Songs from the Black Hole, draft 1

This is a transcription of the 1st draft of the aborted concept album Songs from the Black Hole, as it is presented in the book The Pinkerton Diaries. 
=Synopsis=
==ACT I==
Scene I
One night, after his rock show in L.A., he gets stumbling drunk w buddies, argue about how to seduce a chick and eventually all score
Jonas w a sexy mama named Maria. Maria [she does crystal meth + he leaves tired] sings about her love for him and her secret.
Scene II
The next day he feels awful and confesses his love to Laura.
She asks them why do you run w the others? They argue, him trying to convince her. Will you marry me? She does love him too.
Maria comes in, Jonas treats her terribly, tries to kick her out
She eventually screams that she's pregnant with his child. Now Jonas knows that he loves Laura, but she won't have him. No!
==ACT II==
Scene I
Jonas pines what have I done? His friends come in and can't relate, tell him good news about ??? and sings Getchoo. He begs and pleads and does everything he can to get her back, but she stands strong. He resolves to take her with him spiritually. He leaves and she wonders if her morality is good, because she loves him so and it keeps her from him.
Scene II
Jonas sings "No Other One" and goes to Maria with flowers, planning to be a good husband and father. Sings devotion + waltzes with her but then sees Don + Juan in his underwear at her door. Don explains that nothing is sacred, it's every man for himself. Maria freaks out knowing that she's lost him. Jonas is wild with rage, giving into nihilism he says he's leaving and will never see any of them again. At the peak of his anger, Laura's voice is heard, reminding him to be ??? of his baby, and to be a man with her original tune. He joins her singing I will remember. I will resolve to make the best of my circumstance. He ends up with nothing, but in the void his set of morals come into existence. He finds his path and it is alone. Last song called the black hole.
It is the year 2125. Los Angeles has a thriving underground music scene. The Spacedogs are finishing up their set at the Black Hole. Outside, the patrons travel-pods can be seen parked.
=Draft=
==ACT I==
SCENE I	In the Black Hole 	
Jonas: 	I'm so sorry Wuan and Dondó 	
 	I sang really bad tonight you know 	
 	I'm off to the corner of the room I don't wanna face another living soul 	
 	Tell me when you wanna go, Wuan and Dondó 	
 	 	
Dondó: 	No way! That was a good one man. 	
Wuan: 	Yeah, we really rocked 'em hard tonight 	
Dondó: 	For that I deserve another shot of the stuff I was doing 'fore I went on stage	
Wuan: 	Or at least a pretty girl. So whaddaya say, Jonas? 	
Dondó: 	There's Maria and her little sister 	
 	Betcha won't have to work to hard to take her home 	
Jonas: 	I don't know if I wanna lead on a woman, you know, I've done that before 	
 	She's actually a good girl 	
 	underneath it all. 	
D 	Hah! A good girl! 	
 	Does a good girl jerk you 	in the back
 	of a taxi pod? 	
 	Or lift her skirt for you 	
 	in the aerolifter? 	
Js 	I suppose not 	But, she really likes me.
D 	You should take her in the bathroom now 	
 	Tell her to remove her clothes 	
 	And when you're finished 	
 	Make her scrub 	
 	Cuz that's what a bitch is for 	
J 	No! No! You've got it all wrong, my friend	
 	No girl would go for that 	
 	Pour a glass of wine 	
 	Make her think that you car 	
 	Then slip it to her ████████ 	
Both	Whichver way you choose 	
 	Hurry there's no time to lose 	
 	The bar closes at two 	
 	and Maria you must do 	
 	Cuz that's what a bitch is for 	
Maria(walking up)	Who you callin' bitch? 	
Jonas 	Oh Maria, they don't mean it 	
 	Don't listen to them 	
Maria 	They make me so mad 	
 	And you do nothing 	
 	nothing to stop them 	
Jonas 	Please, Maria, they mean nothing 	
 	Now you must chill out 	
Maria 	Especially That Dondó 	
 	He acts like he knows that ████████ 	
 	I despise him. I despise him. I despise him. 	
 	Oh Jonas, I miss you 	
 	Nobody else loves me like you do 	
 	Oh I'm alone Oh Jonas I love you nobody else, nobody else loves me, loves me like you	
Js 	Please remember I'm only a friend 	
Maria 	A friend who fucks me? 	
