QUESTION: Fix punctuation: That thought omits the free will that everyone has except in the two aforementioned situations
ANS: That thought omits the free will that everyone has except in the two aforementioned situations.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This divine atmosphere embraces permeates and inspires all those people with open minds and loving hearts all those people who in contact with both the old and the new worldimpulses are engaged in transforming the Earth into a place where love peace and true harmony can permanently dwell
ANS: This divine atmosphere embraces, permeates and inspires all those people with open minds and loving hearts, all those people who, in contact with both the old and the new world-impulses, are engaged in transforming the Earth into a place where love, peace and true harmony can permanently dwell.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: By gemmology to cosmetics is a new revolution
ANS: By gemmology to cosmetics is a new revolution.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Suspend means the immediate disabling of access to the Services or components of the Services as applicable to prevent further use of the Services
ANS:
"Suspend" means the immediate disabling of access to the Services or components of the Services, as applicable, to prevent further use of the Services.