Question: As mentioned in Ted the Mechanic the two subjects of discussion to avoid would be politics and religion and because of that you would find a great cross section of tolerant locals I was not amazed to find my father retired factory worker in pleasant discourse with an old Field Marshalland owner a vicar two policemen a shopkeeper and a farm worker one evening in my bar
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Fixed: [As mentioned in Ted the Mechanic the two subjects of discussion to avoid would be politics and religion, and because of that you would find a great cross section of tolerant locals. I was not amazed to find my father (retired factory worker) in pleasant discourse with an old Field Marshal/land owner, a vicar, two policemen, a shopkeeper and a farm worker - one evening in my bar.]

Question: In the Gaza War 20082009 surgery Cast Lead there were according to the UN from 19 January 2009 1340 killed Palestinians among which are 460 Children and 106 Women 5320 People were injured among them 1855 Children with much of the injury is severe 1417 Dead thereof 926 Civilians among them 313 Children and adolescents under the age of 18 Years 116 Women as 5000 Injured person At least 22000 Houses were damaged or destroyed was ca 14 Corresponds percent of all homes in the Gaza Strip about 4100 Residential buildings about 1500 Enterprises and workshops and 20 Mosques
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Fixed: [In the Gaza War 2008-2009 surgery "Cast Lead" there were, according to the UN from 19. January 2009 1.340 killed Palestinians, among which are 460 Children and 106 Women. 5.320 People were injured, among them 1.855 Children, with much of the injury is severe. 1.417 Dead, thereof 926 Civilians (among them 313 Children and adolescents under the age of 18 Years 116 Women), as. 5.000 Injured person. At least 22.000 Houses were damaged or destroyed, was ca. 14 Corresponds percent of all homes in the Gaza Strip (about 4.100 Residential buildings, about 1.500 Enterprises and workshops and 20 Mosques).]

Question: The process that led to the concept of speedsharing consisted of four iterations
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Fixed: [The process that led to the concept of speed-sharing consisted of four iterations:]

Question: Green Fund grants are set aside from a yearly appropriation
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[Green Fund grants are set aside from a yearly appropriation.]