QUES: Grub the Linux bootloader would be installed last this way and pick up all three operating systems exactly the way I wanted it to be

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Grub, the Linux bootloader would be installed last this way and pick up all three operating systems, exactly the way I wanted it to be.

QUES: 8 But the LORDs word came to me saying You have shed blood abundantly and have made great wars You shall not build a house to my name because you have shed much blood on the earth in my sight

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: 8 But the LORD's word came to me, saying, 'You have shed blood abundantly, and have made great wars. You shall not build a house to my name, because you have shed much blood on the earth in my sight.

QUES: Model No 1061 Polished Brass Adjustable Stand Pedestal Vanity Makeup Mirror Modern Tabletop Magnifying Vanity Mirror which is named outline free standing shaving cosmetic mirror allowing its use on any table top surface

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Model No.: 1061 Polished Brass Adjustable Stand Pedestal Vanity Makeup Mirror. Modern Tabletop Magnifying Vanity Mirror which is named outline free standing shaving /cosmetic mirror allowing its use on any table top surface.