Rini's Horrible Death

Rini's Horrible Death is a Sailor Moon chapter story written by Queen of the Ramen. It is the first real story to be written by her. It is arguably one of the worst stories ever written mainly due to an atrocious plotline involving child abuse.
== General Information ==
*Title: Rini's Horrible Death
*Author(s): Queen of the Ramen
*Genre(s): Horror/Angst
*Date of Publication: August 28, 2004
*Story Rating: M
*Status: Complete
== Characters (In Order of Appearance) ==
*Serena Tsukino
*Prince Darien
*Rini Tsukino
*Luna
== Storyline ==
The story begins with Serena getting annoyed about Rini interfering with her relationship with Darien. She is annoyed to a point that she wants to murder her, and has the perfect plan for it.
Thus, she tricks Rini about Darien arranging a party for her in a nearby cave. Convinced, and promising to act surprised, she enters the cave, only to find that it is a trap and is promptly knocked out.
In the next paragraph, Rini is awake and strapped to a table by metal restrains on her wrists and ankles tightly holding her in place. She tries to transform, but to her dismay, Serena took her pink heart brooch. Rini goes into a sobbing fit, profusely apologizing to Serena. She tells her sorry isn’t going to work this time. 
In the next chapter, Serena grabs her pinkie and brutally saws it off. She continues to saw off all nine of her other fingers, slapping, hitting and punching Rini to keep her awake. Serena removes a scalpel, saying that she must remove Rini’s heart for trying to take Darien away. Rini eventually dies from blood loss, and Serena stomps and spits on her heart. She then transforms into Sailor Moon, using her tiara magic to trigger a landslide, trapping Rini’s corpse inside.
She uses her Luna pen to transform into herself with no blood. Serena goes home and takes a long bath after taking her guise off. After getting dressed, she tells Luna that Rini went back to her own time without saying goodbye. The story ends with Serena’s mother announcing the at lunch is ready, and them never seeing Rini again.
== Reception ==
This story received a series of mixed reviews. Many people have praised Rini's character bashing, while an equal amount has opposed it. It is arguably declared as one of the worst fan fictions ever written.
The FanFic Critic argues that anyone who thought it was good was "as fucked up as the author is" (this is uncensored on the actual Reviews page). She even made a video arguing that Rini was Serena's "future child", whom she brutually assaulted.
Psychid (Psychid45 on the Wiki), a user once familiar with the Sailor Moon franchise, thanked the FanFic Critic on the video's commentary for warning him about what he called a "story that's almost as disastrous as My Immortal". In the actual reviews, he gives the same review for both chapters: "Mindless, out-of-character-ness and a truly atrocious plotline help this story live up to its name--it's downright horrible."
Nickspaz16 (supposingly Nickspaz17) simply said "... Go jump off a cliff." on the second chapter.
Voltalia the Majestic One (Dinatimus on the Wiki) called the author a "heartless bitch" and compared her to Charles Manson and Ted Bundy. She even went out of her way to claim that the fanfic portrayed Serena in a way "that would make Naoto Takeuchi go into a deep depression!" She then closed her review by telling the author they would stew in Hell forever.
== See Also ==
*List of fan fictions considered the worst
== External Links ==
*Rini's Horrible Death on FanFiction.Net
*Reviews for Rini's Horrible Death on FanFiction.Net
*FanFic Critic Episode 106: "Rini's Horrible Death" on YouTube
*FanFic Critic Episode 106: "Rini's Horrible Death" Commentary on YouTube
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