superfunc/superfunc.github.io — pull request #1 by milieu (2014-03-31 08:20:43+00:00)
Title: Case for auto edits

Such arguments. Much formal clarity. Wow.

In all seriousness and typos/grammar aside, your writing is generally just fine. Apart from being logically coherent and hitting salient points, there seem to be two driving impulses to your writing style: 1) Expressing concepts in an "academic" manner. Commas. Throw in some predicates. Long words. More commas. Particularly see how you use the word "consider." 2) Being concise and making this piece understandable by minimizing word clutter. See how you use the word "as."

Writing flow is more important than writing fashion. Less is more.