catlee/aosa-volume2 — pull request #22 by joduinn (2012-01-30 09:14:11+00:00)
Title: last minute changes to chapter

hi catlee;

These changes are from review feedback I got just before vacation. Small grammer/rephrasing was caught by the other reviewers, but here's more. It looks like more because if I made a wrapping change in a paragraph, I re-wrapped the para as I went. Hopefully all looks ok, and also hopefully this is not too late.

My git-fu is not strong enough to understand why I have the other 7 files in this pull request - I've only rebased and been changing our one web/en/ffreleng.html file. The only changes that matter are the 3 changes to ffreleng.html:

https://github.com/joduinn/aosa-volume2/commit/a65f3dc0eb8c6fe7a18b484362e25610a1021767
https://github.com/joduinn/aosa-volume2/commit/4f29761e41cf6eb2c5f93fdca0e9da83680eeacf
https://github.com/joduinn/aosa-volume2/commit/ac0c2dcad63e17362abc9c89c615fa02bc380a5e

tc
John.