My Little Pony: Next Generation- The Temple Book

My Little Pony: Next Generation- The Temple Book is a 10 Chapter Fan-Fic by 833time. It takes place nearly 15 years after the events of the My Little Pony Generation 4 Series by Lauren Faust & features original characters, some of which aren't even ponies, but humans. Each of these Chapters were released 3 Fridays seperate per week, following a plot inspired by The Mummy (1999) & TMNT (2007). Original characters Reyna, Ziannombie, Borealis & Hellina were created in July 2018 using Equestria Girls bases from DeviantArt, whereas the villains, Commander Delcoa, Commander Yojies, Craze-Deaf & Commander Loose-Whacks were completely original. The story was written in following months. It would officialy be put to work in May 2019. It was completed in June & the full film launched in December.
== Plot: ==
=== Chapter 1 ===
5,000,00 centuries ago, 5 brothers live in Sparta. 4 of the brothers, known as the Hunimal Commanders, are animal-shaped & gifted with different abilities. Fwogitra, the only normal brother, is the onl brother wothout any special powers. 1 of the Commanders, Commander Delcoa, has a love affair with Hypnosica, Sparta's most feared enchantress. 1 night, when a Spartan soldier walks in unexpectedly, he is horribly slaughtered by the Commanders & Hypnosica for interrupting the affair. Fwogitra & some other Spartans hear screaming & find the dead body. While the Commanders hide, Hypnosica commits suicide for the Commanders to resurrect her, much to Fwogitra's shock. The brothers grab her body & travel to America, where they enter the forsaken Temples of Dimensions, where a magical portal opens & brings Hypnosica back to life, but also enchants Fwogitra with immortality. But Hyumerzo Generals arrest the Hunimal Commanders for their crimes & Hypnosica is sucked away from Earth by the portal. As punishment for their crimes, the Commanders are sentenced to endure the Jofadyoyire, where they are blinded with pepper spray, their brains are removed & the commanders are turned to stone, let upon a curse that plauges Fwogitra. The only way his curse will be broken is by sending all 20 gremlins to the Warti through the portal. If the Commanders were revived before then, they would rise of a threat upon mankind. In Equestria, after 5,000,000 centuries had passed, Twilight Sparkle & her friends are the rulers of Equestria following the battle against Queen Chrysalis, Cozy Glow & Tirek. Life, to them, is wonderful. Meanwhile, in a forest, a terrorist group had just terrorized a local town, but are soon slaughtered by Deadpool, who has arrangements for lunch at McDonald's with 3 girls, Ziannombie, Borealis & 11-year-old Reyna, who at the time is watching SpongeBob on TV, but she hears something & shuts off the TV in fear, believing that it may be monsters coming for her. As she hides behind a chair, she is comforted by Ziannombie & Borealis, but she starts whimpering. Later, she is relieved of her stresses.
=== Chapter 2 ===
The girls arrive at McDonald's, much to Reyna's hopes that she would stop worrying a lot, much to Ziannmbie's surpirise. Reyna sees a dog & think it is adorable. Deadpool arrives & greets the young girl. The 2 start getting along immediately. Once inside, Reyna is stunned that she actually got to meet Deadpool. Suddenly, Fox News reports about a strange temple around the southern border of Equestria. This gets Ziannombie suspicious & surprised, so she looks at a book that reveals the backstory of the Hunimal Commanders. Later, she pays a visit & meets Fwogitra, who kindly takes her on a tour, ending with a giant pit with multiple floors below the main floor. As she looks down into the chasm, she questions the statues. When she leaves, The Mane 6 start to feel suspicious about Fwogitra, believing that something must be done about Fwogitra. Later that night, back at the Temples of Dimensions, Fwogitra enters the penitentiary facility & reanimates his Hunimal Commanders to capture the 20 gremlins.
=== Chapter 3 ===
Meanwhile, Reyna has a nightmare about gremlins haunting her, followed by a jumpscare that ultimately causes her to wake up in fear. The next morning, she wakes up to find Hellina out her window. She tells her that she found something amazing. Later, the girls find the Staff of Sacannas, which was used by The Storm King when he tried to conquer Equestria. As Hellina tries to touch the staff, Viewer Mail interrupts, which allows Reyna to stop her & tell her about her anxiety problems.
