QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Those tools if you import the object inside Second Life it starts a session with the LMS and it takes care of the communication without any external web APIs
ANS: Those tools, if you import the object inside Second Life, it starts a session with the LMS and it takes care of the communication, without any external web APIs.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: He sought to give the responses obtained by him the most binding public form which would commit Jews everywhere and for all the future to the undertakings given by their elders by desiring that the Great Sanhedrin be convened
ANS: He sought to give the responses obtained by him the most binding public form, which would commit Jews everywhere and for all the future to the undertakings given by their elders, by desiring that the Great Sanhedrin be convened!

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: We distributed flyers various places like at the cultureday to recruit new participants
ANS: We distributed flyers various places, like at the culture-day, to recruit new participants.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: It was wonderful to see the shining waters of Tasiusaq Fjord even though it had been necessary for us to carry our gear over land to get there
ANS:
It was wonderful to see the shining waters of Tasiusaq Fjord, even though it had been necessary for us to carry our gear over land to get there.