deanwillis/p2psip-base-master — pull request #164 by petithug (2012-12-27 17:00:24+00:00)
Title: Gen-ART 33

From: Mary Barnes

Description: Section 9.5 [10.5]: While this section does have a fair amount of normative language, it is still lacking in a few cases:
-Item 2.: "should" -> "SHOULD"
-Item 5.: "The AP sends the response…" -> "The AP MUST send the response…"
-1st paragraph after list: "…can directly connect…" -> "MAY directly connect"
-2nd paragraph after list: "it can still populate" -> "it MAY still populate"
-2nd paragraph after list: the description of the use of PING should be reworded with normative language (I'll leave that exercise to the authors)
-3rd paragraph after the list: "JP simply sends" -> "JP MUST send"

Notes: Will fix text as suggested.