QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The many new people really make the camp move
ANS: The many new people really make the camp move.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 15 So the altar shall be four cubits and from the altar and upward shall be four horns
ANS: 15 So the altar shall be four cubits; and from the altar and upward shall be four horns.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: But it should be noted in this connection that not long ago the established research stated similarly that even Buddha himself was a myth and that for instance the Hittites the city of Troy and King Midas were all myth too But all of this had to been withdrawn again following archaeological disclosures of unavoidable hard core proofs
ANS: But it should be noted in this connection that not long ago the established research stated similarly that even Buddha himself was a myth, and that for instance the Hittites, the city of Troy, and King Midas were all myth, too. But, all of this had to been withdrawn again following archaeological disclosures of unavoidable hard core proofs.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: The degree of danger ranges from light wounds to mortal events but regardless of the type of accident its cause is often linked to the lack of observance of safety rules
ANS:
The degree of danger ranges from light wounds to mortal events, but regardless of the type of accident, its cause is often linked to the lack of observance of safety rules.