Here is an email: Melissa, I wasn't able to redline this version, but I added sections 10 and 11 and added futher language to Sections 3 and 6. Hopefully you can redline it against your old version. Let me know what you think about environmental indemnity language. I think is is prudent from the view that Black Hills and has been using the Premises for some time and we are not sure what is out there.
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Revised Black Hills