QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Some collectors like the thrill of owning an illegal item
ANS: Some collectors like the "thrill" of owning an illegal item.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: For US crew members the requirements are different again in particular as compensation in the United States Jones Act can be considerably higher than that normally awarded in Europe It is therefore very important to assess the risk properly not only buying the right insurance but ensuring that you have the correct level of insurance especially when it comes to crew liability
ANS: For US crew members the requirements are different again, in particular as compensation in the United States (Jones Act) can be considerably higher than that normally awarded in Europe. It is therefore very important to assess the risk properly, not only buying the right insurance but ensuring that you have the correct level of insurance, especially when it comes to crew liability.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 8 Consolidated Master Budget report combines all divisional budgets and actuals into a year to date summary with consolidated differences and variances for each revenue row and expense category
ANS: 8. Consolidated Master Budget report combines all divisional budgets and actuals into a year to date summary with consolidated differences and variances for each revenue row and expense category.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: American Mink Rodent small mammals
ANS:
American Mink Rodent, small mammals