Question: With the tripping line it wasnt a problem it came straight up Some people lead the line back to the boat Instead I attached a red ball at the end of mine which at the same time is an indication of how far the boat can turn and the location of the anchor
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Fixed: [With the tripping line it wasn't a problem, it came straight up. Some people lead the line back to the boat. Instead, I attached a red ball at the end of mine, which at the same time is an indication of how far the boat can turn and the location of the anchor.]

Question: But it happened that a shepherd tending his flock saw the flower and as it was so beautiful he gathered it took it home with him and put it in his chest
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Fixed: [But it happened that a shepherd, tending his flock, saw the flower, and as it was so beautiful, he gathered it, took it home with him, and put it in his chest.]

Question: Additionally nobody is very enthusiastic about setting up more CD servers because of the tremendous amounts of wasted bandwidth some people keep restarting failed downloads instead of resuming from the point where the connection was closed and because a regular mirror is more attractive it allows continuous upgrades of Debian or using the testingunstable distribution instead of the stable one
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Fixed: [Additionally, nobody is very enthusiastic about setting up more CD servers because of the tremendous amounts of wasted bandwidth (some people keep restarting failed downloads instead of resuming from the point where the connection was closed) and because a regular mirror is more attractive (it allows continuous upgrades of Debian, or using the testing/unstable distribution instead of the stable one).]

Question: Similarly frequent alcohol consumption increases the risk of cancer of the tonsil
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Fixed:
[Similarly, frequent alcohol consumption increases the risk of cancer of the tonsil.]