I think the clonk of this part of the sentence, I've just put my curse about it down, well done Dave, the clonk of this sentence comes from this single word here I think. One glance told Joel she wouldn't have to the chance, the second revealed she didn't have to. Yeah, maybe. Change it then. Although that's one of those sentences that might be two clever words for so good, like, oh look at how clever I'm writing.