Text: if they proceed with the message and format hard drive partition.

Correct capitalization: If they proceed with the message and format hard drive partition.

Text: i tried to download a package listed in one of the security advisories, but i got a 'file not found' error.

Correct capitalization: I tried to download a package listed in one of the security advisories, but I got a 'file not found' error.

Text: one of the advantages with lithium is there long storage time, they can be stored for 10 years.

Correct capitalization: One of the advantages with Lithium is there long storage time, they can be stored for 10 years.

Text: description: ice cream and candy factory game kids will love this flash game! take your step into an ice cream and candy factory and make up some delicious treats for all the ice-cream and candy lovers out there! a fantastic game that will have your kid smiling!

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Description: Ice Cream And Candy Factory game Kids will love this flash game! Take your step into an ice cream and candy factory and make up some delicious treats for all the ice-cream and candy lovers out there! A fantastic game that will have your kid smiling!