QUES: Some people will have a violent allergic reaction only to raw or undercooked fish

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Some people will have a violent allergic reaction only to raw or undercooked fish.

QUES: Worldaxis formed by the three bright stars Canopus Sirius and Lyra located on a straight line across the sky was known by many peoples

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: World-axis - formed by the three bright stars, Canopus, Sirius, and Lyra, located on a straight line across the sky - was known by many peoples.

QUES: And this evolution also involves some change in the management chip and machine programming

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
And this evolution also involves some change in the management chip and machine programming.