QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some will argue that its extremely narrowminded of God to provide only one way to heaven But frankly in light of mankinds rebellious rejection of God its extremely broadminded for Him to provide us with any way to heaven
ANS: Some will argue that it's extremely narrow-minded of God to provide only one way to heaven. But, frankly, in light of mankind's rebellious rejection of God, it's extremely broad-minded for Him to provide us with any way to heaven.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Charles Robert Darwin was born on February 12th 1809 in the small commercial town Shrewsbury located close to the border between England and Wales
ANS: Charles Robert Darwin was born on February 12th 1809 in the small commercial town Shrewsbury located close to the border between England and Wales.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: True mental freedom is thus something that comes with growth just like a beings transformation from child to adult
ANS: True mental freedom is thus something that comes with growth, just like a being's transformation from child to adult.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: However at McMurdo Station on Ross Island and to a much lesser degree at the South Pole Station successful harvests are achieved on a daily basis
ANS:
However, at McMurdo Station on Ross Island (and to a much lesser degree at the South Pole Station), successful harvests are achieved on a daily basis.