A loner's path

Note: All cats here I made up. This is made as a backstory for my kit oc, Cloudkit. This story is about his father.
Warning:
This might contain some elements that might scare young or sensitive readers. You have been warned.
== Allegiances ==
===Cats outside of clans:===
Metal-Ginger tom with green eyes.
Heart-Grey and white she-cat with amber eyes.
Broken-Brown tabby tom
Storm-Grey and white tom with blue eyes
Deer-Brown she-cat. Formally a kittypet
Wolf-Grey tom
Heather-Small white tom
Hole-Black tom
Fall-Black she-cat with one eye missing.
Vile-Brown tabby she-kit
==Prologue ==
"Who's there?" 
The words seem to come out of the Fall as she looked around the forest. The scent of dog caught her attention and she stood still trying to make out were it was. She knew what dogs could do from her mother. Since her death, she had been more careful were she stepped. Her father had sent her hunting and now she was in danger. She fastened herself to the ground suddenly hearing paws coming closer. She braced herself for a dog to burst out of the shadows. Suddenly all her fears came true as the beast charged in. She hoped he wouldn't see her but that wasn't the case. She stood out like the sun at night. The dog noticed her and growled.
This is my chance! She pounced unexpectedly at the dog pushing over the beast, but that wasn't the end of it. It got up struck and blow at her right eye. Suddenly she felt that eyes vision fade and all she could see through it was blood. She sighed running off, blood dripping.
==Chapter 1==
Storm got up from grooming his fur noticing Broken give him a blank stare. 
"Um Hello," Storm mewed nervously.
"Hello," Broken meowed, "I'm going off to help Metal."
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