This Novel Seems... Problematic?

This Novel Seems... Problematic? is a Daily Commission that occurs in Inazuma City, Inazuma.
==Steps==
#Visit Shigeru and Junkichi
#Ask Yuzu's opinion
#Ask Hasegawa's opinion
#Ask for Rie's opinion
#Report the results to Shigeru
==Gameplay Notes==
*Completing both this commission and This Novel... Seems Familiar? will grant the .
==Rewards==
==Dialogue==
;(Talk to Shigeru or Junkichi)
:Shigeru: Have you read the reader feedback? Our reviews have been plummeting lately!
:Junkichi: Don't worry. This is just the calm before the grand climax!
:Junkichi: When the key plot point gets revealed, we'll see a real turnaround in those reviews!
:Shigeru: And what good is that if your novel gets axed long before you get there?
: What's going on?
:Shigeru: Traveler, thank goodness you're here.
:Shigeru: Junkichi has been adding a lot more wild abilities to the main character, in "Onibudou." It's just been one thing after another ever since that "inspiration trip" of his.
:Shigeru: Yae Publishing House has received a lot of negative feedback from readers who say they don't understand why these abilities are appearing. They think that the author isn't taking the story seriously.
:Junkichi: They don't know what they're talking about. I'll just keep writing, they'll get it at some point...
:Shigeru: Like I was saying, your novel will get axed before you can get to that point!
:Shigeru: Oh, whatever... From what I recall, there are a few readers of "Onibudou" around this area...
:Shigeru: Why don't you go and ask them if your idea has legs or not?
:Junkichi: Fine! I'm sure they'll get it, anyway. Traveler, come with me. I'll need a witness!
:Shigeru: Yes, that sounds good. Bring the Traveler with you. That way, you can't deny what they say later.
: Let's do this.
:Junkichi: Okay, let's get going. I'm sure my readers will understand me!
: How much feature creep is there, anyway?
:Junkichi: Just... just a bit.
:Shigeru: "A bit"? The main character will soon have more abilities than every other character in the story combined!
:Junkichi: Ahem! Let's get going. I'm sure my readers get it!
;(Talk to Shigeru again)
:Shigeru: Traveler, I'm counting on you. Please record their opinions honestly!
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;(Talk to Yuzu)
:Yuzu: Hello, what is it?
: Hello there. Have you read "Onibudou," by any chance?
:Yuzu: Huh? I have and I liked it, but... How should I put it? The plot seems a little strange lately.
:Yuzu: The main character is constantly getting new abilities and can immediately defeat the enemy with them.
:Yuzu: I liked "Onibudou" because of the clever methods the main character used to defeat his enemies, but now... it feels like the author is just being lazy.
:Yuzu: Also, most of the abilities the main character gets are only used once. It makes the story seem so... flippant.
:Yuzu: I really don't know what the author is thinking...
:Junkichi: Ahem... well... let's ask a few more people, shall we? This has got to be an odd case...
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;(Talk to Hasegawa)
:Hasegawa: Hello, is there anything I can help you with?
: Yes, there is. Have you ever read "Onibudou"?
:Hasegawa: Yes, I have! It's a very interesting novel. The characters and the plot are wonderful.
:Hasegawa: But... I feel like the author has been slacking off a bit lately.
:Junkichi: Uh... Um...
:Hasegawa: There are all these new powers that suddenly appear without having ever been referenced before.
:Hasegawa: Although it's called an "awakening," it just seems cheap.
:Hasegawa: I just think this kind of cheap plot makes the character look cheap too. I really hope the author reconsiders this course...
:Junkichi: Traveler, let's... let's go ask someone else...
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;(Talk to Rie)
:Rie: Hi there, are you up for a chat?
: Indeed. Have you read "Onibudou," by any chance?
:Rie: I have. I like the main character a lot, too.
:Rie: But I've been having a hard time reading it lately...
:A hard time?
:Rie: In the last few chapters, the main character was suddenly bestowed with all these new abilities.
:Rie: The story spends a lot of time talking about how those abilities were awakened and how they can be used.
:Rie: And the names of those abilities are getting harder and harder to follow. I can't remember any of them.
:Rie: If I keep reading, I don't think I will be able to follow the story without understanding these abilities.
:Rie: *sigh* I was thinking of giving the book a rest and switching to something a little easier to follow.
:Junkichi: Uh... Let's...
: Let's head back...
:Junkichi: Okay... I don't get why this is happening...
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;(Report to Shigeru or Junkichi)
:Shigeru: Alright then, how did it turn out? Did you get the readers'...
:Shigeru: ...Wait, why does he look so depressed... what kind of feedback did you get?
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:Shigeru: *sigh*... So, Junkichi, will you accept the feedback now?
:Junkichi: I can't believe it... How did this happen...
:Junkichi: Are my ideas... and my writing... not interesting enough?
:Shigeru: As I said, advancing the plot purely by giving the character new powers can be dangerous...
:Shigeru: The new traits might be momentarily popular, but as soon as the novelty wears off, the readers will get bored.
:Shigeru: This is years of experience talking, you know.
:Junkichi: I—I know...
:Shigeru: It's not too late to change it, though... We can't reverse the reviews of the previous chapters, but we can get the following chapters back on solid footing...
:Shigeru: Thank you, Traveler. It's actually better to let him take a hit now. If he kept on writing like that, he would definitely be worse off overall.
:Shigeru: So, thank you. This is your payment. Please take it.
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