Question: It would be altogether unfair to ask him to surrender this valuable privilege for anything less than what it might bring him in case he should be allowed to keep it
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Fixed: [It would be altogether unfair to ask him to surrender this valuable privilege for anything less than what it might bring him in case he should be allowed to keep it.]

Question: This software works successfully on Mac and Windows computer
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Fixed: [This software works successfully on Mac and Windows computer.]

Question: Current page is Online Serbian Danish translation
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Fixed: [Current page is: Online Serbian Danish translation]

Question: Publications received Contributors to this issue Guidelines for authors Danish Musicological Society
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[Publications received, Contributors to this issue, Guidelines for authors, Danish Musicological Society]