Bertram25/ValyriaTear — pull request #27 by rootslinux (2012-11-06 07:23:34+00:00)
Title: English language text improvements

I went through nearly every line of English text that is seen by the player (covered the entire /dat directory) and updated various lines to read better. The major changes included:

- Fixed all grammatical errors and oddities
- Improved the word order and phrasing of some lines of dialogue
- Made punctuation usage more consistent throughout all the text
- Changed the punctuation in some spoken lines to make better sense (it's very strange for "!" to be followed by "...", for example)

What I did not change:

- No lines of dialogue were added or removed
- Almost all of the expressions ("Ah ah", "Err", etc) remained intact, although I personally think that such language is used much too frequently in the game dialogues so far.