Question: He wrote a letter as part of the campaign to put the Society on a proper financial footing which shows his position clearly
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Fixed: [He wrote a letter as part of the campaign to put the Society on a proper financial footing which shows his position clearly:]

Question: After homemade breakfast we visit Startours servicecenter at the hotel and book tours for Wednesday and Thursday Not cheap but an easy way to see some of the island
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Fixed: [After "homemade" breakfast we visit Startour's service-center at the hotel and book tours for Wednesday and Thursday. Not cheap, but an easy way to see some of the island.]

Question: As such he was involved in political activity being a member of the Vaad Leumi the executive committee of the Palestinian Jewish National Assembly at the time of British mandate Fraenkel was also a member of the Merkaz Ruhani religious movement within Zionism
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Fixed: [As such he was involved in political activity being a member of the Vaad Leumi, the executive committee of the Palestinian Jewish National Assembly at the time of British mandate. Fraenkel was also a member of the Merkaz Ruhani religious movement within Zionism.]

Question: pictures photos facts and information on Hyde Park London
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Fixed:
[pictures, photos, facts and information on Hyde Park (London)]