QUESTION: Fix punctuation: If he finds the true answer he will find also that he cannot really transfer it to another person but only its idea its mental shadow
ANS: If he finds the true answer, he will find also that he cannot really transfer it to another person but only its idea, its mental shadow.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: We will publish an initial general outline when we announce the Foundations technical leadership which we intend to do very soon
ANS: We will publish an initial general outline when we announce the Foundation's technical leadership, which we intend to do very soon.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Nickelodeon with about 65 million subscribers has by far the largest share of the fourto11yearold TV audience in America and also is expanding rapidly into Europe
ANS: Nickelodeon, with about 65 million subscribers, has by far the largest share of the four-to-11-year-old TV audience in America and also is expanding rapidly into Europe.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: You have the right to request a copy of the information that we hold about you If you would like a copy of some or all of your personal information please send an email to hwnhwnorguk or write to Barbara Cage at HealthWORKS Newcastle Health Resource Centre Adelaide Terrace Benwell Newcastle upon Tyne NE4 8BE
ANS:
You have the right to request a copy of the information that we hold about you. If you would like a copy of some or all of your personal information, please send an email to hwn@hwn.org.uk or write to Barbara Cage at HealthWORKS Newcastle, Health Resource Centre, Adelaide Terrace, Benwell, Newcastle upon Tyne, NE4 8BE.