Add punctuation: A boat shall carry adequate lifesaving equipment for all persons on board including one item ready for immediate use unless her class rules make some other provision
A: A boat shall carry adequate life-saving equipment for all persons on board, including one item ready for immediate use, unless her class rules make some other provision.

Add punctuation: In particular she was elected a Fellow of the Institute of Mathematical Statistics a Fellow of the American Statistical Association in 1954 and a Member of the International Statistical Institute
A: In particular she was elected a Fellow of the Institute of Mathematical Statistics, a Fellow of the American Statistical Association in 1954, and a Member of the International Statistical Institute.

Add punctuation: The end result is a lean and ripped appearance devoid of any fat Since Clenbuterol is a thermogenic agent it works 24 hours a day helping your body speed up the process of fat loss
A:
The end result is a lean and ripped appearance devoid of any fat. Since Clenbuterol is a thermogenic agent, it works 24 hours a day helping your body speed up the process of fat loss.