What is the version of the following sentence with correct punctuation?

We wanted to go on a beach tripto the beach and what better beach that the small deserted one could be better So we sailed ashore and left the dinghy and walked toward the beach
We wanted to go on a beach trip(/to the beach) and what better beach that the small deserted one could be better. So we sailed ashore and left the dinghy and walked to(ward) the beach.