Ultimate Fanon Con 2019 Notes

==WRITING CONTEST==
===Tepig's Entry===
* The introduction description has some weird grammar but generally gets the detailing right.
* Basic family introduction but I guess it gets the job done
* HER BROTHER AND MOM SUMMON A DEMON WHO IS ACTUALLY HER ESTRANGED FATHER WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON
* Demon dad shows up and for some reason Lily isn't in on any of this weird magic shit???
* Okay so she escapes her demon dad and evil family and then the dad gives the son his robes so he can go capture Lily and then names him Darkstar
* 
*hits blunt*
* w h a t
===Hannah's Entry===
* AU Ben alright
* One Punch Ben
* >Bad Ben backstory
* o shit nice twist
* extra points for working in the "everyone's just desperate" thing
===Aaron's Entry===
* some worldbuilding mythos about why Chronosapiens won't travel into the future
* ha virgin fires you mean like apollo haha *dab*
* Paradox plays in neat
* okay so the reason the Chronosapiens won't travel into the future anymore is because the future is scary
* well that's fucking underwhelming
* rip Retrieval I guess
* really nice worldbuilding but I mean ???
==ALIEN CONTEST==
===OTG's Entry===
* Alright design.
* Obviously based on Pokemon but still distinct enough.
* Powers are interesting in theory but without limits on them this thing is way too OP.
===Aaron's Entry===
* Worldbuilding aspect is detailed as ever.
* Very alien design.
* Not the first time I've seen this type of summoning but that's just because Bionicle is batshit insane. Still unique.
* Powers are well-detailed. Solid alien.
===Boaring's Entry===
* Very nice art but very generic fantasy monster design.
* Hand mouths are unique but everything else feels very by-the-books.
* Not a bad alien but very generic.
===Shadow's Entry===
* Basically a walking fax machine but for EVERYTHING.
* Which is actually a really cool power.
* The design feels really disjointed RIP.
* Badass concept for an alien tho.
===Ethan's Entry===
* swampfire scorbunny swampfire scorbunny
* The art looks very nice but the general design and concept aren't really working for me.
===Atom's Entry===
* A bit difficult to make out the design because of how small the image is, but the description of it sounds neat.
* The telekinesis seems kind of random.
* Otherwise, the powers fit the alien's theme but don't do anything particularly interesting with it.
===Sol's Entry===
* I know it's not an Alien X knockoff Sol my question is WHY DID YOU MAKE IT LOOK LIKE AN ALIEN X KNOCKOFF
* Design aside, the concept is interesting and the powers fit very nicely.
* Great concept, goddammit why did you go with that design tho.
===WTB's Entry===
* Very detailed but also literally Godzilla.
* I mean extra points for throwing in some Shin Godzilla stuff but it's still Godzilla.
* Overall I give it a Godzilla out of Godzilla, very Godzilla.
==CHARACTER CONTEST==
==ART CONTEST==