Add punctuation: Description Creamcoloured courser in an unusual green desert
A: Description: Cream-coloured courser in an unusual green desert

Add punctuation: The mans most valued possession was his sword
A: The man's most valued possession was his sword.

Add punctuation: To assert your rights for data protection breaches as well as for suggestions and complaints regarding the processing of your personal data we recommend that you contact our group commissioner for data protection
A:
To assert your rights, for data protection breaches as well as for suggestions and complaints regarding the processing of your personal data we recommend that you contact our group commissioner for data protection: