Add spaces: claspedinherhandshergold-embroideredshoes,

Answer: clasped in her hands her gold-embroidered shoes,

Add spaces: Expresscheck-in/-out(6)

Answer: Express check-in/ -out (6)

Add spaces: Theperson'sbreathingmaybeeasier;hisskintonemayimprove;hemaysimplylookbetterormorecomfortablethanwhenyoustartedthatsession.

Answer:
The person's breathing may be easier; his skin tone may improve; he may simply look better or more comfortable than when you started that session.