cowork/lifeingreenville.com — Issue #23: Convenient copy
Author: kategaffney
Created: 2012-01-09 03:01:08+00:00
State: open

"CoWork is a collaborative working space 5 minutes from the heart of downtown" may want to point out that is 5 walking minutes.

"When visitors come to town for meetings they can cheaply stay within walking distance to office spaces and downtown attractions." Cheaply seems... degrading. I know affordably is already used but maybe think of another way to say this than cheaply.

"If you decide to live outside of town there is rarely traffic into and out of town and houses are priced very affordability." possibly replace "rarely" with "minimal" because, for example, there is traffic on 385 daily (especially around Pelham)

"There is also a just the right size airport 15 minutes from downtown with service by Southwest Air for cheap flights all over the country." Delete the a before "just the right size" or reword the description of the airport size