roundlake/joosy-guides — pull request #3 by sbc (2012-06-05 04:17:25+00:00)
Title: Edited the getting started guide

Hi, I edited the getting started guide for better readability (at least for a US english speaker).

I ventured beyond just typos, but tried to stay true to your voice and style, so, for example, where you were using idioms that didn't make sense I changed them to other idioms.

There are some parts where I didn't fully understand what you were trying to convey--mostly the "Not an MVC" section--and in that case I didn't change much, but I don't think the text is very clear. Happy to start a dialog about these and come up with clearer language.

I'm looking forward to trying this out and progressing through the guides!

Sam