Question: It announced that the shocking reports which have reached the Department of State of the loss of lives and property involved in this incident convince us that
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Fixed: [It announced that "the shocking reports which have reached the Department of State of the loss of lives and property involved in this incident convince us that]

Question: George Christian Grahn or Krille that his real name on drums and
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Fixed: [George, Christian Grahn, or Krille that his real name on drums and]

Question: This may not be easy because your passions are especially strong and your will particularly powerful at the moment
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Fixed: [This may not be easy, because your passions are especially strong and your will particularly powerful at the moment.]

Question: 28 He went and found his body thrown on the path and the donkey and the lion standing by the body The lion had not eaten the body nor mauled the donkey
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Fixed:
[28 He went and found his body thrown on the path, and the donkey and the lion standing by the body. The lion had not eaten the body, nor mauled the donkey.]