hugoroy/user-data-manifesto — pull request #3 by jancborchardt (2013-04-18 15:25:37+00:00)
Title: small word corrections

Just some minor fixes.

Also, I very much like your approach of condensing it to fewer points. In that vein, I htink point 4 is just a slightly different wording of a combination of point 1 and 2 (1 mentions encryption, and 2 mentions own servers and data control / federation). Could be done away with.