Add punctuation: 1610 She went and brought word to those that had been with him who were grieving and weeping
A: 16:10 *She* went and brought word to those that had been with him, [who were] grieving and weeping.

Add punctuation: Join date 30 July 2013
A: Join date: 30 July 2013

Add punctuation: This does not mean of course that the realities in the cosmic glimpses become facts for other beings
A:
This does not mean, of course, that the realities in the cosmic glimpses become facts for other beings.