Text: remove the ketchup from the heat and add atamon as directed on the bottle.

Correct capitalization: Remove the ketchup from the heat and add Atamon as directed on the bottle.

Text: i just cannot imagine what having fl would be like without you and your passion, jill and her dedication and the overall lymphoma survival program. i have never considered this fight as fight between me and fl.

Correct capitalization: I just cannot imagine what having FL would be like without you and your passion, Jill and her dedication and the overall Lymphoma Survival program. I have never considered this fight as fight between me and FL.

Text: and it would have put paid to all such attempts for ever!

Correct capitalization: And it would have put paid to all such attempts for ever!

Text: nurse, train, erotic, japanese

Correct capitalization:
nurse, train, erotic, Japanese