Question: Adding to this you can restore media files from Mac volumes portable hard drives memory cards XD SD and CF iPods DSLR cameras and many others on Mac OS X
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Fixed: [Adding to this, you can restore media files from Mac volumes, portable hard drives, memory cards (XD, SD and CF), iPods, DSLR cameras and many others on Mac OS X.]

Question: Because of this providing top quality customer service is crucial to ensuring a business survives
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Fixed: [Because of this, providing top quality customer service is crucial to ensuring a business survives.]

Question: 2 The specific question shall be put to the referendum in the form worded in the initiative
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Fixed: [(2) The specific question shall be put to the referendum in the form worded in the initiative.]

Question: For fun For health For Competition To be fit To lose weight
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Fixed:
[For fun, For health, For Competition, To be fit, To lose weight]