Add punctuation: When process will be finished you will be able to open the PST file in Outlook
A: When process will be finished, you will be able to open the PST file in Outlook.

Add punctuation: You may observe a red tumorous mass bulging out of the surface membrane of the reproductive organ or on the reproductive organ
A: You may observe a red, tumorous mass bulging out of the surface membrane of the reproductive organ, or on the reproductive organ.

Add punctuation: However through dialogue the authorities can also focus on the areas which relate to the whole life cycle of the product eg the manufacturing of raw materials the employment phase and the disposal of the product
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However, through dialogue the authorities can also focus on the areas, which relate to the whole life cycle of the product, e.g. the manufacturing of raw materials, the employment phase and the disposal of the product.