QUESTION: Fix punctuation: For some patients the functional disorder is so severe or has lasted for so long that they wont regain their work ability in spite of the treatment
ANS: For some patients, the functional disorder is so severe or has lasted for so long that they won't regain their work ability, in spite of the treatment.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Connect the stamina fitness equipment with touchscreen via a separately available Passport Media Player with your tv
ANS: Connect the stamina fitness equipment with touchscreen via a separately available Passport Media Player with your tv.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Entertainment for children family village Lake Garda
ANS: Entertainment for children, family village Lake Garda

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It is one of the most visited district thanks to its many shops restaurants and leisure spots Moreover major sites such as Las Ramblas or Plaza Catalunya are just a few meters away from this apartment
ANS:
It is one of the most visited district, thanks to its many shops, restaurants and leisure spots. Moreover, major sites such as Las Ramblas or Plaza Catalunya are just a few meters away from this apartment.