a window display but improving the shopping windows design always depends on the kind of goods your business sells and what budget has been assigned to visual marketing activities
ANS: These are just a few suggestions which mistakes to avoid when creating a window display, but improving the shopping windows design always depends on the kind of goods your business sells and what budget has been assigned to visual marketing activities.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: After his death his widow asked her to republish and write the foreword to his essays
ANS:
After his death, his widow asked her to republish, and write the foreword to his essays.