celerier/oslo — pull request #2 by djp73 (2012-06-07 18:25:32+00:00)
Title: article edits

Hi Charles,

Could you pull these edits please? Also, please let us know if you have time to do any further edits -- there are some questions in there that I didn't answer from Caroline. Also, please put in your commenting macro as I didn't do one for you.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Thanks!

--David