Therefore it is with great pleasure and pride that Im presenting a dachshund line which starts somewhere in Germany in 1866 when a red smooth dachshund lady saw the light of day for the first time

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Therefore, it is with great pleasure and pride that I'm presenting a dachshund line which starts somewhere in Germany in 1866, when a red, smooth dachshund lady saw the light of day for the first time.