swannodette/swannodette.github.com — pull request #15 by gilesbowkett (2013-12-19 22:58:16+00:00)
Title: commas, capitalization, a few minor rewrites

also a pluralization, several `s/that/which/` changes, and miscellaneous sentence-y things. (I think most but not all of the `s/that/which` are grammatically required.)