QUES: Brass hardware Antique look 14 cm

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CORRECTED: Brass hardware - Antique look 14 cm

QUES: All of these buttons do the right thing ie what you would expect on all of the Linux distributions I have tried it on so far

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CORRECTED: All of these buttons do the right thing (ie what you would expect) on all of the Linux distributions I have tried it on so far.

QUES: Brazil Kirin Manufacturing Microsoft Dynamics CRM Business Needs Brazil Kirin is a subsidiary of Japanbased Kirin Holdings Company one of the largest beverage groups in the world with more than 46000 employees working for 270 companies in 15 countries

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CORRECTED:
Brazil Kirin Manufacturing Microsoft Dynamics CRM Business Needs Brazil Kirin is a subsidiary of Japan-based Kirin Holdings Company, one of the largest beverage groups in the world with more than 46,000 employees working for 270 companies in 15 countries.