Your sun like all the stars in this galaxy rotates around the galactic core and transits various points along the way

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Your sun, like all the stars in this galaxy, rotates around the galactic core and transits various points along the way.
The most obvious way in which you and Brad affect each other is through the activation of each others emotions and desires

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The most obvious way in which you and Brad affect each other is through the activation of each other's emotions and desires.
Since the Flotilla was moved to the Mediterranean Adolf Lderitz came to the newly formed 8 SFlotilla in November 1941

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Since the Flotilla was moved to the Mediterranean, "Adolf Luderitz" came to the newly formed 8. S-Flotilla in November 1941.