Fyurie/kaylithbatches — pull request #14 by Ianunaut (2014-08-31 00:12:18+00:00)
Title: Batch QC eps14-17

Sorry for the late delivery, been unexpectedly busy. Only 8 eps to go!

ep14
1458* sea god capitalized b/c see ep13
1716* joined with 1719 because 1719 was way too long for its short
duration (26cps)
2108* hyphenated for consistency
2330* edited to fit ep15
2334* edited to fit ep15
2335* edited to fit ep15
2337* edited to fit ep15

ep15
0428* comma deleted, ep15 is not big on commas in general so this stands
out
1117* second part of line was pretty messy; please check if three-liner!
1059* comma deleted, same reason as 0428
1857* Ohshi is the short form, see ep9
2023* phase --> faze, heh
2330* edited to fit ep16

ep16
0849* shortened because it was @24cps, and the omission doesn't hurt too
bad
1028* slightly rewritten to shorten line, was too long
1118 left as-is; i check all lines with 20+cps in the eps, and while
these are long, they still feel okay
1148* hyphenated for consistency
1308* hyphenated for consistency
2334* edited to fit ep17
2336* edited to fit ep17
2337* split into two lines because, well, it's two lines (hikari and
kaname); not edited the dialogue lines (cf 1136 and 1458 in ep17) though
since it's virtually impossible to re-arrange the fragments into a
coherent whole - at least this line sounds good

ep17
0335* deleted comma, not really used that way in this ep
0549* the "together" deserves a bit more emphasis
1118* edited to fit ep10
1219* deleted for consistency
1856* villiage --> village, typo
1921* retimed, i absolutely agree with the comment in 1923
1923* style --> default alt, agree with comment