mikesperber/jfp-runtime-fp — pull request #1 by mfelleisen (2014-08-18 20:48:19+00:00)
Title: write editorial in first person plural; tightened prose

The 'first person plural' is mandatory here. You don't want to write about yourself in third person in an editorial.

The other suggestions are about tightening prose, following Strunk and White and Dan Friedman's rules (though he doesn't follow them).