IN: And yeah , it still sucked . My $ 15 , 5-year old Revlon dry - only straightener does a much better job of smoothing the wrinkles in my hair out . And those sections I did manage to straighten the night before ? Curled up again overnight so all that effort was for naught .
What may be a fact about their hair situation ?

OUT: They had straightened it the night before .

IN: I knew I had to channel Maria before everyone came over , so I mapped out a plan and plotted my strategy . The week prior to the main event , I focused on one task daily , i.e. glass cleaning , dusting , vacuuming , cleaning bathrooms , polishing , etc .
What was the person seeking to accomplish ?

OUT: Clean up the place before guests arrive

IN: AND WHY IS IT IN SUCH A DAMN RUSH?Goddamn . I read someone 's first fanfic and remembered my own , and then did a double take and went , " I ' ve been writing fanfiction for six years already ! " I wrote my first fic Nov. 11 , 2002 , and it was a Sailor Moon Sue no less . And then in 2003 I started actually posting stuff ( a year after I signed up for FFN ) .
What does posting mean ?

OUT:
Posting means contributing to an online forum or site .