The most effective field commander for the Persian side was Memnon the leader of the Greek mercenaries fighting for the Persian Empire Memnon was not in favor of an immediate direct confrontation with Alexanders forces Memnon favored a scorched earth strategy with sporadic harrassment

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The most effective field commander for the Persian side was Memnon, the leader of the Greek mercenaries fighting for the Persian Empire. Memnon was not in favor of an immediate, direct confrontation with Alexander's forces. Memnon favored a scorched earth strategy with sporadic harrassment.