IN: I finally went to see it . And here is what I think : It 's okey movie but I like the ohter two better . At least they had something to do with Egypt .. This China thing was bit to much for my small brains .
Why do I enjoy the other movies instead of this one ?

OUT: I enjoyed the other two movies because they were related to Egypt not China .

IN: I need the new gate code , and alarm deactivating procedure , as I forget . It 's been a long while since I ' ve keyed in , and I have n't yet at the new building . I wrote to my landlady , because she all of this insurance stuff that takes care of things like this , and I did n't want to pay a big plumbing bill , or have her fight with me for not doing it her way .
Why is the narrator stuck on the outside of the apartment ?

OUT: The narrator is forgetful .

IN: It 's always great to have a new baby in the family . And he was really good , too , considering he was getting passed around all afternoon with no nap . Writing is finally going my way ! My fic for the Sirius / Remus Fuh - Q Fest is done and in the bag .
What do you think about the family 's new baby ?

OUT:
I think the infant behaves well .