QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If you want everyone to respect animal souls and live in harmony with all of Nature you share her vision
ANS: If you want everyone to respect animal souls and live in harmony with all of Nature, you share her vision.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Latest visit 3 December 2011 2313
ANS: Latest visit 3 December 2011 23:13

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Therefore when they had come together they asked him Lord are you now restoring the kingdom to Israel
ANS: Therefore, when they had come together, they asked him, 'Lord, are you now restoring the kingdom to Israel?'

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Diameter of pin 45
ANS:
Diameter of pin 4,5