QUES: Therefore receiving a kingdom that cant be shaken let us have grace whereby we may offer service well pleasing to God with reverence and awe

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CORRECTED: Therefore, receiving a kingdom that can't be shaken, let us have grace, whereby we may offer service well pleasing to God, with reverence and awe,

QUES: Orava castle is considered most beautiful castle in Slovakia and it visited by thousands of travelers from all around the world

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CORRECTED: Orava castle is considered most beautiful castle in Slovakia and it visited by thousands of travelers from all around the world.

QUES: Receiving foreign customers distributors and agents in Denmark on behalf of and in cooperation with Danish companies Planning a program for the visit

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CORRECTED:
Receiving foreign customers, distributors and agents in Denmark, on behalf of - and in co-operation with - Danish companies. Planning a program for the visit.