QUES: His manifestations are thus to be expressed as manifestations of utter pleasantness to the same degree as he has acquired mastery over the energies

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: His manifestations are thus to be expressed as manifestations of utter pleasantness to the same degree as he has acquired mastery over the energies.

QUES: That is why I am writing to you and Im very interested in helping to complete this project in your organization and wanted to know if there is any possibility to accomplish this

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: That is why I am writing to you, and I'm very interested in helping to complete this project in your organization, and wanted to know if there is any possibility to accomplish this.

QUES: Room facilities Bathroom Carpeted Electric kettle Heating Satellite Channels Shower TV TeaCoffee Maker Toilet

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Room facilities: Bathroom, Carpeted, Electric kettle, Heating, Satellite Channels, Shower, TV, Tea/Coffee Maker, Toilet