IN: There is a resulting insensitivity to the different cultural contexts in which mission takes place . On the other hand , I guess there are some of you who can already sense the artificiality of this : you have already been out there presenting the gospel and living it , and seeing lives changed and people won for Christ . Having to come and sit and think about it seems quite futile : it 's already going on ! The problem with this view , I suggest respectfully , is pragmatism .
What type of faith does the narrator have ?

OUT: They are Born Again .

IN: The Cotton Husband called me yesterday evening because he needed a ride home from the fields . So I knew there was only one thing he could be doing . I grabbed my camera ( and the girls ) and headed out with every intention of writing a cheerful post about harvesting corn .
Why would they run out with a camera and kids ?

OUT: They 're a blogger looking to have material for stories

IN: Today church was amazing ! We had spontaneous baptisms and so many people came forward . I was so excited and clapping and then I saw this middle school girl who was crying and after seeing her and thinking about all of the people coming down to publicly show their dedication to God I started getting teary eyed !
Why did the writer start getting teary eyed ?

OUT:
Because she was deeply moved by the people committing to their new lifestyle .