Question: Spaced Repetition Learning Systems or Spaced Repetition Software SRS has been one of the most useful tools Ive added to my language learning arsenal in the last year I have found my acquisition of new vocabulary has grown exponentially and in the last year my understanding of Spanish has grown through my habit of being a word collector
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Fixed: [Spaced Repetition Learning Systems or Spaced Repetition Software (SRS) has been one of the most useful tools I've added to my language learning arsenal in the last year. I have found my acquisition of new vocabulary has grown exponentially and in the last year my understanding of Spanish has grown through my habit of being a "word collector".]

Question: He started as a soloist in the Kansas City Philharmonic 1933 and became soloist in the Chicago Symphony Orchestra as the youngest musician in the orchestra soloist in the Cleveland Orchestra 19411945 soloist in the Boston Symphony Orchestra 19451946 back as soloist in Cleveland 19461947 and at last back as a soloist in Chicago 19481960
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Fixed: [He started as a soloist in the Kansas City Philharmonic 1933, and became soloist in the Chicago Symphony Orchestra (as the youngest musician in the orchestra), soloist in the Cleveland Orchestra 1941-1945, soloist in the Boston Symphony Orchestra 1945-1946, back as soloist in Cleveland 1946-1947, and at last back as a soloist in Chicago 1948-1960.]

Question: New york United States personals
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Fixed: [New york, United States personals]

Question: Here too Ive highlighted the relevant portion
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[Here, too, I've highlighted the relevant portion:]