QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Uninstallation As DLL files are created to support other programs and softwares working well the data and functions are actually shared by many programs when you uninstall a program HPZINW12DLL may be mistakenly deleted
ANS: Uninstallation: As DLL files are created to support other programs and softwares working well, the data and functions are actually shared by many programs. when you uninstall a program, HPZINW12.DLL may be mistakenly deleted.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: But we also lived in China for four years and here they could easily see that they had things in common with other people from our neighbouring countries
ANS: But we also lived in China for four years, and here they could easily see that they had things in common with other people from our neighbouring countries.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Property type Inn 18 guest roomsunits
ANS: Property type: Inn 18 guest rooms/units

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 6 And he said Hear now my words If there be a prophet among you I Jehovah will make myself known to him in a vision I will speak to him in a dream
ANS:
6 And he said, Hear now my words: If there be a prophet among you, I Jehovah will make myself known to him in a vision, I will speak to him in a dream.