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She gave back the rough draft and said to talk more about the company and
product, that last part before wasn't needed, and to end on a positive
note. But yeah sorry I went a bit overboard. Just looked at a blank
document day before it was due and wanted to fill it in.
On Feb 14, 2012 1:20 AM, "Jon Wallace" <
reply@reply.github.com>
wrote:

> The preface reads too much like a brochure, it should introduce the policy
> manual, not the company and it's direction. Also, I notice you pretty much
> re-wrote my section. We should talk about the style of the document because
> clearly we have some disagreements and I'm sure you don't want to have to
> re-write everything I do. especially when we get to the proposal.
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