IN: Of all the places we 'd visited up to this point , none had me as excited as the Alamo . I remember watching the old Disney version of Davy Crockett at the Alamo . I felt a real sympathy for a group of men who knew they were doomed and continued to stay .
Why might the narrator feel attached to Davy Crockett 's story ?

OUT: His men showed bravery even in the face of death .

IN: This was the outcome . Y'all know how when many say they awoke late and threw on anything , it 's normally jeans and some tee , but for me , I think that would take even longer . My Thursdays are insane , I sometimes wonder just when will I collapse of exhaustion . Like this .
What would have caused the OP to feel like this ?

OUT: Working overtime .

IN: I am going to die of hunger . My mother used the rice that I made last night that I was planning on eating for lunch . Nope , it 's gone .
Why is the narrator feeling so famished ?

OUT:
The rice they planned to eat has been consumed .