QUES: Instead God can be given control in my life and then it is no longer my lusts or natural tendencies the sin in my flesh that control me

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Instead, God can be given control in my life, and then it is no longer my lusts or natural tendencies, the sin in my flesh, that control me.

QUES: Fredericia Seamens Home Hotel is located in the beautiful city environment where there is only 200 meters until you are in the center

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Fredericia Seamen's Home & Hotel is located in the beautiful city environment where there is only 200 meters until you are in the center.

QUES: Pencils crayons pencil leads pastels drawing charcoals writing or drawing chalks and tailors chalks excl articles of heading 9608

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Pencils, crayons, pencil leads, pastels, drawing charcoals, writing or drawing chalks and tailors' chalks (excl. articles of heading 9608)