Text: the thrill is gone baby, the thrill is gone away from me

Correct capitalization: The thrill is gone Baby, the thrill is gone away from me

Text: winter is an especially good time to visit, when the fells are covered in soft white snow and the spectacular northern lights illuminate the inky black heavens.

Correct capitalization: Winter is an especially good time to visit, when the fells are covered in soft white snow and the spectacular Northern Lights illuminate the inky black heavens.

Text: is the color of independence and desire for adventure.

Correct capitalization: Is the color of independence and desire for adventure.

Text: for i reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to be compared with the glory which shall be revealed in us" (romans 8:14-18) .

Correct capitalization:
For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to be compared with the glory which shall be revealed in us" (Romans 8:14-18) .