QUES: Room facilities Air conditioning Bathroom Linen Refrigerator Toilet paper TowelsSheets extra fee Upper floors accessible by stairs only

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CORRECTED: Room facilities: Air conditioning, Bathroom, Linen, Refrigerator, Toilet paper, Towels/Sheets (extra fee), Upper floors accessible by stairs only

QUES: Then he ran away and came to Jonkoping not long after he was gone

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CORRECTED: Then he ran away, and came to Jonkoping not long after he was gone.

QUES: And it helped me move in consciousness from feeling I was a victim of outside circumstances to understanding the part I played in creating my own life experiences

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CORRECTED:
And it helped me move (in consciousness) from feeling I was a victim of outside circumstances to understanding the part I played in creating my own life experiences.