Retaintale

Retaintale is an AU that is made by Jude Shotto (aka. Peter Vidani) on Tumblr.
(Sorry if there are lack of Chapters; they are working on it. Don't rush them!)
==Story ==
===Chapter 1 ===
Frisk has fallen on the bed of flowers after falling into Mount Ebott, with scratches and cuts on their face (some cuts bleeding). While Frisk was getting up, they heard a voice. 
It was Chara (who is a ghost). Chara was shocked that Frisk can hear them. Chara introduces themself. Then, there was awkward silence (while Chara was waiting for a handshake from Frisk due to Frisk hesitating; which they eventually did). Frisk doesn't know what was going on and was confused. Chara then laughs and tells some puns (such as "Don't worry, you, know the place!" and I'll try not to be -ponsible!" Frisk gets annoyed (like in Undertale Papyrus reacts when Sans tells a bad pun), but doesn't say anything. Frisk thought that they met someone normal. 
Frisk tells Chara to come with them. Frisk sees a living flower (Flowey), who was crying. Chara then remembered about the good times they had with Asriel (where Asriel cries a lot, how Asriel found them, when they played with each other, etc.). Frisk comes to Flowey with a stick, but trips on a rock and going a face-plant into the ground (Which Chara tells a pun about it). 
Flowey introduces himself. (Flowey thinks that saying "Howdy" is making him sound old, so he says "Y-yo" instead). Chara was suspicious of Flowey. Flowey calls Frisk a "kid" (like Sans does with Frisk in Undertale). He teaches Frisk about their SOUL and LV (which he calls it "LOVE"). Flowey tricks Frisk into running into the "Friendliness Pellets" (Which are actually bullets; Frisk gets injured. Chara asks Frisk if they are alright) before showing his true nature (despite realizing that Frisk's eye assemble Chara's when opened). Flowey smiles evily and laughs maniacally. Then, Flowey says "You're still an idiot, Chara... Did you forgot that in this world... ."
Then a woman voice yelled "Enough" before throwing a fire ball at Flowey. It was Toriel! Chara was happy that Frisk was safe, but was worried about Flowey. Toriel introduced themselves to Frisk and explains that seeing monsters that act like Flowey isn't common. Toriel takes Frisk with her. Chara realizes that Toriel is acting "funny" and "weird", making them feel suspicious about her. Frisk was starting to feel uneasy at this point. Toriel explains everything about the Ruins, which was why that Chara admits that was the reason why that it was like Toriel was taking them to an Museum, that this doesn't erase Chara's suspicions on her (due to Toriel giving too much information to an "Intruder" [Frisk]). Chara has also admitted that the Ruins Dummy is irritating to them (while the dummy is annoyed by tired of Frisk's shenanigans.
Then, they encounter a Froggit (which Frisk complements them). Unfortunately, Froggit misunderstood their compliment. Toriel came to help the Froggit understand Frisk. Chara does another pun, "Don't worry, she's this." Toriel taught Frisk all about the puzzles. Toriel tells them that she has to attend to some business and that Frisk will be alone for a while. Before leaving, she brings Frisk a phone. Chara realized that Toriel hesitated, making it weirder and weirder. Frisk was to use the phone to call Toriel, but decided to not to (possibly due to hesitating). 
Chara says that they are not forcing them, but they want to see what Frisk will do. Frisk was visibly flushing and just wants to move on. But Chara begs them to try. Frisk got annoyed, but eventually gives in to Chara's idea. Chara uses the phone and decides to flirt with Toriel (like, "Do you like SAILING? 'Cause I'd SHIP you and me together.") This made Chara regret their own idea, but thought that Frisk's joke was quite cleaver. Toriel thought that it was adorable. Chara admits "Yeah, I have to admit. That was a pretty good idea; Told you it was a good idea. {Such a Tsundere}." Frisk has admits that they don't flirt and talk rarely, saying that it isn't my fault that everything they say is smoother than a "Cream cheese Spread on your {Chara's) Bagel" (while stuttering). Chara was shocked that Frisk has said that to them. Chara remembered that Toriel told Frisk to stay put. 
They encounter another Froggit. Frisk runs off and finds a SAVE-point. Chara says that it's rude to wander off, but Frisk rasberries at them. Chara admits that it was rude of Frisk to do that. Chara finds a bowl of candy in an plant to change Frisk's mind. Chara tells Frisk to get some candy and then go to the room where they previously were, and to wait for Toriel. The bowl says to "take one." However, Frisk more than that. The rest spills to the floor. They encounter (yet another) Froggit and an Whimsum. Frisk dodged their attacks, but got slightly hurt.
