This makes many people much of the excess weight

Can you repeat this sentence, but add in punctuation?
This makes many people much of the excess weight.
To start with rightclick anywhere on your desktop go to New and choose Text Document

Can you repeat this sentence, but add in punctuation?
To start with, right-click anywhere on your desktop, go to New and choose Text Document.
Indeed they are being carefully monitored and are restricted as far as the extent to which they can go

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Indeed, they are being carefully monitored and are restricted as far as the extent to which they can go.