Add punctuation: We concluded that on Saturday 8th of January would be an appropriate date for the shoot
A: We concluded that on Saturday 8:th of January would be an appropriate date for the shoot.

Add punctuation: industrial fixed castor from pressed steel plate fitting vulcanized elastic rubber tires precision ball bearing Wheel 100mm 150KG
A: industrial fixed castor from pressed steel, plate fitting, vulcanized elastic rubber tires, precision ball bearing, Wheel- 100mm, 150KG

Add punctuation: I will check your receipt number against my database and email you the download link Please give me a day or two to email you back as I will be a bit busy with all of this
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I will check your receipt number against my database and email you the download link. Please give me a day or two to email you back as I will be a bit busy with all of this. :)