A Quiet End (Short Story)

A Warriors Fanfic
Shimmerstar has become very sick with greencough. Her clanmates are worried, especially her mate, Pouncefrost. ThunderClan has become weak. Will Shimmerstar be strong enough to lead her Clan?
== Chapter One ==
Shimmerstar laid in the nest nearest to the entrance to the medicine den. She had been diagnosed with greencough about two moons ago, and nothing was curing her sickness. 
Shimmerstar let out a feeble cough as the medicine cat, Nightspots, slid a bundle of catmint towards her. "Cmon, Shimmerstar, you've got to eat something." he pleaded. "ThunderClan needs you. Pouncefrost needs you!"
She took a sore look at the herbs and reluctantly lapped them up. 
"Hey, Shimmerstar." A soft voice echoed from the entrance. Pouncefrost entered the den.
"Hi, Pouncefrost." Shimmerstar grinned weakly and coughed.
Pouncefrost dropped a vole in front of Shimmerstar's paws. "Eat this. You'll need it."
"What for?" She gave Pouncefrost a curious look.
"Rootkit, Jaykit, and Redkit are being apprenticed today, and you should still be able to watch since Yarrowspeckle is directing the ceremony."
"Right." Shimmerstar mewed, remembering the three boisterous kits.
"Well then, let's get to the ceremony."
== Chapter 2 ==
Shimmerstar watched with sharp eyes as Yarrowspeckle apprenticed each of the kits one by one. Redpaw was apprenticed to Pouncefrost, whose chest swelled with pride. Jaypaw was apprenticed to Sharpdusk, who didn't seem very thrilled about this. Finally Rootpaw was apprenticed to Geckospot, a newer warrior who Shimmerstar had had as an apprentice herself.
"Ima be the BEST WARRIOR ThunderClan has EVER SEEN!" Rootpaw said excitedly.
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