craigspaeth/artsy.github.com — pull request #1 by zamiang (2014-09-08 20:02:45+00:00)
Title: @craigspaeth Edits to the open source force post to hopefully improve clarity

Made a few edits to hopefully improve the flow of the post. Tried to start out direct and then have little transitions the lead into the next paragraph. Also reduced the # of prepositions yay -http://www.hemingwayapp.com/