Add punctuation: With the Kiev railway station to be exactly the mass minibus time on the road about 56 hours distance about 350 km
A: With the Kiev railway station to be exactly the mass minibus, time on the road about 5-6 hours (distance about 350 km).

Add punctuation: You will enjoy this version
A: You will enjoy this version!

Add punctuation: On purchasing a flight with Jet Time as airline you accept that Jet Time may receive store and use information about you that is necessary to carry out the flight and that we may provide this information to relevant authorities our agents and others who perform services in connection with the flight
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On purchasing a flight with Jet Time as airline, you accept that Jet Time may receive, store and use information about you that is necessary to carry out the flight, and that we may provide this information to relevant authorities, our agents and others who perform services in connection with the flight.