Question: But what is fascinating is that often there are few who are working in the different departments t Ex the Princess Lilians Household
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Fixed: [But what is fascinating is that often there are few who are working in the different departments - t. Ex. the Princess Lilian's Household.]

Question: Bosch is also hard at work on the smart home Are the windows closed Did the stove get turned off is there enough milk for breakfast tomorrow
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Fixed: [Bosch is also hard at work on the smart home. Are the windows closed? Did the stove get turned off, is there enough milk for breakfast tomorrow?]

Question: Noticeably more megapixels photo
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Fixed: [Noticeably more megapixels (photo)]

Question: While the Revolution ensured the political triumph of the bourgeoisie in France in England Watt Arkwright Cartwright and others initiated an industrial revolution which completely shifted the centre of gravity of economic power
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Fixed:
[While the Revolution ensured the political triumph of the bourgeoisie in France, in England Watt, Arkwright, Cartwright, and others, initiated an industrial revolution, which completely shifted the centre of gravity of economic power.]