Here are some suggestions for the op-ed piece. One general comment: It may be a bit lengthy at this point. Also, have we decided whether it would be our op-ed piece? And one key point that is very commercially sensitive: The term "end the rate freeze" has very ominous implications for EES's book, depending on the timing of any such "end" in California. Thus my heavy-handed edits on that portion. Nice job, Jeannie. Best,
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edits to the op-ed