=== Chapter 4 ===
Meanwhile, a gremlin hops onto a girl's head, causing her to scream in fear, causing her friend to try & save her by using a gun, but Commander Loose-Whacks, 1 of the commanders, grabs the Gremlin from the girl's head, confusing both girls. Later, Fwogitra honors his brothers for capturing the 1st gremlin. Elisia & Julerine pay a visit, suspicious about the brothers. Yojies, of the brothers, tells them not to worry about it. Meanwhile, Borealis is also suspicious that the Commanders had been set free.  Ziannombie believes that Fwogitra is trying to keep the Earth clean. Reyna is watching the news, overly satisfied  that statues are capturing gremlins. Meanwhile, Silverstream & Gallus are documenting the Temples of Dimensions. At the same time, The Hunimal Commanders travel across the United States & deliver the gremlins to the Temple. Later in Canterlot, Silverstream are at the Castle's courtyard, when Gallus finds the Commanders capturing another Gremlin, but his curiosity accidentally causes a rock to fall off the side, where it lands next to 1 of the Commanders, causing Yojies to believe that Gallus is spying in them. As he climbs up the mountain to the courtyard, Gallus tries to warn Silverstream that that they both need to make an escape. The 2 flee & Yojies gives chase. As they are being persued by the statue, Gallus & Silverstream decide to hide in Twilight's old castle, believing that they will be safe from Yojies, who nonetheless bangs on the front door, attempting to break in & kill them, using his X-ray vision & super-speed, only to be caught by the Royal Guard, causing him to flee. Later, they pay a visit to Twilight, who tells them that it'll be ok. Meanwhile, Rainbow Dash is in Cloudsdale watching the news, concerned about the gremlins, as Commander Delcoa is on TV on the left wing of a plane capturing a gremlin. Confused & disturbed, she tells Twilight what she belives the Commanders are doing is a conspiracy. Meanwhile, Ziannombie, Borealis & Reyna visit Celestia to talk about the Commanders. That night, Commander Delcoa, having captured 2 more gremlins, questions Fwogitra's plans for them & the curse. At the same time, the Mane 6, the girls, the Young 6 & Discord hold a meeting about what will by 12:00 Noon on Friday, with a portal what will open & cause harm to innocent civilians. Borealis thinks it is legends, but Twilight says it is real. Reyna is horrifies, but Rainbow Dash assures hers that they'll figure something out. Back the temple, while Yojies, Craze-Deaf & Loose-Whacks lock a gremlin in a cage, Commander Delcoa enters, believing that Fwogitra is conspiring against them.
=== Chapter 5 ===
2 days later, Ziannombie, Borealis & Reyna are in town when they hear screaming & see a crime heist going on at a local bank. Fortunately, Deadpool arrives, assisted by the Avengers, X-Force & X-Men (offscreen). Reyna is threatened the crime leader, who pulls a gun at her, threatening to kill her, but Hellina comes by her side, promising to defend her, only to be punched into a wall. With nobody to protect her, Ziannombie tells to run for it. As Reyna runs, she is spotted Commander Delcoa, while he & his brothers have 2 gremlins, with only 1 more gremlin to capture, putting a despicable idea into Delcoa's head.
=== Chapter 6 ===
Reyna is all alone by herself from running from the crime heist for 2 hours. She is in the Everfree Forest & 30 minutes of walking, she finds a log as she exits the forest a mile away, exhausted from all the running. She is worried about everything, but hears a strange voice talking to her & stalking her. She gets confused & worried, but the voice promises to help with her problems via magic tricks. Reyna is delighted & wants to know how they can help her. She is then shown a pocket & is told to keep her eyes on it as it swings back & forth. She does so, but feels dizzy, but reveals that she has a thing for gold; it's too beautiful. Suddenly, Commander Delcoa shows in front of her, shocking her in the process. Reyna looks at him admiration in her eyes. Delcoa tricks her into staring into his eyes & hypnotizes her, intending to substitute her for the final gremlin. He tells the now spirally eyed girl to sleep. The hypnotized girl submits to his command & closes her eyes with a smile. While he gets her up off the log, Rainbow Dash is flying up in the sky, but notices that Reyna is in trouble & zooms down to save her. She follows the truck that the Commanders have taken Reyna in, but Commander Delcoa order the driver to boost power, making Rainbow Dash unable to save Reyna. In frustration, she sadly flies to the Canterlot Castle to tell Twilight what happened to Reyna.
