Question: 10 Speak to the children of Israel and tell them When you have come into the land which I give to you and shall reap its harvest then you shall bring the sheaf of the first fruits of your harvest to the priest
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Fixed: [10 "Speak to the children of Israel, and tell them, 'When you have come into the land which I give to you, and shall reap its harvest, then you shall bring the sheaf of the first fruits of your harvest to the priest.]

Question: The mind is filled with thoughts and desires are the way of the right concentration
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Fixed: [The mind is filled with thoughts and desires are the way of the "right concentration".]

Question: Details about an individual for Sren Hansen Boysen
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Fixed: [Details about an individual for Sren Hansen Boysen]

Question: And Pharaohs army was come forth out of Egypt and when the Chaldeans that besieged Jerusalem heard tidings of them they went up from Jerusalem
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Fixed:
[And Pharaoh's army was come forth out of Egypt; and when the Chaldeans that besieged Jerusalem heard tidings of them, they went up from Jerusalem.]