This earth with the varied experiences of good and evil joy and suffering peace and peril which it offers us is a school of initiation leading primitive animal man into the development of awareness until he reaches the first discovery of his Overself

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This earth, with the varied experiences of good and evil, joy and suffering, peace and peril which it offers us, is a school of initiation leading primitive animal man into the development of awareness until he reaches the first discovery of his Overself.