QUES: The Christian life can be compared to the choice of whether to purchase the expensive seats at a sporting event that are close to the action or pay less and watch the game from a distance

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: The Christian life can be compared to the choice of whether to purchase the expensive seats at a sporting event that are close to the action, or pay less and watch the game from a distance.

QUES: However if you want something beyond this fine selection the versatile 3in1 Sport Ring Watch Box Set is going to bowl you over

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED: However, if you want something beyond this fine selection, the versatile, 3-in-1 Sport Ring Watch Box Set is going to bowl you over.

QUES: To begin your free file analysis simply draganddrop your SA7 file inside the dotted lines below or click Browse My Computer and select your file

correct the punctuation.

CORRECTED:
To begin your free file analysis, simply drag-and-drop your SA7 file inside the dotted lines below, or click "Browse My Computer" and select your file.