QUESTION: Fix punctuation: In 2007 Sundsvall Pride was held for the first time in connection with Sundsvalls Gatufest street fair
ANS: In 2007 Sundsvall Pride was held for the first time in connection with Sundsvall's Gatufest (street fair).

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some societal costs of antisocial personality disorder like the suffering endured by victims of the crimes committed by people with this disorder are clear However when people with ASPD are the charismatic leaders of religious cults the devastation they can create is often not known unless and until a catastrophe results
ANS: Some societal costs of antisocial personality disorder, like the suffering endured by victims of the crimes committed by people with this disorder, are clear. However, when people with ASPD are the charismatic leaders of religious cults, the devastation they can create is often not known unless and until a catastrophe results.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Rousseau had the call to let the feeling reign and it is considered the first grant under an approach
ANS: Rousseau had the call to let the feeling reign and it is considered the first grant under an approach.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: This new monetary system is to be one in which a series of national reserves are globally to replace the dollar
ANS:
This new monetary system is to be one in which a series of national reserves are globally to replace the dollar.