vdukhovni/saag — pull request #2 by kaduk (2014-08-19 20:47:44+00:00)
Title: Edits for the opportunistic security document

Roughly ordered from most minor changes to most major changes.
Many are of trivial editorial nature, but others attempt more drastic rewording to improve clarity.
I have not yet touched on all the places that I feel could be done better, but am willing to submit these now for consideration.