stephenmcd/cartridge — pull request #28 by rosslaird (2012-05-10 16:12:53+00:00)
Title: Doc tweaks

I made some careful and non-intrusive edits to the various descriptive sections and snippets. Most of my edits are simple grammatical corrections: comma usage, spelling, verb/noun agreements, and so on. A few edits are slightly more substantive and include alternate wording intended to tighten and clarify the descriptions while at the same time preserving their tone and focus. I have not made any changes to code references or other more technical material.

The only place where I made a change that you may wish to review carefully involves the README file, in which I made a suggested change to the clarity and workflow for the installation process. Basically I conjoined the information about South and about specific usernames into one section which immediately follows the code description. I suggest this section be changed further, so that users know in advance -- before running createdb, that they can specify a username. However, I did not want to make that change as it seemed possibly too intrusive.