Add spaces: OnedayIwaswalkingsomelapsaroundmyfavoriteparkdreamingofthefuture.Istartedworkingsomenumbersinmyhead,thinkingofwhatmypossibleincomemightbe5yearsintothefuture.(Iwasn'tsomuchinterestedinthemoneyasmuchasthefreedomthatahealthyincomecanbring..)
One day I was walking some laps around my favorite park dreaming of the future. I started working some numbers in my head, thinking of what my possible income might be 5 years into the future. (I wasn't so much interested in the money as much as the freedom that a healthy income can bring. .)