QUES: All the cities of those kings and all the kings of them did Joshua take and he struck them with the edge of the sword and utterly destroyed them as Moses the servant of Yahweh commanded

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CORRECTED: All the cities of those kings, and all the kings of them, did Joshua take, and he struck them with the edge of the sword, and utterly destroyed them; as Moses the servant of Yahweh commanded.

QUES: It is a now issue We cannot continue in the way that we have done so far

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CORRECTED: It is a 'now' issue. We cannot continue in the way that we have done so far.

QUES: The Jews therefore answered him What sign do you show to us seeing that you do these things

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CORRECTED:
The Jews therefore answered him, 'What sign do you show to us, seeing that you do these things?'