IN: We had around 15 pups howling like crazy and drawing attention . It was awesome ! The best moment was right before the howl , when I captured something unseen by the human eye on camera . Spunky is actually quiet !
What may be the reason for them having so many puppies ?

OUT: Their dog had puppies .

IN: Women are like apples on trees . The best ones are at the top the tree . Most men do n't want to reach for the good ones because they are afraid of falling and getting hurt . Instead , they sometimes take the apples from the ground that are n't as good , but easy .
What might this narrator try to explain next ?

OUT: This narrator might try to explain that the apples on top are worth the try .

IN: They were nothing but helpful and polite , such a nice surprise . I ' m going back today to place product and do finishing touches . I 'll be back next week - hopefully with stories ! Have a great weekend !
What is the reason I was surprised by them being helpful and polite ?

OUT:
Often when people work they become sullen or reluctant to be pleasant .