QUES: In the creation of the heavens and earth and of living creatures including man are Signs

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CORRECTED: In the creation of the heavens and earth, and of living creatures, including man, are Signs

QUES: All rooms have teacoffee facilities and a work desk and there is a 24hour reception

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CORRECTED: All rooms have tea/coffee facilities and a work desk, and there is a 24-hour reception.

QUES: Brazil Kirin Manufacturing Microsoft Dynamics CRM Business Needs Brazil Kirin is a subsidiary of Japanbased Kirin Holdings Company one of the largest beverage groups in the world with more than 46000 employees working for 270 companies in 15 countries

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CORRECTED:
Brazil Kirin Manufacturing Microsoft Dynamics CRM Business Needs Brazil Kirin is a subsidiary of Japan-based Kirin Holdings Company, one of the largest beverage groups in the world with more than 46,000 employees working for 270 companies in 15 countries.