QUES: When evening had now come because it was the Preparation that is the day before the Sabbath

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CORRECTED: When evening had now come, because it was the Preparation, that is, the day before the Sabbath,

QUES: The religious group is led by the 89 yearold Harold Camping who has calculated the doomsday date on Saturday from studies of the Bible and complicated calculations of the verse numbers and the biblical dates Everything points towards 21st May 2011 he explains to CNN

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CORRECTED: The religious group is led by the 89- year-old Harold Camping , who has calculated the doomsday date on Saturday from studies of the Bible and complicated calculations of the verse numbers and the biblical dates . Everything points towards 21st May 2011 , he explains to CNN.

QUES: But WHAT KNOWLEDGE God answers that ye may know that I am the Lord that doth sanctify you

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CORRECTED:
But WHAT KNOWLEDGE? God answers: "that ye may know that I am the Lord that doth sanctify you."