Text: beginning in 1899, the life of anthony gallo was centered not only on his faith in god, but on his love for others.

Correct capitalization: Beginning in 1899, the life of Anthony Gallo was centered not only on his faith in God, but on his love for others.

Text: inaccurate ratios shown in graphs.

Correct capitalization: Inaccurate ratios shown in graphs.

Text: registration 14 december 2006 11:29

Correct capitalization: Registration 14 December 2006 11:29

Text: about a year after becoming a draftsman, monge was given a task which allowed him to use his mathematical skill to attack the task he was given. asked to draw up a fortification plan which prevented an enemy from either seeing or firing at a military position no matter what the position of the enemy, monge devised his own graphical method to construct such a fortification rather than use the complicated methods then available.

Correct capitalization:
About a year after becoming a draftsman, Monge was given a task which allowed him to use his mathematical skill to attack the task he was given. Asked to draw up a fortification plan which prevented an enemy from either seeing or firing at a military position no matter what the position of the enemy, Monge devised his own graphical method to construct such a fortification rather than use the complicated methods then available.