Date of birth 2nd person

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Date of birth 2nd person: *
A summertime view of a herd of fallow deers Dama dama on the green meadow

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A summertime view of a herd of fallow deers (Dama dama) on the green meadow.
This area is also where most bars discos and shops are located on the sunset strip along the coast

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This area is also where most bars, discos and shops are located - on the sunset strip along the coast.