Js 	You're too crazy to settle down with 	
Maria 	Then why lead me on 	
Js 	I don't love you but I can't help myself 	
Maria 	I'll make you love me 	
Js 	Please, Maria, It won't ever be 	
Maria 	I'll make you love me 	
Js 	It won't ever be 	
Maria 	Love ~ me 	
 	come to my car pod 	
 	there's no one there, we'll be alone 	
 	we can talk 	
 	and if you want to we'll get stoned 	
 	and relax 	
 	have some fun 	
 	in my pod 	
Js + Maria 	in (my) your pod 	
 	no one knows the things we do 	
 	we'll get high 	
 	and if you want to we'll sniff glue 	
 	and relax 	
 	have some fun 	
 	in your pod 	
Mra 	Now that we're left alone 	
 	touch me and kiss me and 	
 	love me! 	
INSTRUMENTAL (starts w Maria's theme in minor?) from p ->f ends w some theme from "Tired"
Js 	Ohhhh!!!! No, 	
 	This is not for me 	
 	I feel so empty 	
 	I'm filled with remorse 	
 	I've got to leave you 	
Mra 	No, don't go 	
 	You'll feel ok in the morning 	
Js 	Maria I'm red with shame 	
 	There's no one to blame but myself 	feedback
 	I know what is right 	
 	But I do what is wrong 	
 	<feedback into TIRED O SEX> 	this theme is Jonas shame and emerging morality
Mra 	Oh Jonas, I miss you JONAS 	I'm tired, so tired
 	Nobody else loves me like you do 	I'm tired of having sex
 	Oh Jonas, If you knew 	I'm spread so thin
 	what I know 	I don't know who I am
 	you wouldn't be so quick 	Monday night, I'm makin' Jen
 	to discard Maria 	Tuesday night I'm makin' Gwen
 	 	Wednesday night I'm making Catherine
 	 	oh why can't I be makin' love come true
 	 	I'm beat, beet red
 	 	Ashamed of what I said
 	 	I'm sorry, here I go
 	 	I know I'm a sinner but I can't say no
 	 	Thursday night I'm makin' Denise
 	 	Friday night I'm makin' Sharise
 	 	Saturday night I'm makin' Louise
 	 	Oh why can't I be makin love come true
 	 	Tonight, I'm down on my knees, tonight I'm beggin' you please
 	 	Tonight, tonight, please oh why can't I be makin' love come true
 	 	
SCENE I 	Outside Laural's House 	
Jonas: 	Oh, I am living all wrong 	(just acoustic serenade?)
 	deceiving this girl 	
 	leading her on 	
 	I, tell her one thing 	
 	Yet do something else 	
 	I can't help myself 	
 	She set's me on fire 	
parallel minor 	But I know someone else 	the fire is bad
 	Someone purer by far 	it blinds my senses
 	I know what is sensible 	But she lures me in
parallel major 	I know what is right 	
 	I know someone else 	
 	purer by far 	
 	She lives all alone 	
 	doesn't go out 	
 	she sits home and reads 	
 	or does her homework 	
parallel minor 	Oh she's totally broke but 	
 	she'll make a good mom 	
 	She'll make a good wife 	
relative major 	Will you marry me, Laural? 	
Laural: 	No, I won't marry you! 	
 	You silly boy 	
 	playing with me 	
 	I've seen you running around 	
 	with all the girls 	
 	leading them on 	
 	like a rock star! 	
 	Oh, you're living all wrong 	
 	deceiving yourself 	
 	You don't belong 	
 	upon your stage 	
Jonas: 	No, I'm smarter than that 	
 	I've changed my ways 	
 	Stopped chasing that dream 	
 	I'm ready to be a man 	
 	and change overnight 	
 	Give you my hand 	
 	So you can lead me 	
Laurel: 	Jonas, I do like you 	
stillA sectionbut differentmelody →	probably too much 	
 	for my own good 	
 	But I'm no fool 	
 	I'm no slave 	
 	to my emotions 	
 	I have control 	
Jonas" 	Laural yes, it's true 	
same melody 	I've changed my ways 	
 	I'm ready for you 	
 	Laural, do something crazy 	
 	Let's get married 	
 	I'll get a job 	
 	Let's have a family 	
Maria:(from outsidebehind pod) 	Oh Jonas, I hear you 	
 	I know that you're in there with Laural 	
Jonas: 	Maria! 	
