QUESTION: Fix punctuation: While comprehensive localization is often preferable straightforward translation will sometimes suffice
ANS: While comprehensive localization is often preferable, straightforward translation will sometimes suffice.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 105 But with many of them God was not well pleased for they were overthrown in the wilderness
ANS: 10:5 But with many of them God was not well pleased: for they were overthrown in the wilderness.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It was also from here that the Revoutionary Tribunal demanded aristocrats heads in 1793
ANS: It was also from here that the Revoutionary Tribunal demanded aristocrats' heads in 1793.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Avoid sharp edges of the dental cement that may harm the animal and remove them during hardening Figure 9A and B
ANS:
Avoid sharp edges of the dental cement that may harm the animal and remove them during hardening (Figure 9A and B).