Dear Critique Partner, help! I'm completely stuck on chapter 4, see enclosed. See Randolph is completely in love with the supermarket manager, but I don't know why. Okay, well, have you considered... Oh wait. Now I come to think of it, is it really love? Or is it because of his weird fixation on cabbages? It's a possibility, and why cabbages? Why not let us? Or cauliflower? Maybe because... No! No! A cabbage killed his uncle! It's not love? He wants revenge. I don't... But how do I show that without, you know, showing it? Ha! A chill runs down his spine whenever he nears the produce section. And, and, and, it's a repressed memory, so he doesn't know why he feels that way. Right? Yeah! He loves the supermarket. But he hates the supermarket. But he loves the supermarket. I think I got it! Thanks, critique partner! Glad I could help.