stephenmelrose/stephenmelrose.github.io — pull request #1 by csswizardry (2014-04-09 20:23:56+00:00)
Title: Try out some more salesy copy

Hey man!

I hope you don’t mind me submitting this type of PR, and I totally understand if you decline, but I honestly think you’re don’t do half as good a job of selling yourself as you could do! I know writing about yourself makes it hard to be boastful, so I thought I’d maybe try do it for you :)

I’ve tried to rewrite your copy a little in a way that bigs you up without being OTT or dishonest. You know a _lot_ about a lot, so you could do to shout about it a little more. I wouldn’t expect you to necessarily run with this copy word-for-word, but perhaps something more along these lines might be more suitable.

Anyway, totally up to you.

Best of luck!
H