sfbrigade/localfreeweb.org — pull request #16 by brittag (2014-08-21 05:14:08+00:00)
Title: Some copy suggestions for clearer communication

Just some suggestions! I hope this is helpful; feel free to accept whatever seems useful.

Instead of LocalFreeWeb "bringing" internet-enabled computers, it may be more precise to say LocalFreeWeb "promotes" them - I see this as the libraries and other locations bringing access to people, and LocalFreeWeb helping by sharing information.

"Get access to free internet enabled computer" sounds better to me as "Get access to a free internet enabled computer".

"Internet enabled devices" implies phones/tablets to me, and the site seems to focus on computers, so I changed that to "internet enabled computers" (which is also better for consistency).

For "Enter the information for the location where you will provide "free internet"", I imagine that most of the people adding locations will be adding the names of organizations they know about instead of setting up new access locations (since setting up new access locations is very hard), so I updated this to say "Enter information for another location that provides free internet" (and omitted the extra quotation marks).

I changed "Business Name" to the more neutral "Location Name" since many additional locations are likely to be nonprofit organizations or other non-business institutions.

I made capitalization more consistent in a few places.

The current website repository link goes to an empty branch, so I changed that link to go to the branch where the website code seems to live.