Please capitalize where necessary: it is important to know the whole story behind the things we surround ourselves with and enjoy - it is the total experience and pleasure that counts.
A: It is important to know the whole story behind the things we surround ourselves with and enjoy - it is the total experience and pleasure that counts.

Please capitalize where necessary: 7:1and after this i saw four angels standing upon the four corners of the earth, holding fast the four winds of the earth, that no wind might blow upon the earth, nor upon the sea, nor upon any tree.
A: 7:1And after this I saw four angels standing upon the four corners of the earth, holding fast the four winds of the earth, that no wind might blow upon the earth, nor upon the sea, nor upon any tree.

Please capitalize where necessary: right: the waldemar julsrud collection, found 7 miles away, about the same age: ignored by science
A: Right: the Waldemar Julsrud collection, found 7 miles away, about the same age: ignored by science

Please capitalize where necessary: with lock poker's player base, and a marketing push centered around the launch of the network, revolution gaming shot past merge gaming as the largest us-friendly online poker network.
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With Lock Poker's player base, and a marketing push centered around the launch of the network, Revolution Gaming shot past Merge Gaming as the largest US-friendly online poker network.