QUES: Glass separating walls Separation opens up

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Glass separating walls - Separation opens up

QUES: Each player has 17 pieces placed two at a time in shifts around the board

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: Each player has 17 pieces, placed two at a time in shifts around the board.

QUES: When there is a bad law the more stringently it is enforced the worse the situation is

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
When there is a bad law the more stringently it is enforced the worse the situation is.