Please capitalize where necessary: any r-type fan will love this game. and hey, if you arent any good, you get infinite lives.
A: Any R-Type fan will love this game. And hey, if you arent any good, you get infinite lives.

Q: = double yo between 2 sts, on return row work 1 yo and drop the other.

A: = double YO between 2 sts, on return row work 1 YO and drop the other.

Q: enhanced office suite with unlimited storage and archiving
A: Enhanced office suite with unlimited storage and archiving

Problem: temperature range from 60 - 240 c, up to 10 power settings
Can you repeat this sentence, but capitalize it?
Answer: temperature range from 60 - 240 C, up to 10 power settings

Text: in fact it was his work in calculating the orbits of two comets from observations which had been made in 1532 and 1661 that led to his election to the academie des sciences . mechain's memoir on these comets was presented to the academy for the grand prix of 1782 and in it he showed, unexpectedly, that they were not two appearances of the same comet but indeed different comets.

Correct capitalization: In fact it was his work in calculating the orbits of two comets from observations which had been made in 1532 and 1661 that led to his election to the Academie des Sciences . Mechain's memoir on these comets was presented to the Academy for the Grand Prix of 1782 and in it he showed, unexpectedly, that they were not two appearances of the same comet but indeed different comets.

Text: six days you shall gather it, but on the seventh day is the sabbath. in it there shall be none.'

Correct capitalization:
Six days you shall gather it, but on the seventh day is the Sabbath. In it there shall be none.'