Question: allow affected manufacturers and vendors to stay in business without being either crippled or burdened with unnecessary time and money consuming licensing procedures in conjunction with to electronic cigarettes and related products
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Fixed: [allow affected manufacturers and vendors to stay in business, without being either crippled or burdened with unnecessary time and money consuming licensing procedures in conjunction with to electronic cigarettes and related products.]

Question: Rocket man needs to get to the bosss office pronto Problem is its up on the tenth floor Use the Intel rocket chair to get our intrepid executive to his meeting as fast as possibleCollect powerups for a rocket boost
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Fixed: [Rocket man needs to get to the boss's office, pronto. Problem is, it's up on the tenth floor! Use the Intel rocket chair to get our intrepid executive to his meeting as fast as possible.Collect power-ups for a rocket boost.]

Question: Obviously machines with a massive throughput need a drive system that is able to withstand the consequent high loads
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Fixed: [Obviously, machines with a massive throughput need a drive system that is able to withstand the consequent high loads.]

Question: In 1876 the threeyear old filly Briseis won the Melbourne Cup along with the VRC Oaks and the VRC Derby in the incredibly short period of six days
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Fixed:
[In 1876, the three-year old filly Briseis won the Melbourne Cup, along with the VRC Oaks and the VRC Derby in the incredibly short period of six days.]