duck1123/ciste — pull request #1 by amalloy (2011-12-18 08:52:22+00:00)
Title: Some copy-editing, as requested in #clojure

General notes:

- "ie" means "that is", while "eg" means "for example".
- Don't put a period before a parenthetical clause if it's about the preceding sentence. (Like this. This remark should have gone before the period.)

I got about a third of the way through, I think. Didn't really do any technical review since I don't know anything about Ciste and am not really interested in learning, but some of the English is better now.