question: and this won't work. the reason it won't work is that unless one's targeted tactical plan is aligned to a strategic plan it will go off the rails.
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: And this won't work. The reason it won't work is that unless one's targeted tactical plan is aligned to a strategic plan it will go off the rails.

question: displaying 1 to 12 (of 42 products)
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: Displaying 1 to 12 (of 42 products)

question: 84 m cargo ship with mcgregor hatches has arrived fornaes to be scrapped.
Capitalize this past sentence correctly.
A: 84 m cargo ship with McGregor hatches has arrived Fornaes to be scrapped.