Here is a goal: What are some ways to start a condolences letter?

Which way makes more sense to accomplish this goal?

Options are: --Our deepest condolences to you upon the passing of _______. So sorry to hear of _______'s passing. Please accept our heartfelt sympathies on the loss of your loved one. Words can't express how saddened we are to hear of your loss. --Our deepest condolences to you upon the passing of _______. So sorry to hear of _______'s passing. Please accept our heartfelt sympathies on the loss of your hated one. Words can't express how saddened we are to hear of your loss.
Our deepest condolences to you upon the passing of _______. So sorry to hear of _______'s passing. Please accept our heartfelt sympathies on the loss of your loved one. Words can't express how saddened we are to hear of your loss.