QUES: Similar to any other storage drives Kingston memory card is prone to frequent data loss issues

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CORRECTED: Similar to any other storage drives, Kingston memory card is prone to frequent data loss issues.

QUES: Unintentional deletion Sometimes you may accidentally delete some files on external hard drive using ShiftDelete key combination on Windows OS Files deleted in this manner will bypass the recycle bin so a chance of restoring them from bin vanishes

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CORRECTED: Unintentional deletion: Sometimes you may accidentally delete some files on external hard drive using "Shift+Delete" key combination on Windows OS. Files deleted in this manner will bypass the recycle bin, so a chance of restoring them from bin vanishes.

QUES: In the creation of the heavens and earth and of living creatures including man are Signs

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CORRECTED:
In the creation of the heavens and earth, and of living creatures, including man, are Signs