QUES: Write name and email for your acquaintances that you want to send a link of the press release to William Christophy is pleased to announce the release of the Drumming Encyclopedia til

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CORRECTED: Write name and e-mail for your acquaintances that you want to send a link of the press release to "William Christophy is pleased to announce the release of the Drumming Encyclopedia" til.

QUES: Viewpoints on egg donation vary widely and only you can decide whether who where and when to tell

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CORRECTED: Viewpoints on egg donation vary widely, and only you can decide whether, who, where and when to tell.

QUES: This may not be easy because your passions are especially strong and your will particularly powerful at the moment

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CORRECTED:
This may not be easy, because your passions are especially strong and your will particularly powerful at the moment.