deanwillis/p2psip-base-master — pull request #171 by petithug (2012-12-27 17:41:37+00:00)
Title: Gen-ART 40

From: Mary Barnes

Description: Section 10.1 [11.1]: General: Needs a lot of work to be specified using normative language. The majority of the configuration elements are not specified using normative language - for example, terms such as permitted, allowed, valid are used in statements rather than normative language or they are indicative of the need for normative language.
A specific example is in the definition for "clients-permitted":
OLD:
This element represents whether clients are
permitted or whether all nodes must be peers. If it is set to
"true" or absent, this indicates that clients are permitted. If
it is set to "false" then nodes are not allowed to remain clients
after the initial join.
NEW:
This element represents whether clients are
permitted or whether all nodes need to be peers. If clients
are permitted, the element MUST be set to "true" or absent.
If the nodes are not allowed to remain clients after the
initial join, the element MUST be set to "false".

Notes: Will fix text as suggested.