deanwillis/p2psip-base-master — pull request #205 by petithug (2012-12-31 18:31:27+00:00)
Title: Gen-ART 86

From: Mary Barnes

Description: [-17] Section 3.1, 1st para: This sentence doesn't grok because the concept of "overlay parameters" hasn't been mentioned before this section nor has the concept of a "configuration document".
"The overlay parameters are specified in a configuration document."
At a minimum those terms should be defined in the terminology section and introduced in the intro paragraph in section 3.

Notes: Will fix the text