IN: When I saw her , tears immediately swarmed my eyes . She laid there expressionless , motionless on her right . She stared at us blankly as we talked to her and touched her cold arms , as if she could n't recognize any one of us . She was a very loud person , impatient more often than not .
What was the problem with the person the narrator was visiting ?

OUT: The person was suffering the after - effects of having a stroke .

IN: This is n't just a little joke anymore , or me being stupid . I ' m serious if you do n't love me or care about me enough to give it your all than your not worth it . Because I gave you all of me and its rediculous how I ' m the one being blamed for all this .
What may be a plausible reason I am telling them that ?

OUT: I am breaking up with them .

IN: The interested lady sat on a bench near the outside of CS , she could see the entrance but not into the alcove . Mike went in ahead of us and explained to an associate on our side of the counter what was happening . I bent down and explained to Jayden that the lady worked at Wal - Mart ( see her name badge ? ) and that she would help him find his mom and make sure nothing happened to him while they waited .
Why would this woman be willing to help the wayward kid ?

OUT:
She is required to as part of her job .