Add punctuation: 24 No my sons for it is not a good report that I hear You make the LORDs people disobey
A: 24 No, my sons; for it is not a good report that I hear! You make the LORD's people disobey.

Add punctuation: Following the success and wide diffusion of the two editions held and we count on you in this third proposal to internationally Spanish associations Spanish photographic art crucible
A: Following the success and wide diffusion of the two editions held and we count on you in this third proposal to internationally Spanish associations, Spanish photographic art crucible.

Add punctuation: 736 GBP General English Full Time English Course 25 lessons per week 60 minutes per lesson
A:
736 GBP General English Full Time (English Course - 25 lessons per week - 60 minutes per lesson)