Очень хорошо, немного подредактировала - My name is Anastasia. I am eleven years OLD. I live in Moscow, THE capital of Russia. I am in the fifth GRADE. I AM cheerful and kind. I have many friends. I HAVE long curly hair AND brown eyes. I AM TALL. MY friends consider ME NICE  (MY FRIENDS SAY THAT I AM NICE). I HAVE A BIG FAMILY. THERE ARE FIVE OF US: mom, dad, MY (Older/ younger?) brother, (Older/ Younger?) sister and MYSELF. We live in A small apartment WITH two rooms, a bathroom and A kitchen. I have MY OWN room - it IS small, but cosy. There is A BED, a table, a bookcase, a wardrobe, A TV and A computer. My mother`s name is Olga, SHE IS A bookkeeper. My father`s name is Sergey, HE IS AN engineer. My brother'S NAME IS Alex. HE IS two years OLD AND goes to a daycare. My sister' name is Marina, SHE IS ONLY 8 months old. I like to play with my brother and sister. I love my family very much.