QUES: In fact Bowditch loved to carry out complex mathematical computations and the task of checking and correcting Moores work was one he greatly enjoyed

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: In fact Bowditch loved to carry out complex mathematical computations and the task of checking and correcting Moore's work was one he greatly enjoyed.

QUES: These agents are placed around in the small villages so that the women will not have to travel far to draw their salary

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: These agents are placed around in the small villages, so that the women will not have to travel far to draw their salary.

QUES: Can I travel with my fishing equipment

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
Can I travel with my fishing equipment?