freesurface/freesurface.github.io — pull request #30 by donald-mack (2014-04-07 18:11:14+00:00)
Title: Updated / Expanded Copy

I have started to address few of the points you had brought up in Friday's exchange. I tried to fulfill the analogy of travelling forward while facing the wrong direction. I used very Canadian attributes as to how we go about doing it on the roads of country. The way a true Canadian act's on the road is ho we should be acting towards making changes in the way our country establishes priorities.

I am aware that I need to expand on Entrepreneurs and Communication, I would just say that those are the areas I need to strengthen my knowledge in so that I can be more concise as to what these sections should lead readers minds towards both overall and in the context of the document.

I will continue working on the suggestions from friday and look forward to any additional feedback that will come from this exchange.