Add punctuation: 1 REBELby MAC see it in an outfit here This color is one Ive really grown to love ever since I bought it
A: 1: REBELby MAC (see it in an outfit here) This color is one I've really grown to love ever since I bought it.

Add punctuation: Animations and daily updates on Greenland ice sheet surface conditions glacier movements and the contribution to global sea level
A: Animations and daily updates on Greenland ice sheet surface conditions, glacier movements, and the contribution to global sea level.

Add punctuation: 5 And strangers shall stand and feed your flocks and the sons of the alien shall be your plowmen and your vinedressers
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5 And strangers shall stand and feed your flocks, and the sons of the alien shall be your plowmen and your vinedressers.