Crazy Jack

==This story is a laughing Jack remake ==
Im John Mechalister and my childhood was traumatic after i met HIM! everything before this meeting went well and i was happy with my caring father and mother excluding my annoying brother that kept throwing pranks on me and fighting me in some instances.
We lived in a large mansion with anything we could possibly want from payed servants nobody was underpaid don't worry i've checked more then once and my parents even shared their money for good causes like curing illnesses and helping out the poor.
it was in my teen years when my brother woke me up in the middle of the night and dared me to go explore the nearby abandoned theme park called Jack's fun place alone. it contains rides for adults and children alike with creative never before seen food and characters.
if i would have won then my brother would have to sleep in the basement which is the darkest and coldest floor of the mansion and it is extremely hard to fall asleep there if i would have lost then i would sleep down there.
Also that basement had lots of webs and spiders and mice, but in a dumb and bold move i accepted hoping to win, my brother followed me to the abandoned parks entrance, everything seemed busted and unrepairable me and my brother had a conversation before i started venturing threw this waste land.
John
Bro are you sure that this is safe?
Fred
Yeah i already explored it before the only thing that can get in your way are police officers
John
I think i'm gonna recon-
Fred
Nope it's too late now take this camera and film some stuff for 1 hour oh yeah and here's a walkie talkie.
I grabbed the camera and the walkie talkie and i sneaked threw the ticketing booth the glass was broken as if people threw works and tried to enter from the windows and some rocks were still there i took a phew pictures of the ticketing booth before moving on.
And none of the lights were working only my camera could light the way with its built in night vision mode.
i silently walked threw the decrepit kiddie rides and filmed them it was awfully quiet and sad there was even some leftover candy on the merry go round but they were expired im sure of it.
But as i kept moving i noticed that they left costumes tools keys dishes everything that people would normally bring when a park closes down and becomes abandoned, it seemed like they were running for someone or something.
All the employees only doors were broken or unlocked so i had access to all of them, one brigned me to a set of stairs ending underground in a backstage kind of room where entertainers could dress up apply make up practice and much more.
some insects and mice were scurrying around so i made sure to look out where i stepped there were remnants of scripts also i filmed every single one of footage i could get there but a certain sound alarmed me.
A man started walking down the stairs and he had a flashlight he scoured the area but didn't find me and walked back up there.
I waited and also got back up there the only place i haven't visited was the funhouse it had a mirror maze with a dark section where you had to touch the walls to navigate your way threw and finally it had this cheap horror section with clown statues and animatronics which managed to scare me because i had no idea what i was getting into.
close to the exit i heard a music box playing a chilling tune i followed it and found a large costumed performer holding the box in his large hands in his other hands he was holding 5 balloons somehow i approached him even if i was afraid of him he gave me bad vibes, maybe it was that music it sounded so familiar and that's when i remembered the time when we visited this park when it was opened.
It was so positive and organised entertaining and more it was the disney of my childhood once i heard that exact same haunting tune at night and it made me move towards it losing my parents in the huge crowds i cried as i could not find my parents for miles away.
and that's when i saw this black and white clown type of figure holding balloons and sitting on a bennche his nose was pointed and his fingers he motioned me to come closer while smiling with his pointy teeth but a security officer found me and helped me find my parents and that clown followed me for awhile afterwards he was frowning this time.
he stopped following us when we drove back home and i never saw him again until now
I received a message on the walkie talkie from my brother
Fred
Time is up
so as the music ended i was free to run away to the nearest exit while filming him for a few seconds
when i met with him i was terrified and he checked the footage and was shocked at all the footage i filmed when he saw the humanoid creature he froze in fear.
John
Uhm are you ok?
Fred
Dude... that's the founder of the park that's the costume he used to wear before he died
John
What but how did he die then?
Fred
He died from some roller coaster accident where the train bumped into him while he was repairing it
John
Well that's unfortunate...
Fred
Legend says that the park became abandoned because oh him haunting the area but now that you got him on camera this proves to be real.
We both returned home and made sure never to come back here as we had all the proof and footage we needed of course he had to sleep in the basement so he did.
i thought i heard someone down in the basement walking towards the bedroom where my brother slept and that freaky song that played once again and then silence followed i hurried into the basement and there lied my brother pale with his eyes lifelessly staring in front of him there was a melting candy in his mouth and it seemed to contain some kind of poison.
he was also attached to his bed with ropes, he was given a proper burial even tho he liked to prank me and such he was still apart of my life and family and i miss him everyday and nobody can replace him and as i got back home with my parents i tried to explain what happened.
but they did not believe that he was killed by some killer clown called Jack no matter how hard i tried to change their minds it never worked.
that things next victim was me and it happened when i least expected it, i was having this sleep paralysis where i saw the clown this time it had colour it come out from the floor and he floated in front of my bed and crouched towards me just to stare into my eyes.
Jack
did you miss me John!
John
No! get out of my house!
Jack
I've been waiting for this moment and this time you won't escape
He opened my mouth and force fed me a candy and then he scratched my arms they were burning and i started to lose consciousness while he laughed and showed his sharp teeth.
I woke up a few hours later at the hospital and later found out that i was scratched and force fed some poisonous food and i was tied to my own bed.
I have no idea how i survived the attack i guess he wanted me to live to tell the tale my parents are still very much alive but i have been noticing that they are growing week and waking up with scratches on their back.
He is definitely still here, hopefully he will be stopped soon.
Category:Horror stories
Category:Soulz Studios
Category:Unfinished