Question: Passionate and determined she is convinced that education for all is the key to a better world and through her work she hopes to contribute to promoting science as a captivating and fun career path
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Answer: Passionate and determined, she is convinced that education for all is the key to a better world and, through her work, she hopes to contribute to promoting science as a captivating and fun career path.

Question: 27 But he that did his neighbour wrong thrust him away saying Who made thee a ruler and a judge over us
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Answer: 27 But he that did his neighbour wrong thrust him away, saying, Who made thee a ruler and a judge over us?

Question: In May 1851 Boole was elected as Dean of Science a role he carried out conscientiously
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Answer: In May 1851 Boole was elected as Dean of Science, a role he carried out conscientiously.

Question: But what the modelers do not say is that the number one eighthundredpoundgorilla assumption is that the model is valid
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But what the modelers do not say is that the number one, eight-hundred-pound-gorilla assumption is that the model is valid.