=== Chapter 7 ===
Rainbow Dash tells Twilight that Commander Delcoa had captured Reyna. Twilight holds an emergency meeting about what happened to Reyna, but Smolder says that she has heard about the Commanders, saying that Delcoa has a hypnosis ability, believing Reyna must've fallen victim. Silverstream is horrified by this & says that Queen Novo had told her & Skystar these legends when they were little. Rainbow Dash flies off & tells a worried Ziannombie & Borealis that Reyna has been Captured by the Commanders. Horrified, Ziannombie calls Harry the Robot who, after receiving the call, gets the other robots & they go to Equestria to save Reyna. When the team assembles to save her, Fwogitra gets ready for the portal activation. The portal opens through space & lands into the Multi-Floor Pit, indicating that the gremlins will be dragged down to the Warti. From behind, Commander Delcoa greets his brother. He then reveals his betrayal as Reyna opens her still spirally eyes under Delcoa's command, much to Fwogitra's horror as he realizes that he made made a huge mistake. Outside, The Mane 6, Tempest Shadow, The Princesses, The girls, The Young 6, Heavy, Not Chuck, the Robots & the Storm Creatures fight their way into the Temples of Dimensions. Once inside, they split up to find Reyna. While Rainbow Dash begins her search, Fwogitra is sent flying off the balcony, much to her shock & surprise. Above, the Commanders, now true villains again, plan to have Reyna as their slave puppet instead of having her as the last gremlin. Their snake coils her up & she smiles at her masters, letting out a ping, fully under their control. The commanders smile evilly & leave.
=== Chapter 8 ===
Hellina finds the temple, believing that Reyna is inside. She goes in & eventually finds her coiled up. She asks if she is ok, but she doesn't respond. Worried, Hellina walks in front of her & is horrified that spirals had filled over her eyes. She asks her what happened to her, but Reyna says that she is quite happy like this. Hellina intends to snap her out if it, but Delcoa returns & finds her with Reyna, intending to do the same thing to her. He has his snake uncoil Reyna & have her stare at her with her spirals moving so constantly at her while Delcoa does the same, but Hellina shuts her eyes tight & refuses to open them until the spirals go away. Commander Delcoa, however, insists on having Reyna coiled next to her. He has his snake coil both girls up, causing Hellina to open her eyes in horror. Delceoa lies to her that she will be able to escape & hypnotizes her. With both girls under his control, he tells them to sleep. When he leaves, John & Harry, on their search for Reyna, find her & Hellina sleeping together in coils, much to Harry's horror.
=== Chapter 9 ===
Rainbow Dash, concerned about Fwogitra, asks him if he's ok, to which he says he is. As he gets up, Sunset & Twilight confront him & tell him to end the chaos immediately, but he says that he only wanted to end his enchantment & curse by sending the 20 gremlins to the Warti, apologizing for Reyna's sudden dissapearance. Suddenly, the Hunimal Commanders arrive & reveal that they want to stay in their stone form & take over the world. Ziannombie is shocked by Reyna's appearance, the Commanders claim that she & Hellina are their slaves from now on. Silverstream, remembering about the last gremlin, decides to go off & find it. She & the others leave to find it, but with very little time left. The Mane 6 hold off the Commanders by challenging them to a dual, while Twilight, Celestia & Fwogitra send the gremlins into the portal. The Young 6, having found the last gremlin on time, lure it back to the Temples of Dimensions. While everybody fights off the gremlins, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Rarity & Fluttershy fight off the commanders & jump kick them into the portal, only for them the emerge, planning to kill them all & conquer the world.
