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So, most of us know a writer that mysterious disappeared on here, did you get it? Well, who I am talking about Verduisterend. And she was extremely friendly and just boom, gone. I want to present this story to her presence, and maybe, she'll come back. Who knows.
These characters are all fictional and do not base off of one's liking nor personality. More are included throughout the story and I do hope you enjoy! Also, if you already know who I am, you do, try not to point out the similarities between myself and this user. And a last thing, this will be posted underneath Verduisterend's Stories so you can read some others by her.
Main Characters
Tyger | Female | Warrior of BrokenClan
Owl | Female | Warrior of BrokenClan
Kudu | Female | Leader of BrokenClan
Spider | Female | Leader of BrokenClan
Lynx | Female | Warrior of BrokenClan
Extra Characters
Lion | Male | Deputy of BrokenClan
Screenshot_2016-07-23_at_4.41.53_PM.png|The Five by The Shadowed Wolf
Screenshot 2016-07-24 at 1.54.28 AM.png|Spider & Owl by The Shadowed Wolf
Screenshot 2016-07-24 at 5.44.39 PM.png|Tyger by The Shadowed Wolf
Screenshot 2016-07-25 at 10.42.38 AM.png|Spider & Lynx by The Shadowed Wolf
Screenshot 2016-07-25 at 10.21.59 AM.png|Tyger by The Shadowed Wolf
Screenshot 2016-07-27 at 4.32.38 PM.png|Tyger and Kudu by The Shadowed Wolf
Extras
Main Author | Watch The Sky Fall
Photo Editor | Drifting Spirit
Main Illustrator | XxVillainousxX
Main Illustrator | The Shadowed Wolf
Dedicated To
Verduisterend
AnimalJamRoleplayer
Thedarkomen21
XxFade1200
WarriorCat123
Echoingsoul
Prologue
The tragic world of failure and defeat crushed me as I stared at the four of them, one after another, after another, all in line. And two of their eyes beamed with respect and care, while the other two stared with pity and selfishness. Which finally just happened to land back onto me, I was a nothing, a nobody, I was a failure. Two of them were right, and two, were dead-wrong, with a cat like me trying to improve myself, I wasn't in anything but a hellhole. The serenity of this forest was no match to the force of my emotions. The tranquility of the sky couldn't bare with my obscurity. Because I was, as Spider said before, an idiot.
I never really realized how life struck me so quickly, to be alongside four others, dying to just stretch out my pain as I slowly click my jaw and cringe, watching the dirt dry out,
"You must go." Owl narrowed her eyes to my weakness as I stood blankly, my long, faintly striped tail crossing over my back paws. I stared down to my claws, snapping back furiously,
"I can't. I can't leave this pathetic fake world called life. I can't hide from the truth." My stained teeth bared as I could feel a salty tear roll down my face, "I'm too stupid to be out alone. And I was too stupid to meet all of you."
"Listen, she's right-" Kudu huffed, clearly being obnoxious, "She is better off alone." I stared at Kudu, my face growing solid,
"You are what I never thought you could be."
Chapter One
A Day Long Is A Day Gone With Only A Night To Remember
The frigid worry of the winter's night crumbled into faint sound as it pounded against my fur as a shiver escalated towards my neck from the back of my spine. I closed my eyes in fear as my claws interlocked with the icy cold snow piles as my ginger red fur grew ghastly pale, my light-filled smile was casted a shadow over with a frown. I kept my balance, trudging onwards as I seethed, tumbling into the deep powder, my breath growing thin. Gasping for a sign of a harsh screech, not a sound could be heard of the snow that fallen, crushing her fresh-made paw prints. Hauling myself upwards, everything began to slow, the dabs of hail cooling down as I released my worry, grappling the crusty snowfall. I trudged on. I trudged on.
The weary grew as I lost my strength, plummeting into the light drizzle, my bright amber eyes changing to a deep chocolate brown. I laid on my side, the falling sounds of the angered clouds becoming more gentle as my bones ached in a place where only a black hole Sun would assist, no figure becoming available. With hope of the Sun, the twilight slate-colored moonlight pressed to show in between the faint grey dust, the sky falling transparent as my hazel eyes gleamed in the hollow light. The sound of silence leaned to me and softly spoke into my ear of a savior at dawn towards the new day. The forest glowing with murky white and no prey to live off, a deep bite of ice is all I could take, and I took it.
