QUES: If you know how to communicate you will be attractive

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: If you know how to communicate, you will be attractive.

QUES: Both Zenit and Zoogin were very affectionate open and forthcoming kittens

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Both Zenit and Zoogin were very affectionate, open and forthcoming kittens.

QUES: Sublime impressions from a culture comprising penetrating spirit thus having here found its expression in spiritual architecture and art surpassing most of what is known from any known civilization

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Sublime impressions from a culture comprising penetrating spirit - thus having here found its expression in spiritual architecture and art, surpassing most of what is known from any known civilization.