Question: But neither does getting discouraged and wallowing around in selfpity
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [But neither does getting discouraged and wallowing around in self-pity.]

Question: The show action is also going to perform some codes Its going to execute the show records function
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed: [The show action is also going to perform some codes. It's going to execute the show records function.]

Question: This subject has been largely neglected and needs to be included both in Danish art history and the history of the Situationist International
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Fixed: [This subject has been largely neglected and needs to be included both in Danish art history and the history of the Situationist International.]

Question: The most important thing about me is the fact that Im united to Jesus
Please fix the punctuation.
Fixed:
[The most important thing about me is the fact that I'm united to Jesus.]