Heartfelt Whistle

If I whistle to the breeze
Flowing past the trees.
Truly fast and free
And sailing towards the horizon.
A million steps away
To my beloved on the winds. 
If I whistle to the breeze
With all my heart,
Would you ever hear me?
I am an amateur at writing, so any advice is appreciated. My writing is very stiff and I'm kinda antisocial.
This poem was written while moving away from a close person and leaving without being able to say farewell.
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