QUESTION: Fix punctuation: However Gandz in see also argues for a very different view
ANS: However, Gandz in (see also ), argues for a very different view:

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: For breakfast at lunch or as an energy boost any time of day
ANS: For breakfast, at lunch or as an energy boost any time of day.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Educated at the Royal Danish Academy of Music and VSMU Music Academy in Bratislava
ANS: Educated at the Royal Danish Academy of Music and VSMU (Music Academy) in Bratislava.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: My dogs are fed a raw food diet called BARF Biologically Appropriate Raw Food or Bones And Raw Food I have been feeding this way since February 1999
ANS:
My dogs are fed a raw food diet, called BARF (Biologically Appropriate Raw Food or Bones And Raw Food). I have been feeding this way since February 1999.