I never really thought about the satisfaction of the sticky ice wrap through the ruffles of my tongue with it's melting pores slide down my throat to end my gulp with a crisp crunch. The wind began to pick up a bit, flowing throughout my first ear across to the second as I attained some power, getting me back up to my feet. With the wind pushing against my hollow build, my paws were spread out wide, the thin flesh helping me stay up as I lightly tapped the cooling snow, making my way down to the forest; Coille, I called it. My tail dragged behind me, against the snowflakes, leaving a fresh trail with the flakes piercing harmlessly into my fur. Coille was among my nearest stake as I wafted the un-scented air with bundles of my amber pelt falling into my eyes.
Coille was inches away from my button nose as the moonlight felt dim as it died, covered by the misty fog. I hung my head low, an excruciating pain to my tendons as I snapped down, the trail of what seemed so far was now in front of me. I grunted, breathing heavily as my hind legs became tingle and dropped numb. The sky was broken is a million of pieces with the clouds scattered around, as I gazed upwards, stars shone above, twinkling with failure and defeat but one sparkled large and that was one called hope.
~
Coille greeted to me with a couple of fallen snow-capped trees and an icy trail. I stepped onto the loose pebbles, struggling to stay on all fours as I whipped my head backwards as a pure black cat chuckled, her piercing yellow eyes driving through my soul,
"Hard times, ain't it?" I nearly leaped out of my skin, staring at her, 
"Who are you. And why are you here." I hissed at her, clicking my teeth as a smirk was plastered onto that dark, ominous mouth, fang-like teeth sticking out from her gums.
"The name's Spider" The feline easily slid in front of me, circling with her tail placed under my chin forcing my eyes to look into hers, "And what kinda idiot do you think I am? I live here, dork." I was speechless as she started walking away, "Come along now."
My eyes widened, me? She wants this ginger, alone, helpless cat, to go with her? I guess Spider was just too blind to see the stupidity in front of her face, I thought as I slipped, bounding off the ice and onto her trail. "So..why do you want an idiot like me to go with you?"
"Because," Spider huffed, blowing the fur from out of her eyes, "It's like there's anything better to do. And I got a friend to show you." 
"A friend?" I blurted out, raising the tufts of fur above my eyes, She couldn't possibly be serious. The sky appeared murky as the moonlight faded, painting an inequality of a scale of grey in the sky as I followed Spider, who I could barely see at this time, but her eyes led me to an utterly strange area of Coille, The Crystal Caverns. "You live- here?"
"Mhm." Spider escalated atop a stone slab, gnawing at a sparrow bone, old and decaying, "I'll get her tomorrow morning, just sleep here until dawn."
"Really?" I asked as my chocolate eyes switched to a bright amber. My torn ears flicked as one of my legs fell underneath me and bumping into the terrain, face up with Spider so speedily was in front of my nose,
"Really."
Chapter Two
A Befriending Demotion
"Wake up Sleepy-head," Spider bit into my tail as I yelped almost silently as she purred with her normal sarcasm, "Congrats you made it throughout the night. Hey Owl! I'd like you to meet-"
Spider began to echo throughout the glimmering caverns as she bent down, "What's your name again?"
"Tyger." I felt queasy as the pure glossy feline shouted again with a wink, "Tyger! Pfft, I totally knew that."
I could seek a dark chocolate and deep black dappled colored feline with a white undercoat and striking green eyes ambled out towards us, squinting at myself and blowing the loose fur that tickled her nose. She dropped the 'cool act' and smiled, trotting up and kicking the crusty pebbles with her back paws. Owl was just around the same height and age as myself, being slightly taller for my breed's sake as she held out her long, flat tail, "Hey Tyger."
"So? How's it going with you two?" Spider forgot all about how we just meet as I replied whispering, "Spider...we..uh, Just kinda, sorta met...yeah..."
"What she said." Owl chuckled a bit nervously as her splattered pelt ruffled in the hardly noticed breeze, "I'm gonna go talk with her for a bit."
Spider nodded as Owl gripped her wide paws onto the forest floor and bounded off to the creek which wasn't too far away from here. The dawn sky was smeared with morning reds and oranges with the sun peeking across the deep beige mountains as the clouds were cloudless in the springtime air. Coille seemed to smile at Owl too, and it felt like the two of us were going to have many things in common.
"Don't mind Spider, she's a bit, you know," I laughed as Owl acted like she was being shot with a sleeping dart, "So, Tyger, how did you manage to even find Coi- I mean the forest! Yeah, the forest."
"Well-" I finally realized how she didn't say Coille, something, didn't seem correct, "I'll, uh, I'll tell you later, it's uh, long story. So, how did you get to know Spider?"
"We were, pfft, like kits when we met and it's been a great deal of fun with her." She paused, "But everything feels like change. And I didn't want that. She's more, well, dark, no pun intended. Spider is pretty shady now-a-days and she knows I don't trust her fully again. She's trying to find that fork in the trail, ya know?"
