Q: If twenty thousand dollars a year if they're lucky i wouldn't do it for that, can we say that "Twenty thousand dollars a year if they're lucky, i would not do it for that amount."?

A: yes

Q: If There are monuments that you can ignore and those you have to look at twice, and then there is the Eiffel Tower., can we say that "There are structures that you don't really notice and some that makes you look again, but then, there is the Eiffel Tower."?

A: yes

Q: If One of the whipmasters went in to beat them into submission., can we say that "A whipmaster beat them into submission."?

A: yes

Q: If Although the term value-subtracted has been used in specialized contexts for some years, it is acquiring traction in public parlance largely because of dislocations in the former Communist bloc., can we say that "The term value-subtracted is gaining traction in public parlance."?

A:
yes