QUES: Cash dispenser No It is possible to withdraw cash on board

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CORRECTED: Cash dispenser: No. It is possible to withdraw cash on board.

QUES: For more than 35 years now every year anew the HANSAPARK team under the management of Christoph Andreas Leicht has delighted the parks many visitors

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CORRECTED: For more than 35 years now, every year anew, the HANSA-PARK team under the management of Christoph Andreas Leicht has delighted the park's many visitors.

QUES: Im also taking bookings now for Christmas exhibitions so please do contact me if you would like work for your shop or gallery

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CORRECTED:
I'm also taking bookings now for Christmas exhibitions so please do contact me if you would like work for your shop or gallery.