QUES: Mr Macdonald at once became the object of violent attack and began to wear the bewildered mien for which he became famous and which I observed when I met him in 1935

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CORRECTED: Mr. Macdonald at once became the object of violent attack and began to wear the bewildered mien for which he became famous (and which I observed when I met him in 1935).

QUES: Some ACAD file extension formats can be opened in binary format only

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CORRECTED: * Some ACAD file extension formats can be opened in binary format only.

QUES: The wave of focusing on money shots photos that sell like the ones of the models street style stars and the new Gucci shoes which the photo editors of the magazines ask for and that sell well from the photo agencies

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CORRECTED:
The wave of focusing on "money shots" photos that sell, like the ones of the models, street style stars and the new Gucci shoes, which the photo editors of the magazines ask for and that sell well from the photo agencies.