Add spaces: Forexamplewhenaclientoncecalledinwithalarge-scaledeventintheverylastminute,everyoneontheteamhelpedsotheeventcouldbeheldaccordingtotheclient'sneeds.

Answer: For example when a client once called in with a large-scaled event in the very last minute, everyone on the team helped so the event could be held according to the client's needs.

Add spaces: Thechangemeansthatthepageloadsmuchfasteranditbecomesmoreresponsive.Alsohangupsthatwerecausedbyslowloadingofthethirdpartyscripts(suchastheonereportedinthisbug)willbeeliminated.

Answer: The change means that the page loads much faster and it becomes more responsive. Also hangups that were caused by slow loading of the third party scripts (such as the one reported in this bug) will be eliminated.

Add spaces: HoweverDALnet'ssoftwareandstaffwillalwaysconsiderthefounderofachanneltobetheonlypersonfinallyresponsibleforhowthatchannelisrun.

Answer:
However DALnet's software and staff will always consider the founder of a channel to be the only person finally responsible for how that channel is run.