Maria:'(at the door) 	Oh Jonas, please hear me 	
 	I need to tell you something. Now open, open the door 	
Jonas:(opens the door) 	Oh, damn! Maria 	
 	How did you find me here? 	
Maria: 	I've something to say 	Jonas: Some other time!
 	Let me talk to you 	
Jonas: 	How did you find me? 	
Maria: 	I saw your pod 	
Jonas: 	You followed me 	
Maria: 	Coincidence. 	
Jonas: 	You psycho bitch 	
Laural: 	Please watch your tongue 	
Jonas: 	She followed me 	
Maria: 	I swear I didn't 	
Jonas: 	Then whaddaya want 	
Maria: 	I want to speak to you 	
Jonas: 	get outta my life 	
Maria: 	You're such a creep 	
Laural: 	The both of you! 	
Maria: 	He's such a creep 	
Jonas: 	You're such a freak 	
 	Following me wherever I go 	don't be so cruel
 	Telling me you need to talk to me 	I do, I do
 	When all along you have nothing to say 	I'll say it then
# 	Breaking into tears at the slightest provocation 	There's a reason for my tears
 	and then you wonder why I won't have you 	
 	You're psycho! You're psycho! 	
↓½ 	Maria I've had it up to here 	I've kept this secret from you
 	True, you may be a good f* 	Cuz I didn't want to lose you
 	But how could I tell my mom that my wife does crystal ████?	Now you leave me no choice but to
 	I've found someone steady and pure 	tell you. I'm having your
 	Get out you psycho bitch get out get out! 	baby!
 	You're what? 	I'm having your baby!
Maria: 	Oh Jonas, I've told you 	
 	Now you know why I've been crazy 	
Jonas: 	Maria, I'm sorry 	
 	 	
(shuts door) 	Oh, she's a liar 	You're the liar
 	She's just trying to trap me 	God forgive you
 	Maria is nothing to me 	Maria is all that you've got
 	Laural you're all that I want 	Maybe you could have had me
 	Maybe you thought I was joking before 	Maybe you could have had me
 	But now you must know that I'm not 	if you'd grown up a little bit sooner
 	Now I know for sure 	and thought about your life
 	I've changed my ways 	but it's too late
 	I'm ready for you 	You're much too late
 	I'll cut my hair 	pathetic man
 	I'll get a job 	despicable man
 	I'll quit the band 	too late
==ACT II==
Jonas:	Boy, I've really done it this time 	
 	Now I finally see 	
 	what it is I want 	
 	and I want it so 	
— 	with all my heart 	
 	I sacrificed it all 	
 	for the momentary pleasures 	
 	I should have 	
 	I should have 	
 	Now I finally see 	
 	what it is I want 	
 	and I want it so 	
 	with all my heart 	
Wuan: 	Dude! Dude! Dude! 	
Dondó:	Dude! 	
Jonas:	What! 	
W + D:	Dude! 	
Jonas:	What! 	
Wuan: 	Good news! Good news! Good news! 	
Jonas:	What! 	
W + D:	Dude! 	
Wuan: 	a record company— 	
Dondó:	a guy from a record company— 	
Wuan: 	he says he likes our shit— 	
Dondó:	he gave us his business card— 	
W + D:	Dude! 	
Jonas:	What does this mean! 	
 	It means we're gonna be stars! 	
 	It means we're gonna be rich! 	
 	Dude! ...etc. 	
 	Boy, I've really done it this time 	
 	Now I finally see 	
 	what it is I want 	
 	and I want it with all my heart. 	
 	I want it with all my heart 	
 	This is beginning to hurt 	
 	this is beginning to be serious 	
 	it used to be a game, now it's a cryin' shame	
 	cuz you don't wanna play around no more 	
turns out there's no goal there to be accomplished. Turns out they were just guinea pigs being filmed the whole time. Thanks for participation. There are 5 light speed transporters that will bring them back but they realize that with Maria's baby there are now 6. Jonas volunteers to be stranded. He sings longtime sunshine as the transporters take off and the star supernovas.
Goodbye friends
Goodbye my girl
I close my eyes as you fly away
=See also=
*Songs from the Black Hole
*Songs from the Black Hole, draft 2
*Pinkerton
*The Pinkerton Diaries
Category:Songs from the Black Hole