QUES: First in allowing the men to marry out of the plantation you give them an uncontrolable right to be frequently absent

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: First - in allowing the men to marry out of the plantation, you give them an uncontrolable right to be frequently absent

QUES: Accommodation in Senj on fantastic position

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Accommodation in Senj, on fantastic position.

QUES: Thyme Thymus vulgaris can be taken as a tea a couple of times a day for relieving a sore throat

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Thyme, Thymus vulgaris, can be taken as a tea a couple of times a day for relieving a sore throat.