Text: apathy (state of indifference)

Correct capitalization: Apathy (state of indifference)

Text: she translates poetry and prose from french, german and english.

Correct capitalization: She translates poetry and prose from French, German and English.

Text: in this way they almost engrave the fates of their fellow prisoners into the plates, as a testimony from the depth of history passed on to posterity.

Correct capitalization: In this way they almost engrave the fates of their fellow prisoners into the plates, as a testimony from the depth of history passed on to posterity.

Text: on the other hand, he was sensitive to the realistic interpretations of kepler and galileo , who saw that hypotheses were not simply instrumental devices.

Correct capitalization:
On the other hand, he was sensitive to the realistic interpretations of Kepler and Galileo , who saw that hypotheses were not simply instrumental devices.