Suddenly, Froggit and Whimsum said:
Froggit: "A long time ago, a human fell from the RUINS.... Injured by its fall, the human called out for help."
Whimsum: "ASRIEL, the King's son, heard the human's call. He brought the human back to the castle."
They stopped fighting. It gave Chara a strange feeling. Chara said there are more danger will come to them if they just stayed there. Frisk thought about what Froggit and Whimsum told them while walking through the Ruins (Asriel and the fallen human). Frisk gets interrupted by Chara before they would get lost in their thoughts. All of the sudden, (some sort of red stuff) fell down. Frisk screamed. Frisk encounters (another) Whimsum and an Moldsmal. They explained more about the fallen human and Asriel.
Whimsum: "The human cared for the monsters and overtime, they and ASRIEL became like siblings."
Moldsmal: A plan was presented to the king by the human. A plan to free us all; the underground was full of hope."
Whimsum and Moldsmal eventually left. Frisk thought more about the story (Chara and Asriel becoming siblings; the "plan" to save monsters). Chara guided Frisk the way. According to Chara "Things are getting stranger and strangers." Chara said that it'll be wiser to go back to wait for Toriel. Frisk was goofing around (like "I think that this body'll hold up for another one").As much as Chara admires Frisk's DETERMINATION, they were worried about Frisk's health. Frisk still had 4 monster candy and says that their body was "durable." Chara tells Frisk to not flatter themself. 
Chara asked if the Monster Candy has something can take for it to be called "Monster Candy." Chara tries to tell Frisk not to eat it. Before Chara tries to talk Frisk out of it, Frisk said that they are going to find out. Chara tried to tell Frisk to stop, but it was too late. Frisk tried a piece of Monster Candy; it had an distant, non-licorice flavor. Chara said that their answer was "no" and that Frisk's carelessness is making them worry about their (Frisk's) future choices.
(To Be Continued....)
==Characters Featured==
*Frisk
*Toriel
*Chara (aka. The Fallen Human)
*Flowey
*Asgore (To Be Added...)
*Papyrus (To Be Added...)
*Undyne (To Be Added...)
*Sans (To Be Added...)
*Alphys (To Be Added...)
*Mettaton (To Be Added...)
* Napstablook (To Be Added...)
===Minor Characters===
*Asriel (aka. The king's son)
*Ruins Dummy
*Froggit
*Whimsum
*Moldsmal
* Burgerpants
== AU Changes==
#Frisk, Chara, and Asriel have different colored Sweaters (With Frisk having a blue sweater with an yellow stripe, Chara having an green sweater with two blue stripes, and Asriel having an blue sweater with yellow stripes) in contrast of Undertale Frisk, Chara and Asriel's.
#Flowey's face has a tuff (which assembles hair?) on their head.
==Trivia==
*With Chara thinking that Frisk came down Mount Ebott to end their own life, it is considered that (like Undertale Chara) Frisk came there for an unhappy reason (possibly abuse or bullying), due to the fact that Frisk had cuts and scratches on their face when they fell).
*Toriel loves gardening (like Undertale Asgore does) and makes not only pie, but hot chocolate as well.
*Chara likes puns (like Undertale Sans does).
*The flowers weren't at the place where Frisk fell onto when Chara fell (Ouch!).
*Chara explains that Toriel taught Chara and Frisk about everything in the Ruins, which is the reason why it is like a "Museum."
*Chara does call Frisk a "Tsundere" due to them getting very embarrassed and "pouty(?)" after flirting with Toriel on their phone.
*According to @Versenyy (Someone who is {possibly} friends of Jude-Shotto, "Frisk talks rarely, because after every word they say people fall in love ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) That’s their curse. Curse of introvert."
*The Creator calls Frisk "The Flirt Master."
==Gallery==
File:Retaintale! Frisk by Jude Shotto.png|Retaintale! Frisk by Jude Shotto
File:Retaintale! Toriel by Jude Shotto.jpg|Retaintale! Toriel by Jude Shotto
File:Retaintale! Frisk and Chara by Jude Shotto.png|Retaintale! Frisk and Chara by Jude Shotto
File:Retaintale! Asriel by Jude Shotto.png|Retaintale! Asriel by Jude Shotto
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