QUES: The most obvious way in which you and Brad affect each other is through the activation of each others emotions and desires

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The most obvious way in which you and Brad affect each other is through the activation of each other's emotions and desires.

QUES: Offering free WiFi this airconditioned room features a flatscreen TV a minibar and a private bathroom with a shower

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Offering free Wi-Fi, this air-conditioned room features a flat-screen TV, a minibar and a private bathroom with a shower.

QUES: This kind of travel and experience is an important part of the homes activities but of course the work centres around the firm boundaries in Uummannaq where there is a constant lively buzz

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
This kind of travel and experience is an important part of the home's activities, but of course the work centres around the firm boundaries in Uummannaq, where there is a constant, lively buzz.