Question: Still a lot of them feel that their opinions are not worth listening to So how does expressing their views take shape how do they get heard
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Fixed: [Still, a lot of them feel that their opinions are not worth listening to. So how does expressing their views take shape, how do they get heard?]

Question: Air is contaminated with moulds and bacteria which thrive in damp and dirty places as well as with dust and other deposits which begin to collect in the ducting from the first day the ventilation is switched on And because people today often spend the majority of their time indoors the situation is made worse
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Fixed: [Air is contaminated with moulds and bacteria which thrive in damp and dirty places, as well as with dust and other deposits which begin to collect in the ducting from the first day the ventilation is switched on. And, because people today often spend the majority of their time indoors, the situation is made worse.]

Question: You cannot stay hooked by an object more than a second
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Fixed: [You cannot stay hooked by an object more than a second.]

Question: Most cabins on board have been removed to make room for common areas including restaurants cafs and the taxfree shop
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Fixed:
[Most cabins on board have been removed to make room for common areas, including restaurants, cafes and the tax-free shop.]