Suddenly she was a rookie again, clad in her pinch-to-short punch-raggs, breathing the sweat and see the dust of training compound, glouring at the usual rude cheers and snide-chuckles coming from the seniors corner. She turned already furious at what she'd have to confront. Fuck head-raith! Yeah, so we are... So angry? So much anger at the main issue with their dialogue is choice of expressions. I think I have replaced... I have been going back and forth between fuck head and fuck face. I think fuck face reads better to me because it's punch-year. But then again, here comes the whole in-universe insults potential. Like, is it... I could just leave it. I could just leave it and it could be fine. And at the same time I'm thinking, hmmm... what if there is a more appropriate, sort of tagline they could be using? Or like in-in-universe wares? So we could leave it like this or we could add a bit of flavour. So this isn't a sort of correction as such but more like some advanced shit right there.