Add punctuation: The second part of the ritual Bn Prayer involved new locations within the heating plant which as with the first part is illuminated by Thomas Beks beautifully designed lighting
A: "The second part of the ritual, Bn (Prayer), involved new locations within the heating plant, which, as with the first part, is illuminated by Thomas Bek's beautifully designed lighting.

Add punctuation: The introduction to the article is headed Freedom of expression and from the byline it appears that the article is written by Flemming Rose culture editor
A: The introduction to the article is headed "Freedom of expression", and from the by-line it appears that the article is written by Flemming Rose, culture editor.

Add punctuation: How do we seek first the kingdom of God We simply do Gods will God wants us to obey whats written in the Bible
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How do we seek first the kingdom of God? We simply do God's will! God wants us to obey what's written in the Bible.