IN: there is some appeal of course , but it is nt all its cracked up to be . i guess except for the movies / tv factor . walking down melrose and bumping into jeff goldblum was pretty cool .
What may be a reason for their trip ?

OUT: They wanted to see what Hollywood is like .

IN: I really should go live in the world I ' m writing about , and bring them with me . Sometimes I feel such enormous guilt . Have I done what I set out to do ?
What is the primary source of the narrator 's deep anxiety ?

OUT: They feel they have been failures .

IN: As I was blog surfing this morning , I came across this information about Marsha 's family . I do n't know this family at all , but they just lost their 3 year old son . I have a precious 3 year old son of my own and I just ca n't stop crying . Ca n't imagine what they must be going through .
What may have happened while they were reading Marsha 's family ?

OUT:
They were thinking about their own son .