Question: With courses from LinguaShop you can pick up enough Albanian to hold a conversation and read simple books in as little as 2 to 4 weeks
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Fixed: [With courses from LinguaShop, you can pick up enough Albanian to hold a conversation and read simple books, in as little as 2 to 4 weeks.]

Question: The most important many would say and it would be hard to argue with that although of course everyone contributed to one degree or another
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Fixed: [The most important many would say and it would be hard to argue with that, although of course everyone contributed to one degree or another.]

Question: This studio apartment in Las Palmas de Gran Canaria offers lift and internet
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Fixed: [This studio apartment in Las Palmas de Gran Canaria offers lift and internet.]

Question: Similarly frequent alcohol consumption increases the risk of cancer of the tonsil
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Fixed:
[Similarly, frequent alcohol consumption increases the risk of cancer of the tonsil.]