IN: I took her out about every fifteen minutes just to be safe . ( I think I ' m a little paranoid ) . So yesterday I decide to let him have a little freedom in the house . I close off the kid 's rooms and let him check everything out .
How would a reader describe the traits of the narrator ?

OUT: They are cautious .

IN: It had been as if some veil had been pulled between our eyes , caught in mid glance dragging back years of buried intrigue . I had walked into her room a year and a half before , her silly drunk , me responsibly sober . We had shared some inside joke , some joke that had survived what I had done to her .
What may happen after he is done recollecting what happened ?

OUT: He may apologize to her .

IN: Right now , until I ' ve saved enough to buy the fabric that I need , they are covered with the backs of old quilts . The fabric I have chosen for slipcovers is very washable , and ... WHITE ! I know , it sounds crazy with four children to use white , but I can bleach white ! They are slipcovers , after all . Thankfully , my mother and I both sew , so this will be a winter project that we will tackle once it is too cold outside to do anymore painting projects .
What may be my favorite arts and crafts

OUT:
Painting