RKessin/dvcs-workflows — pull request #2 by zkessin (2012-09-27 20:58:40+00:00)
Title: some text I would like you to review

Can you look at collaboration.asciidoc lines 23 to 57. I reworked it to try to tell the story of why you would want a version control system. Can you take a look at it and tell me what you think, does this make sense?