benbalter/benbalter.github.com — pull request #119 by parkr (2014-06-02 18:21:49+00:00)
Title: Edits to "Open vs. Collaborative Gov't" post

Lots of line and copy edits after reading your (awesome) piece on how collaborative gov't is better than open gov't.

One question, though: who is your audience for this piece? The last section seems to be speaking to "geeks" like you and me, whereas the rest seems to be talking to government employees. Any reason for the switch?