IN: Dad .... " I felt my knees go weak my father laid in a bloody heap on the floor , his eyes wide , but empty . Before I could react I heard screams coming down the stairs , it was my mother . Without a second thought I tore up the stairs , stomach already churning in fear of what I 'd see next .
Why were my father 's eyes wide but empty ?

OUT: He was dying .

IN: First I must admit that I am not knowledgeable about the whole of English grammar . I am sure that at times my grammar is incorrect , especially in blog form . But today in the green room a certain actor , Devin ( name changed to protect the grammatically inept ) , challenged an actor that said , " I feel bad . " " Badly , " said Devin .
Why should Devin be embarrassed ?

OUT: They botched linguistics .

IN: I will have to now fight for computer time I am sure . Rylie has been coming home more lately . He said he is trying to get us use to his presence again .
Why is the narrator worried about their computer use ?

OUT:
The narrator feels it will be restricted .