IN: scared of your feeling in your gut you came in my room scared you are gon na die talking about a guy from covenant house busting somebodys face with a bottle down the street which is nt why you were scared maybe you identify with the guy . in my 4:30 daze i know i did . just thought that guy must feel helpless .
Why does the narrator feel threatened ?

OUT: The narrator got accosted .

IN: O YES . Only one pic and two pages , which disappointed me , but this has some EXCELLENT CHOICE BITS.I posted my scans at sendhilfans , so go look!I'm just melting all over at the bits about his wife and daughter . I do n't think he 's ever spoken so much about them , ever . What we ( meaning Jenn and myself ) Sendhil / his wife shippers have wondered about for so long , revealed !
Why am I so disappointed ?

OUT: I feel as if the content is not enough .

IN: There was a can of creamed corn with a huge dent in the side and a box of saltines that contained three crackers . Sighing , muttering under his breath , he stuffed two of the crackers into his mouth , then stuck his head under the faucet to drink . So . No fucking breakfast .
Why is the narrator so mad at the men ?

OUT:
They deprived the narrator of food .