=== Chapter 10 ===
Fortunately, the Young 6 arrive with the last gremlin behind them. Gallus tells everybody to move out of the way while the Gremlins loses footing & slides forwards. Fwogitra moves the Mane 6 out of the way while the gremlin crashes into the commanders. Upon recovery, the team hears a loud boom & the Hunimal Commanders are dragged to their death with gremlins into the Warti while their curse is broken for good. The team believes that they had won & cheer in victory. Reyna wakes up & is back to normal, hugged by Ziannombie as a result. The Young 6 recover from crashing to a wall, already with no injuries. Ziannombie apologizes to Reyna, but Reyna asks where she is. She & Hellina smile nervously. Fwogitra is happy that his curse is broken. He thanks everybeing for their help. He then leans back over the pit, floats away into the Heavens & peacefully dissipates. Later, after returning home, Reyna has received a letter from Harry & is given a membership in the Jumbo Squad Team. From that point on, she & Hellina, partner up with their friends, the Avengers & the Mane 6 for more exciting adventures.
== Origins: ==
This story shares inspiration from the 2007 animated film, TMNT & Universal Studios' 1999 take of The Mummy. This was created with new characters. Projects & Prototypes of the characters were created in 2018, but it was not revealed to the public until 2019. Around this time, 833time worked on the project in order of the story that he created in 2018 on a Google Doc.
== Trivia: ==
This was the 1st My Little Pony fan-fic to feature Deadpool, SpongeBob, Heavy from Team Fortress 2, Not Chuck from Disney Pixar's Cars & original characters.
This was also 1 of the 1st productions on 833time that featured the Disney villain song "Trust In Me" from The Jungle Book".
The defeat of the Hunimal Commanders was featured in a villain defeats video by LegoBoy Awesomeness.
The Hunimal Commanders & Fwogitra were inspired by both Imhotep from 1999's The Mummy & the Stone Generals from 2007's TMNT. In this case, this brotherhood has 5 siblings. While the commanders were siblings like the Stone Generals, they also met the same fates, but differently. Plus, they share the same & different traits.
* Commander Delcoa represents a lizard-snake reptile. His hypnosis ability was inspired by Kaa from Disney's version of The Jungle Book. Like General Aguila, he also made plans to betray his brother & mistake a being from the final beast. In this case, Reyna was captured by him the same way Leonardo was by the Stone Generals & the 20 gremlins are as the 13 monsters. In the final battle, he faces off with Rainbow Dash.
* Commander Yojies represents a dog-like creature. In some ways, he is similar to Barf from Spaceballs. Like General Gato, the scene where he chases Silverstream & Gallus is nearly similar, as it was inspired from Gato chasing after Raphael & Casey Jones. However, unlike Gato, he also has some sort of X-ray vision, which explains why he was banging on the front door in Twilight's former castle before she took the throne in Canterlot. In the final battle, he faces off with Applejack.
* Commander Craze-Deaf resembles a pig-hog animal. He has similar traits to General Serpiente, as he only says 1 line in the fan-fic. However, unlike Serpiente, he can screech very loudly to trap his enemies. Plus, he is the opposite gender as Serpiente, as Serpiente is the only sister in Yatol's brotherhood. Plus, he seems to be dimwitted due to his cross-eyed condition. In the final battle, he faces off with Rarity.
* Commander Loose-Whacks resembles a duck-bird creature. But while doesn't have feathers, he has a different ability. He shares some traits with General Mono, as he also does not say a word at all. His ability is a super-stomp, which allows him to knock his enemies over. In the final battle, he faces off with Fluttershy.
* Fwogitra is the only human brother. While he does not possess any powerful ability, he is a kind-spirited man who gets along with the other Spartans. He was inspired by Yatol in many ways, as they both were cursed with immortality, while their siblings were turned to stone.
833time also plans a CGI Animated film version of this story.
Hellina announced that there would be an upcoming sequel called "Avengers: Next Generation- The Temple Book 2". The film, compared to this, had much more detail & realism involved, whereas this production mostly lacked these features. The soundtrack was created on FL Studio, mostly using a piano & a violin, whereas the sequel features a soundtrack that uses a full orchestra.
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