Question: Their bone is light with a commendable meat to bone ratio
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Fixed: [Their bone is light, with a commendable meat to bone ratio.]

Question: Select Deleted File Recovery option from the two options that are displayed on the main screen
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Fixed: [Select "Deleted File Recovery" option from the two options that are displayed on the main screen]

Question: They have a case with a screw back and a mineral crystal sapphire crystal that is both non reflective and scratch resistant
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Fixed: [They have a case with a screw back, and a mineral crystal / sapphire crystal that is both non reflective and scratch resistant.]

Question: For updated information about the precise timing of the ships passage under the bridge please refer to the website marinetrafficcom where you can follow the ships progress and be updated on its exact position
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[For updated information about the precise timing of the ship's passage under the bridge, please refer to the website marinetraffic.com where you can follow the ship's progress and be updated on its exact position.]