Question: Afterwards I got into my car and drove straight to the Elton John concert in Perth making it with minutes to spare to hear his first song
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Fixed: [Afterwards, I got into my car and drove straight to the Elton John concert in Perth, making it with minutes to spare to hear his first song.]

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Fixed: [2 years ago 10:56 HClips creampie, girlfriend, college, bathroom]

Question: The upper is stitched slightly thinner which improves the fit
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Fixed: [The upper is stitched slightly thinner, which improves the fit.]

Question: Registration 16 August 2008 1851
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[Registration 16 August 2008 18:51]