QUES: Its members all of whom subscribe to a code of ethics are committed to the concept of shareware as a method of marketing

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Its members, all of whom subscribe to a code of ethics, are committed to the concept of shareware as a method of marketing.

QUES: Moving to the cloud often means lower absolute margins on licensing but increases the importance of partner services eg consultation data migration and change management

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Moving to the cloud often means lower absolute margins on licensing, but increases the importance of partner services, e.g. consultation, data migration and change management.

QUES: And since He created man in His own image it is understandable that He loves us too

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
And since He created man in His own image, it is understandable that He loves us too.