I nodded, "So, change, huh?"
"Yeah, it's like that day when another Clan raids our camp. It's crazy."
"You're in a Clan?" I asked as my eyes filled with delight.
"Deputy of FallenClan, she's well, the leader. But I think you have a good chance of becoming an elite, ya know?" I half-smiled, kind of liking how when Owl ended with the same two words when she tried to make a point across. "Besides, I'll talk to her right now, Just stay here."
I nodded. And I nodded again.
~
I stepped into camp with my ears pinned to the back of my head as I followed Owl and she leapt atop a stone with Spider aside her. For some reason, something seemed different as Owl's eyes were filled with determination, and Spider's as a daunting almost menacing glare and she smirked, my amber eyes wandering back and forth from each of them. Spider stepped forward, a half-smile stapled to the edge of her mouth with her tail finding its way to the bottom of my chin again, "Well, nothing but a mouse's brain seems to be in this pile of fox dung."
My gaze flashed with confusion as Spider spat between her teeth, many of the other members laughed as Owl was sitting, stunned. I kinked my long auburn tail around my slender legs, Spider was stashed with more insults. It's like she didn't even listen to what Owl was talking about. "You know what? You would do a fantastic job, oh fantastic atat being a warrior, I would honor you, no lie. But here, in FallenClan, you gotta earn your way here, and all you present to me is a worthless kit and a foolish mind."
"Listen, I don't think-" 
"Silence, scrap. My rules, not yours. I want the camp spotless by dawn. No excuses." Now almost the entire Clan tried to hold back from bursting as I opened my mouth to say something, but silence spoke for itself. Spider chuckled, "You'll be a good prisoner, perhaps the only one, and I'll make you the only one." 
The sarcasm escaped her raspy voice as her eyes shrank to slits with my pupils dilating as well, "And last thing, don't try to get out of it. You won't. Unless, maybe we could kill you now. Oh no, I'm way nicer than that. I'll let you live, runt, but you work for us. And only us."
She smiled as if nothing happened as Owl hopped down from the stone, about to hiss but only to hush when Spider faced her, clicked her jaw and strutted off with her entourage behind her. She walked with her chin, chest and tail facing to the slowly fading sky as Owl whispered, "Something- Something's not right."
And off she went, following the rest of the Clan before I could reply, the silence of no words leaped off my tongue and vanished in the air as if a tree fell with no one to hear it's sound, "I know....And I'm gonna change it."
Chapter Three
Listen
As may or may not predicted, the camp was left the camp. Why bother trying to clean it? Not like I had any chances. Spider snarled, "Man, you really do have your hopes up. You want to come here and show me something I hadn't already saw. What a foolish kitty you are. What a stupid, stupid mind you have. What kind of honored warrior are you!"
Coille, still as my eyes circumscribed to Spider's as I leaned forward, giving her a nasty scar under her right eye. Compressed to lines, Spider leaped forward, blinding my left eye before something else hit her. And me as well. Owl had me pinned with another, unknown, lynx-like feline atop of Spider. The Clan watched silently as a battle arose, but both Owl and this other cat had us both down, she whispered into my ear, loud enough for the other two to hear, "Just listen to her."
"Yeah, idiot! You just listen to me," Spider kicked off the larger cat, tackling Owl as my paws sunk into the gravel, releasing and driving my claws into the obscure, cat, Spider, to be pinned down again by that same whispy lynx cat.
~
My eyelids fluttered open as I stared up to see Owl and the other mystery feline were sitting across from me, both of them were relieved to see me alive, "She-uh-She hits pretty hard sometimes."
"Who?" I questioned as I forgot about what we were talking about, staring at the bulky slate colored cat, "Who are you?"
"Lynx, a, well, not so good friend of Spider now-a-days. And I was talking about Spider. She almost killed you!" Lynx purred, swaying her tail as she leaned onto Owl, "I tried so hard, she's in the medic's den...She..She exiled you, Tyger."
Frazzled of how Lynx even knew my name, I stood, falling face down to the rocks, as my legs were strained, I couldn't see out of my left eye, "We left too, ya know..."
Owl's voice dashed through my left ear and out to my right. They left? But why? My mouth hung open as I couldn't even say an apology, was it that bad? All I could do is stared at them in silence, not moving a muscle, everyone is just- everything is happening so fast. Out of the corner of my eye, a silhouette danced at the dawn of a painted, transparent background, as it was a whisp of air, an omen perhaps. They did the right choice, Coille responded with glee.
"Anything else-To tell me, that is?" I asked as a moment of quietness passed by, the two of them had a feeling they knew about the omens as well. Owl smiled, Lynx stretched, but I could see she was happy too. The dappled, black and white, with a pallet of brown spoke, "You're not alone, we're going to stand by you."
