The Dragonet Prophecy rewritten (Senseless Edition)

=== Introduction ===
So the dragonet prophecy was a very fun book and started an amazing ride with ups and down throughout the arc and series as a whole. However, there are some flaws with it and some things that I just generally don’t like. I won’t only just be fixing the flaws in this book, but I will also be adding in some things and major plot details that I think would add more depth to the book, remove some stuff I don’t see fit, and add stuff to make my remake unique from the rest. Here’s some major changes I will be making 
* Clay still hatches first, however, he does not attack the other eggs. 
* Glory is completely cut from the script 
* The prophecy also includes an icewing 
* The skywing egg survives 
* Webs and Dune will be good guardians, however, Kestrel will force them to be harsh 
* Kestrel is just an absolute a-hole 
* Instead of wanting Glory dead, Morrowseer wants Sunny dead 
*The dragonets don’t try to escape, instead, Morrowseer comes early to make sure Sunny is dead and then Scarlet arrives after a scout said they saw a nightwing.
*Scarlet realizes they are the dragonets, however she does not keep Peregrine prisoner, instead she sees the rift between Pere and the rest of a dragonets, so Scarlet tries to establish a motherly relationship with Pere 
-Senseless Existence 
When the war has lasted twenty years 
The dragonets will come 
when the land is soaked in blood and tears, 
The dragons will come 
For wings of ice search the shore
For an egg from the core 
Find the seawing egg of deepest blue 
wings of night shall come to you 
For wings of earth search threw the mud 
For an egg the color of dragon blood 
Hidden alone from the rival queens, the sandwing egg awaits unseen 
The largest egg on mountain high 
will bring to you wings of Sky 
Of three queens who Blister, blaze, and burn 
three shall die and one shall learn 
If she bows to a fate that is stringer and higher 
she will have the power of Wings of Fire 
Five eggs to hatch in brightest night 
Five dragonets born to end the fight 
Darkness will rise to bring the light 
The dragonets are coming… 
== Prologue ==
Hvitur ran across the desert, near the edge of a cliff. He didn’t dare fly, Burn would spot him before he could say “penguin”. In his arms he held and icewing egg. He had to get this egg back to the cave before Burn caught him. 
The heat of the desert pounded on Hvitur. The brightest night was tomorrow, if this egg broke, then there was no time to find a substitute egg. So Hvitur ran as fast as his legs to take him. But soon, dread came over him as he heard a roar. He knew that roar. The roar of Burn.
The dangerous sandwing princess landed beside Hvitur. “Why is an icewing in the middle of the desert with his egg? Oh wait, is that egg even yours?” Burn laughed cruelly.
“That egg looks as if it’s about to hatch. But tonight is the brightest night, isn’t it? This couldn’t have to do with a prophecy, could it?” Burn asked. 
“N-no I’m trying to get back to this egg’s mother.” Hvitur lied. 
“Don’t lie to me.” Burn roared, shredding Hvitur’s wing. 
Hivitur roared in pain, then Burn turned to him again. “Don’t worry, it will be over soon.” Burn laughed, throwing Hvitur off the cliff. 
Unable to fly, Hvitur knew he was dead. But I’ll save the egg. He curled his wings, talons, and tail around the egg, rested his neck on it, and roared into his back right before he hit the ground, just to try to save the egg. Before he died, he heard a voice and saw a seawing walk up to him.
“Hvitur!” Webs said urgently, shaking him. Hvitur let go of the egg. Webs looked shocked, as he picked up the unhurt egg. “We will remeber you, Hvitur.” Webs said, picking up the egg and flying off.
Kestrel roared in frustration. Where we’re Webs and Hvitur? Kestrel was busy enough after having to find the mudwing egg after Asha died. The mudwing, sandwing, nightwing, and skywing egg were safe. But they needed six eggs, not four. Finally, Webs returned alone, but with an icewing egg and a seawing egg. 
“Where in the moons is Hvitur?” Kestrel demanded.
Dune came in, hearing commotion. “Dead.” Webs panted. 
“Burn killed him. But he managed to protect the egg.” Webs explained. “Well quickly put them with the rest, the mudwing is hatching.” Kestrel snapped. 
Webs put the two eggs beside the rest. The mudwing began to hatch first. A tiny crack appeared on the egg, followed by another until a tiny piece of the shell broke open. A talon stuck through, and then a head. Soon a dragonet climbed out of the egg. But the dragonet just kind of sat there. “It’s just sitting there like a block of clay.” Kestrel growled.
Dune laughed. “How about we name him Clay then?”
Then the next egg began to hatch, the icewing. This dragonet was much faster at hatching than the MudWing, a crack firmed then a head popped up right after, and the dragonet climbed out, but fell over before it jumped up onto Web’s talon. “Aww, it likes me.” Webs smiled, picking up the dragonet. 
“I’ll name you, Snowdrift.” Webs decided. 
“Dumb names, you all come up with. I get to name the skywing.” Kestrel said, as the skywing hatched. 
She examined the dragonet carefully. She noted the short, narrow snout, angular wings and sharp eyes, she also saw very sharp talons and a short, thin tail. “She will be, Peregrine Falcon.” Kestrel decided.
“That’s a mouthful, let’s just call her Peregrine or Pere.” Dune said.
