QUES: Come Saturday I had my tools and my materials but standing in front of my first window I realized Id forgotten most of the little tips and tricks Id learned earlier in the week

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Come Saturday, I had my tools and my materials, but standing in front of my first window, I realized I'd forgotten most of the little tips and tricks I'd learned earlier in the week.

QUES: Most parents feel frightened when they learn that their child has a serious disease

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Most parents feel frightened when they learn that their child has a serious disease.

QUES: Martinus The Eternal World Picture vol 2 sect 2511 Front page

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Martinus: The Eternal World Picture, vol. 2, sect. 25.11. Front page