flowlo/sympy.github.com — comment on commit c87522b9dbf4dc94b50529ac730bf3273308ba55
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By toolforger:

Please do not be disheartened by the amount of corrections; for somebody untrained as a translator, it's not bad work at all.
Some general remarks:
1) You have a mild case of comma problems. This is not serious, as translations always need a review and they are easy to spot and fix, but tieing up the reviewers mind with little fixes like this tends to let other problems slip, so some improvements there would be helpful. (I am fully aware that some kinds of improvement are slow, or just too much overhead to be worth the trouble.)
2) English word "conglomerates" like "Python Library" always need to be turned into a composite word ("Pythonlibrary") or combined with a hyphen ("Python-Library"). This is a nasty one that even professional translators let slip. Also, it very often (but not always) generated bad style, requiring rewording the German text ("Google Code page" becomes "Seite auf Google Code" - here, "Google Code" is a proper name and can be left untranslated).
3) This is just the first round of review, fixing the trivial problems so the reviewer can concentrate on the more elaborate things in later rounds. The second review will focus on style and semantics. You can prepare for that by fixing the trivialities right now, let the translation lie for a day or two, then review the text yourself; the perspective from which you should do that review is: "how would I have written this if I had written this in German in the first place?" Anything you can fix on your own will make my reviewing work easier :-)

In all, this was a helpful contribution to get the translation started.
Thanks!