QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Sire I would not flatter myself to think I could surpass them had I not a distinct advantage
ANS: Sire, I would not flatter myself to think I could surpass them had I not a distinct advantage.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Individual women with power The ancient Egyptians for example had almost equal rights
ANS: == Individual women with power == The ancient Egyptians, for example, had almost equal rights.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: She no longer believes in love and is sick and tired of being gay
ANS: She no longer believes in love and is sick and tired of being gay.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 12 medium shrimp peeled and deveined
ANS:
12 medium shrimp, peeled and deveined