Is the following sentence linguistically acceptable?
This girl in the red coat will put it and a picture of Bill on your desk before tomorrow.

acceptable

Is the following sentence linguistically acceptable?
The person with whom he felt most comfortable left.

acceptable

Is the following sentence linguistically acceptable?
He is proud of his son's passing the bar exam.

acceptable

Is the following sentence linguistically acceptable?
Every senator becomes more corrupt, the more lobbyists he talks to.
acceptable