Add punctuation: However at McMurdo Station on Ross Island and to a much lesser degree at the South Pole Station successful harvests are achieved on a daily basis
A: However, at McMurdo Station on Ross Island (and to a much lesser degree at the South Pole Station), successful harvests are achieved on a daily basis.

Add punctuation: In a backyard in Nrregade lies the old candy factory Smods Bolcher where they make candy the good old fashioned way
A: In a backyard in Nrregade lies the old candy factory, Smods Bolcher, where they make candy the good old fashioned way.

Add punctuation: Hi my name is PinkChampagne and I am 19 years
A:
Hi, my name is PinkChampagne and I am 19 years.