Text: at the graduate camp, you will get the opportunity to talk directly to all the companies about their possibilities for you, as well as go to presentations by the companies you find interesting.

Correct capitalization: At the Graduate Camp, you will get the opportunity to talk directly to all the companies about their possibilities for you, as well as go to presentations by the companies you find interesting.

Text: it strengthens me and gives me an overcoming spirit, so i can battle against my enemies.

Correct capitalization: It strengthens me and gives me an overcoming spirit, so I can battle against my enemies.

Text: the 29.2 mb art pack includes 275 high-quality images for your desktop.

Correct capitalization: The 29.2 MB art pack includes 275 high-quality images for your desktop.

Text: what happened was this: eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.

Correct capitalization:
What happened was this: Eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.