Neil's Revelation

== NEIL'S REVELATION ==
=== By Akshat Sinha ===
Published in StoryStar 2009
Long Time ago there lived a Man named Alexandro - a Farmer. He was old
and did'nt have much money. He had a heavy loan on his head. He was under great
pressure, the soil was'nt yeilding much grain so he did'nt get much money. Less
money and less to eat. He had family, kids, parents to feed and he did'nt have
money. Alexandro's son, whose name was Neil, helped him in his farm after
school. 
Alexandro and his family lived in the south portion of their
subcontinent. No one in the south ever went to the north as the elders said
that many people had tried to go there but there is a river of lava from a
volcano in between and there is a huge collection of storms, tornadoes and
cyclones in the seas of both east and west. 
One day Alexandro went to town for fodder. Many days passed and
Alexandro was missing.
One day Neil was sitting in the garden and daydreaming. Suddenly his
mother came crying to him and told him that police have said that most probably
Alexandro had died and they had even declared Alexandro. Now the big problem
was that the loan had passed to Neil.
12 YEARS LATER
Neil has become older and his Grandparents and mother all have died
because of plague and Neil has shifted. He had more savings now as he has only
to feed just himself. After saving some money he thought that the loan would be
cleared. But when he gave the money he came to know that the interest was
higher than he thought and he has to pay double of what he has already payed.
Neil was very angry with that and wanted to kill the money lender. 
A couple of nights later he decided to kill the money lender. The same
night he went to a nearby store and bought some knives, rope, poison and a
mask. He wore the mask and went to money lender's house. The house was well
guarded. As the house was on the river side he decided to swim and go below the
window of the room in which the prey was. After he reached there, he threw a
rope in the window and then climed to the window. There he saw the lender
sleeping on a King Sized bed. he took out the knife and covered the mouth and
killed it. Suddenly a guard appeared from the dark with a sword. He took out a
knife and threw it at the guard, even the guard died. But before dying he
pulled a lever nearby. By pulling the lever an alarm rang throughout the house
and numerous guards ran to kill Neil. Everyone ran with their swords towards
Neil, but Neil jumped from the window and dived in river. He started swimming
without stopping and not knowing where he is going. Suddenly he saw a ship in
the river which he climed quietly.
The whole night he slept in the ship hiding in a emergency boat. When he
woke up he found that the ship is empty and it was on a shore. He came out of
the ship and found a cliff nearby. He tried to climb it, but he fell 2-3 times
from it and after too many attempts he climed the cliff. When he took a look
what was beyond the cliff, he saw paradise. There were numerous waterfalls
surrounded with deep, dense and a beautiful forest. The air smelt fresh, the
waves of the river could be heard from far, the birds were tweeting and the sky
was bright.
Suddenly a weird flying unknown but beautiful species crossed near Neil.
Neil got scared at once but when he came to know it won't make any harm he got
amazed. When he took a look around he saw many of that kind. Suddenly a loud
sound of horn came. When Neil turned to see what it was, he found the ship was
dispersing. Suddenly, when the ship had gone a bit far it started sinking and
then slowly the ship was under water. Now Neil did'nt have a hope of going back
to his native country. He then decided to explore the forest and find a place
to live and find food and water, so he climed down the cliff. 
He circled around the cliff and moved towards the forest. The forest was
dense and so dark that it seemed like it was twilight. While he was exploring
he came across many strange insects. There was total silence at a place.
Suddenly some voice came from the bushes and when Neil moved to wards it he
found a baby of a creature. It had three horns on his head and had a shell like
a tortoise. Suddenly the creature disappeared and changed to ash. So, Neil
carried on his forest exploration. While exploring, he found a river. He was
thirsty so he drank the water. The water was cool and sweet. He found a place
to set up a camp at river side. It took 4-5 days to complete the Hut. He was
hungry from 4 days, and his diet was only water. He went in the forest and
found a place where some sort of fruit was growing. Neil ate the fruit and
found it extremely tasty and juicy. 
He took some seeds of it and grew it near his hut. He was his normal
diet. 
One day he made a small raft and traveled through the river expecting he
would find something useful. He came across many species in the way and even
took some new types of fruits on his way. He saw a mountain which was very
long, but was easy to climb. Neil climed the mountain and then he took a look.
Very far he could see some more rivers and some mountains but, when he looked
right he saw the sea. He went back to his raft and struggled to the sea shore
as the river was very bumpy. 
