QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If you want to know in advance what turns me off When I am tired
ANS: If you want to know in advance what turns me off: When I am tired

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Theres also an alternative explanation Maybe Gotthard von Hansen meant what he wrote ie Brger and not Brgermeister Brger means citizen or citizens
ANS: There's also an alternative explanation: Maybe Gotthard von Hansen meant what he wrote, i.e. "Burger" and not "Burgermeister"? "Burger" means citizen - or citizens.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Rating 8 5 Very good based on 10 evaluations
ANS: Rating 8 .5 Very good based on 10 evaluations

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Then scripture says they two went on same verse
ANS:
Then, scripture says, "...they two went on" (same verse).