QUES: For several months now their product has been working in mission critical environment flawlessly

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CORRECTED: For several months now, their product has been working in mission critical environment flawlessly.

QUES: During the voyage the golf enthusiasts play in the squares of the GC and the Mazagan Golf Club de Soleil both Morocco sowie auf dem Course Costa Teguise Lanzarote Fuerteventura Golf Club and an exciting golf tournament

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CORRECTED: During the voyage, the golf enthusiasts play in the squares of the GC and the Mazagan Golf Club de Soleil (both Morocco) sowie auf dem Course Costa Teguise (Lanzarote) Fuerteventura Golf Club and an exciting golf tournament.

QUES: You can find high quality treatments and affordable services which is why this city is such a great destination for womens health

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CORRECTED:
You can find high quality treatments and affordable services, which is why this city is such a great destination for women's health.