There he found some coconut trees which had fresh coconut's in it. He
drank some of the coconut's water and then with many large leaves, he made kind
of a bag in which he kept many of coconuts. He went for a bath in the sea where
he found the shipwreck under water. He went to it to find something useful. He
found some bowls and spoons and some boxes of steel (probably air tight) which
he took to the sea shore. He took some sea water and evaporated it to make salt.
He had nearly 7-8 boxes of salt after some time. He took every thing he found
to his raft and sailed back to his camp through the river. One day while
cooking, he saw flying creature which he named 'infernoes', fighting in the air
and then he discovered that they can throw fire from their mouths. After some
days he found one inferno in a vey bad condition lying near his camp. Neil
noticed that it was the same inferno that he had seen fighting. Neil treated
him like his pet and after some weeks the inferno was well again. Neill adopted
him as his pet and sometime went for a ride on it's back. It had been a good
companion to him.
He visited the sea shore 4-5 times a month for more salt and coconuts.
But one lucky day he saw a human ship after 7-8 months. The ship landed on the
shore, but Neil was hiding behind a rock to check weather they are good or bad
men. Many of guards came out and then a man dressed in good clothes (Chief or
owner of the guards)came out. Neil had seen him before many times with the money
lender whom he killed some months ago. After some time another ship came and
halted on the shore. Again some guards came out and then a man came out dressed
good. Both men shaked their hands at their meeting. One man ordered his staff
to bring something. When the staff returned he had thirteen men with all of
them having a big cartin with them. The man opened all the cartins himself. The
cartins had swords, darts, poisons, knives and many weapons. There was clearly
something illegal going on there....
Neil went to his raft and brought some of his weapons which he had
bought once to kill the money lender. By the time of 7-8 months Neil had made
bow and arrows and even practiced it. It was the time to use the bow and
arrows. Neil quickly climbed a tree and shot one of the guards, directly on the
heart. The guard died. Neil climbed down the tree and sot another guard on left
shoulder. After some time almost half of the guards were dead or injured. Then
Neil appeared in front of the criminals with bow and arrows, sword and
knives.Suddenly the backmost guard whistled and hundreds of guards came out of
the ship and captured him. They decided not to kill him, but take him to the
city and burry him. They carried him in the ship to the city. After reaching
there they gave poison to Neil and burried him in coffin.
Neil was underground in a coffin but still breathing and alive. His
hands and legs were locked up and he was trying his best to come out but
could'nt. After some time a smallboy came above his coffin, not knowing Neil
was beneath him.The boy started digging the soil and after some time he found
Neil's coffin. Suddenly Neil bangs out of the coffin. He thanked the boy.The
boy told his name as Charlie. Neil asked that why was he actually digging the
soil. The boy pointed towards a coffin kept beside him. He told that his father
got killed by someone and he was'nt getting any justice.Neil asked "What
actually happened?" 
Charlie replied and started his father's story "My father's name
was Jack and he was a wood cutter . He went to the forest regularly on his
horse with a donkey. One day he went there again and went missing for 2 days.
One day he returned, but was dead. He was being carried by his horse to our
home. This is it and I dont know anything else, Sir."
Neil was feeling sad about the boy thinking that now he is an orphan and
have nowhere to go, so he adopted him. Neil told him everything that have
happened to him. Charlie said that they both will find the criminal and get
them arrested and in return Neil will help him in finding his father's
killer.Neil replied on Charlie's statement "These criminals have a long
connection, so even if they willget arrested, they will be free in days. WE
HAVE TO KILL THEM!" Charlie stammered at first but agreed at last.
They kept searching for them for days and at last they decided to go to
the police and tell them to find Alaxandro.Suddenly Neil saw the both of his
criminals in a cabinet. Neil asked one of the officers who are those people.
The officer replied " Mr. D'Cousta , the Myor of the town and the other
one is Vivian the commissioner of nerby City.He would be leaving this night
back to his city." Neil decided not to kill them now as the officers will
attack them, so they went back to their home planning how to kill them.
Suddenly after eaching their home an idea stuck on their mind. Both of
them have not seen Charlie and not have any susspecion on him. THE PLAN STARTS.
They went near Vivian's cart and followed it on Charlie's father's
horse. The night was long, cold and dangerous. Howling of wolves was being
heard. Suddenly a wolf came and attacked the driver of the cart. The driver
died at that very moment. Vivian was probably sleeping at that time. The wolf
then attacked Neil ,but he killed it by using a wooden stick kept nearby. Neil
told Charlie to take the carriage to the town from there and Neil would be
shadowing them. Some hours later the sun shone brightly in the sky and with
that Vivian waked up. Neil hided his face by applying paint on his face. Vivian
peeked his head out of the carriage and found that the driver had changed. He
asked to Charlie "Who are you ,kid ?" Charlie said that wolves had
atacked the driver and killed him and he was passing nearby so he killed the
wolf by a stick and then took the carriage further. He even mensioned that he
is homeless and orphan so that the commissioner would make him his servant.
