Question: This magnificent ground floor spacious duplex is situated in a great spot
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Fixed: [This magnificent, ground floor spacious duplex, is situated in a great spot.]

Question: Simulating the real world in the games very interesting and entertaining business
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Fixed: [Simulating the real world in the games very interesting and entertaining business.]

Question: 6212 And they shall call them The holy people The redeemed of the LORD and thou shalt be called Sought out A city not forsaken
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Fixed: [62:12 And they shall call them, The holy people, The redeemed of the LORD: and thou shalt be called, Sought out, A city not forsaken.]

Question: This hangs presently in Rosenborg above his most outstanding work a magnificent model of the frigate Norske Lve Norwegian Lion executed in ivory and silver
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Fixed:
[This hangs presently in Rosenborg above his most outstanding work: a magnificent model of the frigate "Norske Lve" ("Norwegian Lion"), executed in ivory and silver.]