Question: Since March 1917 when the roaring torrents of workmen and soldiers beating upon the Tauride Palace compelled the reluctant Imperial Duma to assume the supreme power in Russia it was the masses of the people workers soldiers and peasants which forced every change in the course of the Revolution
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Fixed: [Since March, 1917, when the roaring torrents of workmen and soldiers beating upon the Tauride Palace compelled the reluctant Imperial Duma to assume the supreme power in Russia, it was the masses of the people, workers, soldiers and peasants, which forced every change in the course of the Revolution.]

Question: Andrewhiggins 40 years old United Kingdom
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Fixed: [Andrewhiggins , 40 years old, United Kingdom]

Question: The standard requires that those who need some documentdata shall have access to it Changes to documents and data shall be controlled
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Fixed: [The standard requires that those who need some document/data shall have access to it. Changes to documents and data shall be controlled.]

Question: This draft law archaic in its conception cut out many rights in Spain it negatively affects broad sectors of society endangers the free culture and questioning the functioning of internet by limiting the appointment and the link to a purely commercial activity
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[This draft law, archaic in its conception, cut out many rights in Spain, it negatively affects broad sectors of society, endangers the free culture and questioning the functioning of internet, by limiting the appointment and the link to a purely commercial activity.]