I smiled and followed them as they rolled by more and more wonders of Coille, tripping up some loose crinkled leaves and rocks, out of FallenClan territory and into another unknown place, Lynx restrained from grinning, "Did I ever tell you that I was a co-deputy?"
The sun arose, beaming its burning rays upon the territory in streaks of light and shadows, the small particles traveling upwards as I chuckled, stepping in and out of the light as we roamed. The three of us, loners, came across a small-bound creek and Lynx finally released a small giggle, pushing Owl into the water, "Think fast!"
Owl drove herself underwater and popped back up again, dragging Lynx which held onto me and we all were in the creek, splashing each other around as the birds began to chirp, singing a happy, gleeful song. It was a good day, and all alone, we're the three of us, loners, rogues, outcasts, leavers but believers. Yeah, believers is what we were.
Chapter Four
Shaken Like A Rag Doll
The illustration of the painted bittersweet skies of Coille presented a unique placement of the descending nightfall as I caught myself ambling along the glistening beams of the dimmer Sun, Owl and Lynx were talking about, myself silenced as we walked. Creating not an issue, I turned, facing the horizon line before glancing down towards my reflection in the sun-down lake. My look-alike had a brighter lining of hope, another omen casted, a few clouds covered the light, a darker, erie, whispy haze across my paws. My eyes wandered around, no sign of Owl or Lynx and I grew uneasy, the lake seemed to vanish in front if my eyes. And there it was.
I felt my body shaken like a rag doll as I was pinned to the ground, its glare piercing into me, goosebumps continued to pop up every now and then. It stared at me, and another. And another. And another. They surrounded me and I couldn't even wail for help as the pain kept driving into my shoulders and up into my mind, tricking me. The faces were too unfamiliar, and I never had seen them before. "Well, look who Spider brought us. A couple kittypets, hmm?"
Her voice faded and echoed across the collapsed area, the run-down part of Coille as the fog began to up rise, revealing two other figures, both pinned by two other obscure and darkly covered figures. Lynx nearly pushed one figure off but was brought down again, it was strong. And- Spider. She had Owl pinned, and something went dead wrong. The one who pinned me, her eyes flashed death as she nodded to the two other figures, who leaped off of Owl and Lynx. They both stayed on the ground and I did as well. Spider kicked up some air and smirked along side the two others who had us pinned, a male and a female, it still was assured odd. "Well, not an answer, kill them now I suppose."
"Give them a bit more, a chance, if that's what you call it." Spider hissed to the other female, eyes of flame and fury, "Besides, they are too weak to be manipulated."
"Fine," The first, lighter creme colored feline kicked up more of the mist to show more and more large felines, she stepped in front of me, "Hey Ginger, you against Spider. Featherneck, against Lion, and we can have pretty grey cat against me."
"Oh Kudu, we have a wonderful pairing, are you sure you want this poor kitty to die today?" Spider mocked as she bounded atop of me, digging her claws into my chest. I kicked her off, swiveling around as I dragged my teeth and claws to the back of her neck and back, pinning her face down. I inhaled as Owl skillfully mixed up Lion in which he was plummeted to the dirt with his eyes darting around. Spider hissed, trying to get me off before I gave her a nice long scar across the back of her neck before dashing off with Owl to help Lynx. With myself and Owl, we dug our claws into Kudu, freeing Lynx as my ancle grew twisted and I fell down, Kudu snapped, "Alright! Get these cats off me!"
After I was left on the forest floor, Kudu strongly steeped in front of me, leaning down so there was no choice of not staring at her straight in her turquoise eyes, "Welcome to BrokenClan. And you gotta serve us now, kitty cat. Oh, don't know me? Well, I'm Kudu, your little friend beat my mate, Lion and well, you know Spider. You work for us and nobody else. Understand?"
I glared towards Kudu, nodding as she didn't put us as prisoners as Spider hoped, but warriors, and I did enjoy that. We were only elated until when a time did come, with another omen to be presented. But that didn't happen, like I wished for, we are still warriors, trapped against our will.
Chapter Five
In a Living Hell
I placed myself-no, I sprinted, sprinted hard, and long, crying. Why did they have to leave me alone like this. Why was it me. Why, why why. Kicking up the loose pebbles in my way, flying past the shadowed trees, catching a tossed red whisp at the corner of my eye, an unfortunate omen, speaking to me. Turn back now, turn back now. No. I refused to shift my gaze, locking my eyes onto the borderline, diving past it, hearing a call behind me, "You pest! Get away from us!"
Us. It was always that word, the word I could never utter since the death of my father. Always a never-ending war between him and myself.
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