Add punctuation: This makes it possible to perform detailed analysis and change key parameters like emissivity or temperature range either in the field on the camera or in the office using the PC software
A: This makes it possible to perform detailed analysis and change key parameters like emissivity or temperature range either in the field on the camera or in the office using the PC software.

Add punctuation: Edith had lived in Paris for some time and they had both been in Paris several times
A: Edith had lived in Paris for some time, and they had both been in Paris several times.

Add punctuation: A few examples from the book
A:
A few examples from the book: