QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Knit each shoulder piece separately
ANS: Knit each shoulder piece separately.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: Our neighbors Denmark and Norway have a few though not as many as Sweden
ANS: Our neighbors Denmark and Norway have a few, though not as many as Sweden.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: 23 And as for the rest of the tribes from the east side to the west side Benjamin one part
ANS: 23 And as for the rest of the tribes: from the east side to the west side: Benjamin, one part.

QUESTION: Fix punctuation: We have the following broodmare out of PARTOUT s dam line i n our breeding program
ANS:
We have the following broodmare out of PARTOUT 's dam line i n our breeding program :