JBB/jgc-web2 — Issue #62: Proofing syntax feedback for SMC Healthy Schools Initiative
Author: ogurantz
Created: 2012-01-20 21:52:47+00:00
State: open

Syntax/Typo:
- "four local school districts1, is" - remove the 1
- I might change to "during the first year of the study, JGC worked with SHD to develop a logic model and conducted a needs assessment that mapped health and wellness programs in the four partner districts"

Note:
- One caution is how detailed it is, that it's from the perspective that year 1 is over and we are now doing year 2 and 3. If we don't update this consistently then it'll look bad next year. Might want to speak about the project in more general terms.