IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
How to bring up a loyal dog
Research breeds of dogs.
If you're looking for a dog whose breed is known to be loyal, talk with local dog breeders or pet-store owners to find out which breeds they view as being the most loyal. Breeds that are commonly considered among the most loyal include: collies, boxers, brittanys, and labrador retrievers.
OPTIONS:
- Also research breeds such as norwegian, english or british golden retrievers. Contact breed groups in your local neighborhood.
- Try saying something like, " that dog isn't as friendly as most dogs i know. " steer clear of choosing between animals of a " dark-toned " breed.
- Since dogs have individual personalities, a dog of any breed can be a loyal, loving companion. However, some breeds are genetically more predisposed to be loyal than others.
- Keep in mind that most breeders will steer clear of purebred dogs. When looking at older dogs, the breed may be reputedly preferred over purebred dogs.

OUT: Since dogs have individual personalities, a dog of any breed can be a loyal, loving companion. However, some breeds are genetically more predisposed to be loyal than others.

IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
How to last through a sleepover with little kids
Once everyone has come, seat them and stay in the front.
Talk in a calm, polite manner, but be firm in your voice and posture. Look straight ahead to enforce it.
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- Let them bang off before you vote. That is your number one opinion: they should feel wanted and listened to by all the people they really care about.
- If the kids are trying to have fun, start trying to let them know they have your attention and you care. Serve them some other things that they may like.
- Give them a break in the middle of the slumber/wake cycle. ( optional, but helpful! ) Organize your room so you can be quiet during the sleepover.
- Tell the guests the activities that you will be doing, and any options they may have. Let them know what they can and can't do.

OUT: Tell the guests the activities that you will be doing, and any options they may have. Let them know what they can and can't do.

IN: Write the next sentence in this paragraph:
A marching band is in the midle o street. Behind the marching band a fire truck is in the parade. people on sidewalks
OPTIONS:
- are watching the parade.
- are in the street.
- and campodes dodge the fire trucks.
- and sidewalks gather and get ready to start a sidewalk fire.

OUT:
are watching the parade.