Text: the penalty for the sin of the angels is not death, as it is for man.

Correct capitalization: The penalty for the sin of the angels is not death, as it is for man.

Text: in this game, you have the opportunity to makeup dulce maria. now it's your chance to be the personal designer of the most beautiful and amusing soap actress.

Correct capitalization: In this game, you have the opportunity to makeup Dulce Maria. Now it's your chance to be the personal designer of the most beautiful and amusing soap actress.

Text: possibility of comparing new and old products

Correct capitalization: Possibility of comparing new and old products

Text: the spaces are available at paid multi-storey car parks p1 and p2, and are close to the lifts.

Correct capitalization:
The spaces are available at paid multi-storey car parks P1 and P2, and are close to the lifts.