Not so comical Criminals

== NOT SO COMICAL CRIMINALS ==
=== By Cam Rascoe ===
Published in StoryStar 2012
“Yo Tommy ‘member Uncle Cleav dumb ass?”
“You talkin’ ‘bout that time he got arrested in that liquor store
because he couldn’t get out?”
“Yea his dumbass got in through a window to the basement where they keep
all the liquor. He knew that they didn’t have no alarm on the basement window
and no motion detector so he jumped in. His stupid ass didn’t look to see how
far down it was first and he fell twelve feet through the window down on the
concrete floor. He broke his ankle so he was limpin’ around tryin’ ta gather
bottles and cases.”
“Terrance, man you know Uncle Cleave was a crazy crack head so he was
always doing something stupid.”
The two brothers shared a laugh as they turned left onto Hastings off of
Silver Star Rd.
“Tommy, this nigga tried to stack boxes up to stand on but kept on
bussin’ his ass tryin’ ta climb out. Then he limped up the stairs and tried to
get out the door but it was locked from the outside. He shook that bitch but it
wouldn’t budge. He limped back downstairs started tryin’ ta stack shit again;
after he bussed his ass about three more times, he gave up. The nigga opened up
the liquor sat down on some of the boxes and got drunk. Then he limped over to
a phone on the wall and called the police on himself so he could get out.”
The two laughed again then pulled into the parking lot behind the
convenience store on the corner of Colonial Drive and Hastings.
“Yo Terrence I heard about that but how you know all the details and
everything?”
“They had that shit on TV nigga! It was on some ‘ol dumbass criminal TV
show; me and Uncle Harry saw it last week when we was smokin’ a blunt on the
back porch. They showed his dumbass doing all that stupid shit; man Uncle Cleave
a clown. I can’t believe that fool kin ta us! Damn he green! Tommy you ready?”
“Yea I’m ready.”
“Put ‘yo mask on and let’s go.”
The two brothers put their plastic bag masks over their faces and jogged
around the building and towards the front door of the store. They entered the
door and instantly the small shop was filled with noise and confusion. Terry
yelled from behind his mask.
“Everybody get down on the floor! Get ‘yo ass down lady before I put a
slug in ya belly!”
Terry pointed his revolver in the lady’s direction and motioned with the
barrel of the gun to the floor of building. She complied to avoid upsetting the
robber; Terry began feeling light headed as he panned the room. Tommy was
behind the counter cleaning out the register; he never thought to ask the
employees about the safe in the office so their take was only $322.22. Tommy
put the loot into his brown paper bag and looked up just in time to see his
brother pass out. Terrence forgot to put holes in his plastic bag making it
very difficult to breath; his level of excitement expedited the effect of the
lack of oxygen. There Terrence lay sprawled out in front of the entrance from
slight asphyxiation. He would later be awakened by the police before being
loaded into the back of a patrol car. Tommy waved his gun at the crowd and
ordered them to stay on the ground as he stepped over his fallen brother and
made his way out onto the street in front of the store. Tommy shook his head at
his brother’s stupidity as he thought of how he would make his escape. He ran
pass neighbors who recognized him through the plastic bag.
“Hey Tommy what you doing? You just rob that sto’? Boy you know you and
‘yo kin sure like to stay in some bullshit.”
Willie the wino said to the boy as he pushed pass him and ran around to
the back where his brother’s car was parked.
On the trunk of the car sat three youths from his neighborhood smoking a
blunt.
“Hey Tommy you wanna hit this?”
Tyrone said extending his hand holding the burning narcotic to his
neighbor.
“No nigga, get off the car.”
Just then Tough Tony stood up and challenged the somewhat masked man.
“Yo don’t bring ‘yo ass out here wavin’ no gun tryin’ talk tough and
shit nigga; you know you ain’t built fo’ dat.”
Tommy feared Tony as did most people in the neighborhood so he felt it
more prudent to reason with him rather than challenge him.
“Tony, I ain’t tryin’ ta start nothin’ but I’m tryin ta get away from
the cops. Look, you want this gun?”
Tommy extended both hands with the gun in his palms humbly offering the
firearm as a payment of toll for his passage. Tony took the pistol, examined
it, and then motioned his younger brother Taj down off of the trunk of the car.
“Alright Tommy, good doing business with you.”
The three young men moved from the vehicle and just then Tommy realized
that the keys to the car were in the pockets of his unconscious brother. He
looked at Tony and the two boys laughing at him as he fished through his
pockets for the keys to no avail. Tommy didn’t have the courage to ask for the
gun back; he was already afraid of Tony when he held the gun in his hands, he
was terrified now that Tony held the gun. Tommy heard sirens in the distance so
he took off on foot in hopes of escaping. His breathing became labored as he
made his way through shrubbery, over walls and fences still struggling to
breathe through his see through mask. Tommy fell over a fence snagging his
white tee on the top of it and rolled down onto the ground. He looked up from
his knees to see little Tonya Tillman and her grandmother looking in his
direction. He felt extreme pain in his ankle as he attempted to rise to his
feet; the face of dumb ass Uncle Cleave flashed across his mind. Tonya yelled
over to him from the garden where she was helping her grandmother. The six year
old was sharp and instantly recognized the man as well as sensed that he was
doing wrong.
