Add punctuation: And here are a few more of my craft room I do apologize for the chaotic mess but thats because Im about to move things around and clean up D
A: And here are a few more of my craft room, I do apologize for the chaotic mess, but that's because I'm about to move things around and clean up :D

Add punctuation: A clear pc provides 5 displays with all important training data pulse distance incline calories etc
A: A clear pc provides 5 displays with all important training data (pulse, distance, incline, calories, etc.).

Add punctuation: The challenge of globalisation includes a change towards more open networked and international ways of organising production and innovation processes
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The challenge of globalisation includes a change towards more open, networked and international ways of organising production and innovation processes.