Add punctuation: Jet Time does not offer special meals for children
A: Jet Time does not offer special meals for children.

Add punctuation: Yet when this sin is indulged it is capable of leading to every other sin listed here I am not trying to be dramatic
A: Yet when this sin is indulged, it is capable of leading to every other sin listed here. I am not trying to be dramatic.

Add punctuation: Crochet 1 dc but wait with last pullthrough 2 sts on hook
A:
Crochet 1 dc, but wait with last pull-through = 2 sts on hook.