IN: On their return, all but two Joshua and Caleb misrepresented what they had seen, giving an evil report.
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OUT: on their return, all but two joshua and caleb misrepresented what they had seen, giving an evil report.

IN: Strategies and business models As an increasing part of all transactions will be mediated by platforms, any company will need to consider how it positions itself on or outside of available platforms.
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OUT: strategies and business models as an increasing part of all transactions will be mediated by platforms, any company will need to consider how it positions itself on or outside of available platforms.

IN: Furthermore, on most patterns there's also recommendations on how to make the interface accessible.
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OUT: furthermore, on most patterns there's also recommendations on how to make the interface accessible.

IN: Other than hard disk drives, this software can also be useful to recover Mac files from various other storage devices that are used in Mac OS X. Memory card is storage device which can be used in digital cameras, camcorders, cell phones, etc.It varies in storage capacity depending upon the models.
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other than hard disk drives, this software can also be useful to recover mac files from various other storage devices that are used in mac os x. memory card is storage device which can be used in digital cameras, camcorders, cell phones, etc.it varies in storage capacity depending upon the models.