olevole/cbsd-wwwdoc — pull request #2 by koobs (2014-01-24 12:47:02+00:00)
Title: Translate and proof about_en.html - Round #1

- Tweak grammar and flow
- Simplify and reduce verbosity
- Reduce duplication
- Consistent terminology
- Judicious use of "keywords" that are relevant
- Reduce use of "jail" where implicit or not required
- Remove paragraphs that detract from the main message