What is the version of the following sentence with correct punctuation?

The use and safekeeping of the PSLive Card including any passwords or other security measures relating to the same remains your responsibility once it has been registered and allocated to you We will not be held liable for any loss nor damage suffered by you or a third party arising from your failure to safeguard the PSLive Card
The use and safekeeping of the PSLive Card (including any passwords or other security measures relating to the same) remains your responsibility once it has been registered and allocated to you. We will not be held liable for any loss nor damage suffered by you or a third party arising from your failure to safeguard the PSLive Card.