Add punctuation: The narrator is directly critical of his protagonist when in Books 34 he has got himself involved in a war against Venice Book 4 is introduced as follows While riots rather than a war were taking place among the Christians and Scanderbeg was growing old before the walls of Denim Murad was having all sorts of considerations
A: The narrator is directly critical of his protagonist when in Books 3-4 he has got himself involved in a war against Venice. Book 4 is introduced as follows: "While riots rather than a war were taking place among the Christians, and Scanderbeg was growing old before the walls of Denim, Murad was having all sorts of considerations..."

Add punctuation: Mountain unicycling can be done on the same terrain as a mountain bike However unicycles typically lack a gear system preventing the user from coasting or reaching high speeds
A: Mountain unicycling can be done on the same terrain as a mountain bike. However, unicycles typically lack a gear system, preventing the user from coasting or reaching high speeds.

Add punctuation: We recommend emotionally driven storytelling when the subject matter demands it Its not a method you want to toy with unless theres a good reason for it In the end you could end up alienating your audience if youre not careful
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We recommend emotionally driven storytelling when the subject matter demands it. It's not a method you want to toy with unless there's a good reason for it. In the end you could end up alienating your audience, if you're not careful.