Retribution

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Call me vengeance, for I am your retribution.  Sins require payment, and your time for mercy has passed.  Your trial will be swift and your judgment harsh.  I will ascend with fire and fury, and nothing of your legacy shall escape my wrath.  
==Backstory==
The Main protagonist, (Exact name still pending, but the current frontrunners are: Aeron, Shallum, Merikh, Cerunam, Samuel, and Coatl.  Many of these have meanings pertaining to death, war, revenege, retribution, and serpents.  A few are just the producct of my overactive imagination.) ,will grow up in a small village located on the fringe of the galaxy.  This planet has little strategic value and is sparsly pocketed with resources and population.    A war, (haven't decided its name), will be waging throughout the galaxy.  Both sides have been struggling for power for almost 10 years, and hatred burns deep with both sides.  As the war has continued, resources and soldiers are needed.  To be continued, but can anyone guess what will happen?  Of course you can, maybe....
==The Planet and Town==
As stated before, his planet will be located on the fringe of the galaxy, far from the troubles of the galaxy.  His town will be small, no more than 300 humans (No aliens in the story, yet.)  It will be located inside a basin, surrounded on all sides by mountains.  This accumulation of rain allows them to cultivate crops and power their factories.  Half the village will be be the rural economy.  The houses and shacks,(built out of wood and metal, the base predominantly of metal.) , will occupy the edges of this area.  The center will be a marketplace with stalls selling hunting supplies, fresh kills, and produce.  Both the main character and Lariel (who's she?  I haven't explained that yet, but basically she's his crush.  You didn't think I would leave out a love story did you?  Well, it doesn't end well for anyone, sort of.) will interact here through the first section fo the book/game. 
The second half of the town is the industrial section.  This part will be dominated by two story buildings, each with giant pistons inside them.  They hammer the metal, which is then imported to other parts of the planet (The entire planet is its own economy, no cross space trade).  This portion of the town reeks of tar, smoke, and death. Workers periodically become mained due to accidents.  The impact of this area on the protagonist must be palpable, he will be wary of machines, technology, and larger industrialized cities and civilizations.  To be continued...
==Characters and their Inter-twined Importance in the first chapter==
==Plot==