1. His intention was to go beyond the '' photographic and stupid perfection of some painters '' to an intensity , born of color and linear rhythm .
2. His intention was to go beyond '' the linear perfection of some painters '' to an intensity born of color , photographic and silly rhythms .

no

1. Music is excellent with some great songs which are etched in everybody 's memory forever .
2. Music is great with some excellent songs , which are etched forever in everyone 's memory .

yes

1. Unlike professional astronomers , for many amateur astronomers , scientific research is usually not the '' main goal '' .
2. Scientific research is most often not the '' main '' goal for many amateur astronomers , unlike professional astronomers .
yes