Who needs a fairy godmother when you can arrange your own magical

Can you repeat this sentence, but add in punctuation?
Who needs a fairy godmother when you can arrange your own magical...
input: If you know the name of wrong DLL like KBDKAZDLL choose Free downloadsaving money
fixed: If you know the name of wrong DLL like KBDKAZ.DLL, choose Free download--saving money.
input ---- And in the summer of 1993 a young man from Sandavg named Esbern was visiting the island
output ---- And in the summer of 1993, a young man from Sandavag named Esbern, was visiting the island.
Add punctuation: The subsequent divergences between Egyptian and Hebrew versions of the legend are explained in a long review and logical analysis of studies of the Hebrew texts of this and later times consistent suppression of the Egyptian origins of the heroic Moses emphasises the idea of his being a Hebrew hence the books title and subtitle although his personal behaviour is more suggestive of a nonJewish background ie marrying his halfsister
A: The subsequent divergences between Egyptian and Hebrew versions of the "legend" are explained in a long review and logical analysis of studies of the Hebrew texts of this and later times: consistent suppression of the Egyptian origins of the heroic Moses emphasises the idea of his being a Hebrew (hence the book's title and subtitle), although his personal behaviour is more suggestive of a non-Jewish background (i.e. marrying his half-sister).
QUESTION: Fix punctuation: In reply to Akiko Hada who does such a brilliant job with our Japanese translations here at Caramba when she questioned the tense of a French word that Id used in a previous DF I replied to her
ANS: In reply to Akiko Hada (who does such a brilliant job with our Japanese translations here at Caramba!) when she questioned the tense of a French word that I'd used in a previous DF, I replied to her
input ---- Minh Horwood from Sri Lanka of PCMAGCOM After our technical detection and feedback research from China Qatar Djibouti Switzerland Sri Lanka I need to say that DLL Suite is the most outstanding DLL Fixer in this field with its high efficiency and effect
output ----
Minh Horwood from Sri Lanka of PCMAG.COM: After our technical detection and feedback research from China, Qatar, Djibouti, Switzerland, Sri Lanka, I need to say that DLL Suite is the most outstanding DLL Fixer in this field with its high efficiency and effect.