w3c/wai-planning-and-implementation — pull request #2 by happywebdiva (2014-09-17 23:43:51+00:00)
Title: Minor grammatical changes

In "Establish Roles and Responsibilities," (1) made verbs in example responsibilities parallel; (2) in key action 3 description, changed "who" to "whom"; (3) cleaning up clauses in key action 4 description.

Also, while I did not change it, the wording of key action 2 ("Assign responsibility to other organizational areas that impact on the provision of accessible websites") strikes me as awkward. Can "impact on" be changed to just "impact"?