Weeks passed and Charlie was an undercover agent of Neil. Charlie
brought information about Vivian to Neil every week. Months passed and Neil had
many proofs against Vivian. So then he went for shopping again to the weapon
store. He bought poisons, Sword, Knives, Darts, Ropes and a Mask. AND THE
KILLING STARTS.....
The night came out. Neil wore his dark black robe andhis mask. Neil went
behind Vivian's palace sized house. He took out a rope and threw it inside
room. When he climed it he found some guards. He quickly grbbed his sword and
started to fight. There were many guards and every one was attacking Neil.
Neils blood came out from several parts and many guard's life were being taken.
Many died and many got injured and Neil was lying on the ground and was also
very injured. Suddenly Charlie came to that room and gave him aspirine and
cheered him and told him that Vivian HAS to die today! Neil took courage and
wnt to Vivian's room and kiled him while he was sleeping. Neil searched the
room for more proofs of his guiltiness. Suddenly he found a diary written
'PLEASE DO NOT OPEN IT' on it. Neil opened it and found a long table which was
continued on all the pages. It had 3 columns in it. Frist column- Victim.
Second column- Killer. Third column- Year.
In the table only 3 killer's name was in it -Vivian, Robert. D'Cousta
and DC. Longton. While observing it Neil found Victim- Alexandro, Killer- R.
D'Cousta and Year- 1846 (The same year in which Alexandro - Neil's father
died). Neil was now convinced that D'Cousta is the killer of his father and he
will avenge him. So Charlie and Neil escaped from the fort.
Some days passed and the cold blooded murder's news had spread all over
the sub-continent.
Finally the investigation was over and was said that Charlie is the
murderer of the guards and Vivian and he was wanted. So both Neil and Charlie
were undercover and was getting hard to exit the city. So one day for time pass
Neil was looking at Vivian's diary that , suddenly Neil found Charlie's
father's name and the murderer's name was Vivian! Neil told Charlie about it
and Charlie got happy again after many days (as he was sad by seeing his name
in Wanted List).
One day D'cousta came to the city to attend Vivian's Funeral. Neil was
ready to kill him. 
He went to shopping again and he went to kill the same night. He climed
the window, bur D'Cousta was awake. Without wasting any time he attacked him
with his sword but he was wearing an armor inside his vest, so he did'nt die.
He took out his sword and started fighting Neil. there was a very dangerous
fight . D'Cousta shouted for guards and they came and arrested Neil. They
imprisoned him in jail far whole life saying "Killed Vivian and many
guards, attacking the Mayor and kidnapping and killing Charlie for saving
himself"
3 YEARS LATER
Neil have grown mascular and have become the strongest man in 'maximum
security jail'.He had being fighting in the jail to keep respect for him. 
One day a man stepped inside jail for life long imprisonment named Jeff.
Some days later a police constable came and told that his punishment is stopped
and he have a clean chit now. The same time a visitor for Neil had come. When
Neil went to the statin he saw the Charlie have come to see him. They were
talking that suddenly Neil saw R. D'Cousta. Jeff was with him and it seemed
that they were friends.
Neil got angry and threw a stone which was in his pocket on D'Cousta. He
started to bleed on his head and then he said "HANG THIS MAN TO DEATH AND
I DON'T WANNA SEE HIM AGAIN!!!!"
2 days later Neil was on the hanging place. Robert said "I wanna
kill this rotten piece of tomato and that also with a sword." Then Robert
came down to kill him. Robert picked up the sword and swinged it that suddenly
a loud roar from the sky came. Then comes the INFERNO , the same inferno whose
life was saved by Neil. It attacked many guards and then Charlie sneaked and
opened Neil. Neil went over the inferno and then he went over Robert. He warned
him to surrender ar he will die. Many guard came and took out their guns to
fire inferno. But in before they could, the inferno did it and at last MR.
ROBERT D'COUSTA SURRENDERED and told the truth the world that he, Vivian and
DC. Langton are criminals and have killed many men. 
After that, Robert was hanged and everywhere people were happy that a
big load had gone from the earth. Neil was given the prize for bravery and was
appointed as the general of army and Charlie was sent to a good school and was
now officially adopted by Neil.
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