If youre visiting Barcelona between October and March youll be glad to find out that the climate is still warm and wonderful you can still spend an incredible time at the beach with your kids One of the closest beaches is Barceloneta it is a quite frequented place so you should make sure to come a bit earlier than planned to get a good place

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If you're visiting Barcelona between October and March, you'll be glad to find out that the climate is still warm and wonderful, you can still spend an incredible time at the beach with your kids. One of the closest beaches is Barceloneta, it is a quite frequented place, so you should make sure to come a bit earlier than planned to get a good place.