instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

The horse kicked Penny in the shin.

response: acceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

The person who never had he been so offended was Sir Thomas.

response: unacceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

That I should kiss pigs is my fondest dream

response: acceptable

instruction: Is the next sentence syntactically and semantically acceptable?

I wonder in which pocket it was that Kim had hidden the jewels.

response:
acceptable