And while dogs of any age can be diagnosed with the kidney disease it is more commonly seen in older dogs

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And while dogs of any age can be diagnosed with the kidney disease, it is more commonly seen in older dogs.
Artin was honoured by the award of the American Mathematical Society s Cole Prize in number theory

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Artin was honoured by the award of the American Mathematical Society 's Cole Prize in number theory.
Moxas robust networking solutions for the integration of ECDIS navigation Radar and ship management to facilitate the navigation

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Moxa's robust networking solutions for the integration of ECDIS navigation, Radar and ship management, to facilitate the navigation