Question: Youre receiving this email because you signed up for it at artofmanlinesscom
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Fixed: [You're receiving this email because you signed up for it at artofmanliness.com]

Question: For they have shed the blood of saints and prophets and thou hast given them blood to drink for they are worthy
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Fixed: [For they have shed the blood of saints and prophets, and thou hast given them blood to drink; for they are worthy.]

Question: The mind is filled with thoughts and desires are the way of the right concentration
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Fixed: [The mind is filled with thoughts and desires are the way of the "right concentration".]

Question: About myself If You feel alone visit me anytime and I will make sure You cheer up If you want to know in advance what turns me off Rude people turn me off
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Fixed:
[About myself: If You feel alone visit me anytime and I will make sure You cheer up. If you want to know in advance what turns me off: Rude people turn me off.]