QUES: This is not the case if you got 71 or 72 then you can apply immediately

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: This is not the case if you got 7,1 or 7,2 then you can apply immediately.

QUES: 12 For the west side were hangings of fifty cubits their pillars ten and their sockets ten the hooks of the pillars and their fillets of silver

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 12 For the west side were hangings of fifty cubits, their pillars ten, and their sockets ten; the hooks of the pillars, and their fillets, of silver.

QUES: Society as a whole continues down a path where devices in your home traditionally our most private space are largely controlled by other people who want to know what youre doing he said

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
"Society as a whole continues down a path where devices in your home, traditionally our most private space, are largely controlled by other people who want to know what you're doing," he said.