Add punctuation: We honor these events that celebrate LOVE love of your planet love one for another and love of freedom so people in all nations can live joyously and fearlessly
A: We honor these events that celebrate LOVE love of your planet, love one for another, and love of freedom so people in all nations can live joyously and fearlessly.

Add punctuation: The models used was to some degree my own kids and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6year old girl as a real Christmas in December
A: The models used was to some degree my own kids, and I can reveal that even a Christmas held in September has the same effect on a 6-year old girl as a real Christmas in December.

Add punctuation: Swimming pools with games for little children and thrilling attractions including rivers slides and the Magic Cauldron
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Swimming pools with games for little children, and thrilling attractions, including rivers, slides and the Magic Cauldron