Question: It is suitable for use in both production facilities and offices
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Fixed: [It is suitable for use in both production facilities and offices.]

Question: Connects or relates two or more entities
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Fixed: [Connects (or relates) two or more entities.]

Question: Rent a car in Liverpool with a 70 discount
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Fixed: [Rent a car in Liverpool with a 70% discount]

Question: While the Revolution ensured the political triumph of the bourgeoisie in France in England Watt Arkwright Cartwright and others initiated an industrial revolution which completely shifted the centre of gravity of economic power
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Fixed:
[While the Revolution ensured the political triumph of the bourgeoisie in France, in England Watt, Arkwright, Cartwright, and others, initiated an industrial revolution, which completely shifted the centre of gravity of economic power.]