antirez/redis-doc — pull request #119 by ShawnMilo (2012-04-30 08:27:11+00:00)
Title: Some grammatical changes.

Hi Salvatore & friends,

I've recently started using Redis and I love it. If you're interested, I'd like to help out with the English documentation. It is already excellent, but there are some small "non-native speaker" issues I've been noticing while reading the docs.

I tried to make the changes as small as possible -- changing individual words rather than sentence structure when possible. I also tried to avoid changing formatting (such as wrapping long lines) until I know your standards.

Hopefully this commit is small enough for you to review easily and decide if you'd like to accept my help. If so, please give me any feedback and I'll continue the work. I only edited a few files, and stopped at the eval.md file since it was very large and I made quite a few changes.

I believe I didn't change the meaning of any of the text, but there are two minor things I wanted to point out in the eval.md file:

1. On line 156, the word "user" was used twice and I'm sure it was a typo, but please check.

2. I changed "SHA1 sum" to "SHA1 hash" in a few places. Further down in the file I discovered that "SHA1 digest" was being used. Let me know if 'digest' or 'hash' is preferred and I'll make it consistent.

I hope you like my changes and that I am able to contribute back to such a great project.

Thanks,
Shawn