Text: what happened was this: eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.

Correct capitalization: What happened was this: Eve who had been created should die again, symbolically speaking.

Text: lets discuss some of them:

Correct capitalization: Lets discuss some of them:

Text: i hope that you can help me, i have visited your facebook profile and i hope someday both of raspberry pi as you know. a greeting and thanks.

Correct capitalization: I hope that you can help me, I have visited your facebook profile and I hope someday both of Raspberry Pi as you know. A greeting and thanks.

Text: i would go to work and try to hide it and try to look sober.

Correct capitalization:
I would go to work and try to hide it and try to look sober.