Problem: For their one year anniversary, Alexandria's boyfriend bought her a quartz ring and not an emerald one because the

My choice: emerald was expensive.

Problem: Lawrence asked Brian for a ride to the grocery store because

My choice: Lawrence didn't have a car.

Problem: The arrows from Lawrence's bow hit Aaron square in the back, causing

My choice: Aaron to drop with wounds.

Problem: The bio was more popular with the masses than the fiction book. The

My choice:
bio must be written more cogently.