“Fine, but that’s a rather bland name dont you think? Just as bland as Dune is.” Kestrel growled.
== Chapter One ==
Peregrine heard shouting from Kestrel in the combat cave, as usual. Peregrine walked over to the den, her talons scrapping against the hard stone floor. She saw Clay walk out with a few cuts and a burn across his side. Kestrel walked out of the cave, her massive wings at her side. 
“Peregrine, come on it’s time for your training.” Kestrel said with a calm voice.
Peregrine walked into the cave. Kestrel was always softer on Pere, most likely because she was a skywing, or only she and Tsunami enjoyed battle, however Tsunami hated Kestrel, so Peregrine got Kestrel’s attention.
“Remember the weakest parts of a dragon?” Kestrel asked.
“The tip of the tail, the neck, the wings and the eyes.” Peregrine recited.
“Very good,” Kestrel said, pleased.
”Now begin!” Kestrel suddenly snapped. 
Peregrine leapt at Kestrel with well-aimed blows to the chest and back.
Kestrel pushed Peregrine back and gave her a small gash on the leg. 
Peregrine leapt back again with a kick to the face, scratching Kestrel’s forehead. 
Kestrel gave Peregrine a blow to the stomach, knocking the wind out of Pere. 
Peregrine landed on the stone ground, and panted, regaining her breath. 
Kestrel took the chance to whip Pere with her tail. 
Peregrine shot right back up and leapt at Kestrel, using her tail as a dagger to stab Kestrel in the chest.
Kestrel roared in pain and shot fire at Peregrine, hitting the side of her wing.
”Gah!” Peregrine shouted in pain, but she quickly leapt again and gaze a well-aimed blow to the side of the neck. 
Kestrel spread her wings out, the signal to stop fighting. 
“Very good, for a dragonet your size.” Kestrel commented. 
Peregrine nodded at the compliment and walked over to the corner of the room where the medical supplies was. She soaked a rag in cold water and put it on her burn, before wrapping bandages around her wounds. 
Kestrel walked over beside Peregrine, and began treating her own wounds too. 
Peregrine walked out of the cavern into the main area, where Snowdrift was sitting, eating a walrus. “Mind sharing?” Pere asked. 
“Not at all,” Snowdrift replied, passing a piece of the walrus to Peregrine 
Peregrine ate the chunk of flesh. “I don’t know why you don’t like battle training, it’s fun! And kestrel is a great teacher.” Peregrine said to Snowdrift. 
”Yeah I prefer to not be killed.” Snowdrift growled. 
”Peregrine you are always bragging so much about how good you are at training, so how about you go out there and save the world, and I will stay here and finish my walrus alone.” Snowdrift snapped. 
Peregrine was surprised at the sudden change in tone. She got up, but before walking away, she roasted the walrus with her fire, knowing that the icewing hated cooked food. 
“See ya around!” She laughed and walked away. 
== Chapter Two ==
Pere woke up to the whispers of Kestrel, Dune and Webs. Peregrine got her own den, underneath the guardians. To quote Kestrel, “You are a growing SkyWing, you need more space.” She had told Peregrine. 
But even Pere knew it was to keep her from fighting with the other dragonets. But I guess this is a good solution, Peregrine thought. 
Peregrine pricked up her ears and walked as quietly as possible to the edge of her room to listen in.
“Morrowseer can’t come tomorrow! He will see the state of the dragonets!” Webs hissed quietly. 
“Well that skywing will be fine, she fights well, trains well, and listens well. It’s just a bonus that all the others hate her, and we all know how Morrowseer feels about separate tribes caring for each other.” Kestrel said.
“Well is that all you care about? The skywing? What will Morrowseer think of us as guardians when he sees that SandWing! And the nightwing is too cowardly, and the mudwing only cares about stuffing his face.” Dune replied.
”The seawing and skywing will work, and the icewing might be okay. But let’s wake up the dragonets and make them look as best as possible, to mask some of the disappointment.” Kestrel growled.
Kestrel hopped down from her cave and roared. “DRAGONETS!” She hissed. “WAKE UP AND GET OVER HERE!” 
Peregrine walked out from her cave. She fluffed up her wings and sat in front of Kestrel. 
Soon, the other dragonets came out clearly tired. 
Kestrel breathed fire at the dragonets to wake them up. Their heads swerved away as the fire barely missed them. 
“There, now that you are fully awake I have some important news.” Kestrel said, straightening up her posture.
”Morrowseer is to arrive in three hours, to check you to make sure you qualify for saving the world.” Kestrel growled slightly. 
“I expect some of you to make yourself seems aggressive and presentable. For others, I know you won’t qualify, but at least make it look like we tried.” Kestrel peered at Sunny. 
Sunny had a shocked look but tried to seem calm.
”Glory,” Kestrel hissed.
”Morrowseer will gut us if he thinks that Webs was so incompetent he got a RainWing and not a SkyWing. So, act as much like a SkyWing as possible. Change your scales red and orange and hide your frill as much as you can. We will say you are a hybrid if Morrowseer notices that you are a RainWing, so follow that story or we’ll kill you ourselves.” Kestrel growled.
Glory looked furious, but nodded slowly, adjusting her scales and frill to appear as a SkyWing, and it worked quite well. 
“Now then, neaten up and get yourselves presentable. Peregrine Falcon, come with me.” Kestrel said calmly for once. 
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