progit/progit — pull request #224 by ComputerDruid (2012-06-22 19:38:49+00:00)
Title: 1.1 (en): Clarify the wording in the first paragraphs to be less awkward

Feedback on the improved wording would be helpful if this isn't acceptable as is, but the wording in this section felt clunky. The changes seek to fix this without changing any of the meaning.