QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Ask for your dressing to be removed gently and if you want to stop at any time during the procedure ask for a timeout break
ANS: Ask for your dressing to be removed gently and, if you want to stop at any time during the procedure, ask for a 'time-out' break.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Is this really possible Yes indeed
ANS: Is this really possible? Yes, indeed!

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: There are many different kinds of lighted makeup mirrors that are available to buy and they have many benefits for both men and women
ANS: There are many different kinds of lighted makeup mirrors that are available to buy and they have many benefits for both men and women.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: A full 80 of all Swedes over 15 years using alcohol sometimes and between 7 and 10 of people with serious alcohol problems
ANS:
A full 80% of all Swedes over 15 years using alcohol sometimes, and between 7 and 10% of people with serious alcohol problems.