Question: The only Son and Word of God second Person of the Holy Trinity fell in love with all the people of the earth accepting the fruits of creation in its fragility weakness and wounded state just as it was then and as it still is today Christ in the crib stretches out his arms to the humble shepherds and the great magi alike
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Fixed: [The only Son and Word of God, second Person of the Holy Trinity, fell in love with all the people of the earth, accepting the fruits of creation in its fragility, weakness and wounded state, just as it was then and as it still is today. Christ in the crib stretches out his arms to the humble shepherds and the great magi alike.]

Question: The third piece Ive somehow got into my throat and there was general amusement of a free hiccups
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Fixed: [The third piece I've somehow got into my throat and there was general amusement of a free hiccups.]

Question: Children under 18 stay free when using existing bedding
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Fixed: [Children under 18 stay free when using existing bedding.]

Question: Even these are watches that mark their wearers as gearheads and get their hands on their cars at the slightest chance
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Fixed:
[Even these are watches that mark their wearers as gear-heads and get their hands on their cars at the slightest chance.]