QUES: There will be a day when the last chemtrail is drawn and then karma will decide how things will be settled for everyone who was involved in this black operation

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: There will be a day when the last chemtrail is drawn, and then karma will decide how things will be settled for everyone who was involved in this black operation.

QUES: Many teams use our tools and equipments at events such as the UAE Desert Challenge in Dubai or the world famous legendary rallye DAKAR

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Many teams use our tools and equipments at events such as the UAE Desert Challenge in Dubai or the world famous legendary rallye "DAKAR".

QUES: 9 When the dew fell on the camp in the night the manna fell on it

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
9 When the dew fell on the camp in the night, the manna fell on it.