ngokevin/technical_writing — comment on commit a267c7c1c51f443378e6c4093ca308643cf52f9e
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By jonmon6691:

The preface reads too much like a brochure, it should introduce the policy manual, not the company and it's direction. Also, I notice you pretty much re-wrote my section. We should talk about the style of the document because clearly we have some disagreements and I'm sure you don't want to have to re-write everything I do. especially when we get to the proposal.