QUES: 2112having a great and high wall having twelve gates and at the gates twelve angels and names inscribed which are those of the twelve tribes of the sons of Israel

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CORRECTED: 21:12having a great and high wall; having twelve gates, and at the gates twelve angels, and names inscribed, which are those of the twelve tribes of [the] sons of Israel.

QUES: In some cases we may process personal information on behalf of and according to the instructions of a third party such as our advertising partners

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CORRECTED: In some cases, we may process personal information on behalf of and according to the instructions of a third party, such as our advertising partners.

QUES: But we have got ahead of the events that we were describing so returning to the period after Anderson left Russia he went to Budapest and in 1921 he became a school teacher there

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CORRECTED:
But we have got ahead of the events that we were describing, so returning to the period after Anderson left Russia, he went to Budapest and in 1921 he became a school teacher there.