Again Tyre the capital of Phoenicia was the proud merchant city of ancient times and Venice the capital of Venetia held the same grand position in the middle ages Is there not in addition some clear connection between Venetia and Phoenicia

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Again, Tyre, the capital of Phoenicia, was the proud merchant city of ancient times, and Venice, the capital of Venetia, held the same grand position in the middle ages. Is there not in addition some clear connection between Venetia and Phoenicia?
Just coming to this discussion late and wasnt sure where to put it but wondering on this

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Just coming to this discussion late and wasn't sure where to put it but wondering on this:
10 In our previous message we stated that all persons who perished in the quake and tsunami received exactly the customized care they needed

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10. In our previous message, we stated that all persons who perished in the quake and tsunami received exactly the customized care they needed.