Add punctuation: Countless artists have since sought to capture the world Tolkien described attempting to bring the creatures people buildings cities and landscapes to life
A: Countless artists have since sought to capture the world Tolkien described, attempting to bring the creatures, people, buildings, cities and landscapes to life.

Add punctuation: Recycling doesnt always have to be about sorting and tossing into bins
A: Recycling doesn't always have to be about sorting and tossing into bins.

Add punctuation: The weight is down with more than 20 kilo and his life is now run by a tour plan
A:
The weight is down with more than 20 kilo and his life is now run by a tour plan.