QUES: But they were not on one of the biggest shelfs were the catch used to be the greatest

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: But they were not on one of the biggest shelfs, were the catch used to be the greatest.

QUES: The more raked hands you get during this time the higher up on the list you will be

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The more raked hands you get during this time, the higher up on the list you will be.

QUES: Ideal apartment for 45 people it is on the ground floor with private entrance

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Ideal apartment for 4/5 people, it is on the ground floor with private entrance.