Question: These technologies help ensure that your data is safe secure and only available to you and to those you provided authorized access However no data transmission over the Internet or information storage technology can be guaranteed to be 100 secure
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Fixed: [These technologies help ensure that your data is safe, secure, and only available to you and to those you provided authorized access. However, no data transmission over the Internet or information storage technology can be guaranteed to be 100% secure.]

Question: Ok so who is missing from the Poker Hall of Fame First off I feel there should be different sections of the Hall of Fame One for contributors and one for players along with a wing for women and international players
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Fixed: [Ok, so who is missing from the Poker Hall of Fame? First off, I feel there should be different sections of the Hall of Fame: One for contributors and one for players, along with a wing for women and international players.]

Question: Read also 8 impressive Chinese smartphones youve never heard of
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Fixed: [Read also: 8 impressive Chinese smartphones you've never heard of]

Question: reduction of public sector spending including wage payments
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Fixed:
[reduction of public sector spending, including wage payments]