QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The remarkable thing and what makes it so hard to describe my Tibetan experiences is nonetheless the way the physical and mental challenges has played tricks on me phychologically
ANS: The remarkable thing and what makes it so hard to describe my Tibetan experiences is, nonetheless, the way the physical and mental challenges has played tricks on me phychologically.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Keep in mind that you may often have to find some method of controlling handling and directing personnel who get in your way before you can render an assist
ANS: Keep in mind that you may often have to find some method of controlling, handling and directing personnel who get in your way before you can render an assist.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Details about a family for Jrgen Jensen and Karen Jacobsdatter
ANS: Details about a family for Jrgen Jensen and Karen Jacobsdatter

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: When piece measures 8111010710 cm inc 2 sts mid under sleeve
ANS:
When piece measures 8-11-10-10-7-10 cm, inc 2 sts mid under sleeve.