“Tommy what are you doing falling in my grand mama’s yard and why you
got that bag on your head? Are you in trouble? You done something bad ain’t
you? The police after you?”
Tommy didn’t answer one of the little girl’s questions or address her
grandmother who used to baby sit him as a child. He immediately realized that
he wasn’t in the presence of sympathizers so he limped into the front yard and
down the block. He could hear the sirens three blocks over so he decided to
make his way through a small creek and over a hill to his mother’s house. As
Tommy hobbled around Pine Hills trying to elude the police, they were interviewing
everyone he had come in contact with during his attempt to get away. His
brother had been revived and taken into custody, the keys were removed from
Terrance’s pockets and the car was searched. Tony turned over his gun to the
police after negotiating a small reward. The cops followed his trail with dogs
and dispatched the police chopper to hunt him down. Before the chase was over,
Tony and his high homeboys were on the news telling their stories and giving
shout outs to their peeps. The police, then news cameras made their way to Mrs.
Tillman’s back yard as well and Tonya gave them all a full report. The little
girl was somewhat of a ham so she really enjoyed speaking to the police and
reporters. Tonya divulged everything that she could think of about the
assailant including where his mother lived. Tonya made the most of her fifteen
minutes and was offered and accepted the opportunity to be featured in a series
of television commercials for a local chain of supermarkets.
The police collected the statements and the evidence from the fence;
they staked out all of his known residences. Thirty minutes later a tired,
injured Tommy staggered up the hill to his mother’s house. Plastic mask now
torn and tattered he gingerly stepped up onto his mother’s front porch while
looking behind to see if he were being followed. He just wanted to get a nap a
dream this awful day away. Tommy wished none of this had ever happened.
“Get down on the ground now! Let me see your hands! Hands!”
Police rushed in and tackled the exhausted Tommy to the ground with
great force.
“Stop resisting, stay still, don’t resist!”
The officer yelled at Tommy as he put pressure on he boy’s his neck with
his knee and held his hand under the boy’s chin pulling back. Meanwhile other
officers buried knees and elbows in different muscles and joints on Tommy’s
slim frame.
“Please stop, I give up. I’m not resisting. I can’t breathe.”
Tommy pleaded as the officers’ weight on the youth began to take its
toll. His cries and screams did not go unnoticed by the crowd that was forming.
Tears could readily be seen flowing down the boy’s cheeks as he gasped for air;
his “high yella” face was now bright red, eyes bugged out and bloodshot.
“Get off of him he can’t breathe, ya’ll already got him!”
Seventeen year old Tammy Tims yelled from the sidewalk in front of
Tommy’s mother’s yard.
“Ma’am please move along, this is police business.”
A large police officer addressed Tammy while pushing her back into the
street. Tammy tripped off the curb and fell into the road hitting her head.
Just then her mother rushed off of her porch and into the street.
“Hey pig, you don’t put ‘yo hands on my daughter.”
As she rushed towards where her daughter lay, her oldest daughter made
her way towards the offending officer but was intercepted by another cop and
eventually arrested for disorderly conduct. More of a crowd formed as a limp
and lifeless Tommy was cuffed, carried and loaded into the back of a patrol
car. As an officer attempted to put Tameka, Tammy’s older sister, into a police
car a rock was thrown by a youngster in the crowd striking the officer in the
head. The man dropped to the ground and the police all drew their guns. The
senior officer on the scene began to address the people in the street through a
bull horn.
“People please disperse. Allow the police to do their work. Please move
back. If you don’t move back we will be forced to use deadly force.”
“What now you gonna shoot us now?!”
Tammy’s mother yelled back at the officers as she held her daughter in
her arms. Tension between the police and residents grew as heated words were
exchanged then an ambulance appeared on the scene. The paramedics ran over to
tend to the officer while Tammy lay dazed barely conscious in her mother’s
arms. This was seen as disrespect to the people in the street and the two
groups got closer while Tommy’s body was driven away in the back of a squad
car. Mace was sprayed into the crowd by the police then pepper spray was
sprayed back at the police by women from the neighborhood. The police used stun
guns on those who seemed to be the most aggressive. A mini riot ensued, seven
residents were arrested and five hospitalized. They were all women or men under
the age of twenty-one. Most adult males were at work. No police other than the
one struck by the rock were injured. Later the local news would report on the
event…
“Today in Pine Hills there was a riot where officers were injured trying
to apprehend a fugitive from justice. A community of thugs attacked officers in
an attempt to secure the freedom of an assailant accused of the armed robbery
of a convenience store that afternoon. Officer Stan Mc Garrett a twelve-year
veteran of the force was struck in the head with a flying projectile. He has
been admitted to the hospital and is in stable condition at this time. Seven
rioters were arrested and five others were hospitalized after assaulting
officers. Officers have been met with resistance in this area before. Residents
of surrounding neighborhoods have dubbed the community Crime Hills because of
the increased crime in the area. We’ll have the full report at eleven.”
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