IN: In so many ways he has made me a better person than I was before I knew him . He did stop screaming , at around 11 weeks . Meanwhile his entire extended family came to meet him and fawn over him .
Why did so many people come to meet the man ?

OUT: He was a baby .

IN: " He 's a little bit occupied at the moment , could I possibly take a message ? " There was muffled fighting and then the man laughed loud right in my ear . " Um , it 's Bam . I just wanted to know where he was . "
Is it easy to reach the man ?

OUT: No , he sends mixed messages and is unclear

IN: Unlike outside and backstage , it was cool in the bus . He mentally thanked their bus driver for switching on the airco this morning as he made his way to the living room area . He flopped down on the large , brown sofa and closed his eyes , sighing again .
Why would the air in the bus be turned on ?

OUT:
To combat the sunny weather outdoors .