QUES: During a period of moving to a village in Hermanus South Arica I stayed in a suburb about 8 km away

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CORRECTED: During a period of moving to a village in Hermanus South Arica, I stayed in a suburb about 8 km away!

QUES: The data is sent via SMS and GPRS the General Packet Radio Service an innovative mobile data service direct to your home PC or your mobile telephone

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CORRECTED: The data is sent via SMS and GPRS, the General Packet Radio Service, an innovative mobile data service, direct to your home PC or your mobile telephone.

QUES: HARO Parquet Glueless quick and easy to install and with perfect fit

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CORRECTED:
HARO Parquet - Glueless, quick and easy to install, and with perfect fit!