living in a flat share gives you the opportunity to get to know new people and -in most cases- make new friends, which is always great when you are new somewhere. the people who stay in our london accommodations are friendly and interesting students, just like you.
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Living in a flat share gives you the opportunity to get to know new people and -in most cases- make new friends, which is always great when you are new somewhere. The people who stay in our London accommodations are friendly and interesting students, just like you.