Question: This consists as mentioned of the fate of all the individual human beings of the earth together
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Fixed: [This consists, as mentioned, of the fate of all the individual human beings of the earth together.]

Question: Decorated with warm colours the airconditioned rooms include a flatscreen TV with satellite channels and a fridge
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Fixed: [Decorated with warm colours, the air-conditioned rooms include a flat-screen TV with satellite channels and a fridge.]

Question: The vowels a e o etc are a direct extension of the fundamental tone and are relatively strong compared to the voiced consonants b d m etc
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Fixed: [The vowels (a, e, o etc.) are a direct extension of the fundamental tone and are relatively strong compared to the voiced consonants (b, d, m etc.).]

Question: Since web pages arent static it is a good idea to keep track of which version of the original a certain translation refers to and to use this information to check which pages have changed since the last translation
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Fixed:
[Since web pages aren't static, it is a good idea to keep track of which version of the original a certain translation refers to, and to use this information to check which pages have changed since the last translation.]