Taken

Hi, Taken is a story I actually came up with on the bus. At the moment I'm just planning my story, but I'm going to put up a summery for people to think about.
==Summery==
She's showing interest. We're going to have to take her soon.
Set in 2025, Julie Potter rides the bus to school every morning in a normal routine. She notices the small things, like one morning when someone didn't come out of their house and out towards the bus. She understood that the girl might be away, but when it happens the next day, she starts to get suspicious and also rather paranoid.
The people who live in the house notice this and think that they must take action and it has to be now!