QUES: Click to enlarge picture Marked US

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Click to enlarge picture Marked: US.

QUES: A soon as you connect it to your computer select the option Mass storage from it

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: A soon as you connect it to your computer, select the option "Mass storage" from it

QUES: And our exactspy team constantly upgrades our secure software to satisfy the evergrowing needs of our customers around the world Concerned parents such as yourself

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
And our exactspy team constantly upgrades our secure software to satisfy the ever-growing needs of our customers around the world Concerned parents such as yourself.