jhinkey/liferay-docs — pull request #184 by sez11a (2014-06-05 21:52:36+00:00)
Title: Carousel Wordsmithing

Hey Jim,

I went through this one with a fine-toothed comb, since it's one of Mike's first, and I found a bunch of stuff that needed wordsmithing. I'm sending this back to you so you can see the kinds of things I look for. I have a separate file with notes I'll send via email.

Thanks!