Under the oceans surface

I have spent a while working on this so I would be honoured if you read it. Please avoid editing unless you find a grammatical error. If you have any ideas for this story please let me know, because I am kind of just making it up as I go. If you would like to help writing just ask.
Chapter 1-Treasure 
Floating above the surface of the water felt so…unnatural. How long did it take one dragon to hide a stone? Carp had been down there way too long. What was he doing? 
Then all of a sudden he leapt out of the water, grinning from ear to ear like he had just experienced the greatest moment of his life. 
“You're never going to find it,” he giggled gleefully.
“How are you so sure?” I challenged.
“Because I hid it where no seawing could find it, not even you could find it, Aruana,” Carp said.
“We’ll see about that,” I replied just before I dove into the water with a big splash. 
We were playing a fun game of ‘find the rock?’ Which we created when we were little, four years ago.
As I swam against the currents my eyes scanned the reef for any sign of the green rock Carp had hid. We had found it just this morning while we were playing in the summer palace and decided it was the perfect rock for this particular game. 
After a while I spotted something glistening in the water near a large boulder surrounded by seaweed. Eww… I thought as I got sea slime in between my claws, but it was a small price to pay for the beautiful necklace lying beside the large boulder. I slowly picked it up, and started to play with the small, green and blue crystals that made up the necklace. My first treasure. 
Surely Carp wouldn’t mind if I didn’t find his rock and instead came up to the surface with this gorgeous treasure. Though, then he wouldn't stop boasting about the fact that I didn't find his rock. So I placed the necklace over my head and continued my search .
Eventually I gave up and retreated back to Carp, he was staring at me intently as I surfaced.
“Did you find it?” He asked.
“Well no,” I replied feeling defeated.
“Told you, you wouldn’t.” He paused, “where did you get that?” He said pointing at the crystals dangling from my neck. I smiled at him, then explained how I found it.
“Wow…it’s really pretty,” he finally said. “Well, um…now it’s my turn to amaze you.”
He dived into the water and I followed, he led me straight to a patch of seaweed, then he dipped one of his talons into it, and it came out with a clam inside. Then he handed it to me. What was supposed to do with it?
He used his talons to imitate opening something. Ohh, I realised he wants me to open it. I quickly pulled the top half of the clam of the bottom half and there in the centre of the remaining clam was the rock.
Chapter 2-Sleep
Where am I? I wondered. As I slowly wandered through the green grass underfoot, above me the sun was setting, so it must be afternoon, but that still didn’t answer my question, where am I? 
As I walked through the field something grabbed onto my leg. I yelped, and looked down, there was a strange lizard looking back at me, with large, red eyes that made me want to curl into a ball forever.
But I held my head high and kept walking.
Suddenly I heard a shout from above and looked up, there flying in the sky just above me were three SkyWings slowly landing. The biggest of the three was ordering the other two to around. Then one of them shot a blast of flame straight in my direction. This was it for me , I thought.
As it came closer, I heard a voice calling my name, Aruana! Aruana! Aruana, wake up! 
My eyes slowly opened, adjusting to the light, in front of me Carp was staring in my direction. 
“Finally,” he said “you have been asleep way too long, it’s already midday!” I turned my head and realised he was right the sun had been up for ages.
”Wow, have I really been asleep that long?” I asked.
”Yup!” He answered, “I started getting worried that you would never wake up. Come on, there is a big announcement at the summer palace and everyone is going so it must be important.”
”Oh, ok,” I replied, and slowly got out of bed.
Chapter 3-The Announcement
As we swam down the corridors, I noticed that there were close to no seawings. Carp was right, they really are all at the summer palace, I thought. 
We finally reached the summer palace, There were dragons everywhere! It was extremely hard to see Queen Coral and her counsellors from this far away, but that’s what we got for being late. 
“Come on,” Carp suddenly said and tugged on my arm, “let’s get closer!” He started pulling me through the crowd.
”Wait! Should we be doing this?” I asked as we pushed through the crowd of dragons.
“Yup!” Carp replied. He took us all the way to the front, by then the queen had started talking.
”Hello citizens, we are gathered here to discuss the matter of animus testing. Next week we will start testing all the dragonets for the powers of an animus dragon.” She paused to let that sink, “If any dragonet is found to have that power, they will start training with whirlpool regularly to get better control of their power. An announcement will go out tomorrow morning telling you what day the testing will begin. You may leave now.” The crowd chattered among themselves as they exited the hall.
”Ohh! Who do you think will be an animus? Do you think it could be me? That would be cool! Or maybe you.” Carp asked.
”Do you really think anyone will be an animus?” I asked.
”Of course! There have been animus seawings for like as long as history!” He replied.
”I guess,” I said. 
Chapter 4-The Beach 
As we walked along the beach, it seemed as thought all the seawing dragonets were on the beach trying to enchant things in hope that they were an animus.
Once we had found a quieter place along the beach, Carp picked up a rock and started saying stuff like “I enchant you to turn green” and “I enchant you to dance” and so forth. While he did that I took a my scroll out of my pouch and started reading, it would not stay straight! I kept flattening it and then it would slowly creep back into a roll. After a while I lost my temper and finally shouted ”STAY STRAIGHT YOU STUPID THING!” And then it did just that.
Carp and I just stared at it for a while until Carp finally broke the silence,”I guess this means your an animus?” 
”Yeah, I guess I am,” I replied. 
Neither of us knew what to say so we just sat there until Carp finally said, “ Well, just to make sure maybe you could try and enchant something else?” He picked a flower off a nearby tree,”turn this into a stone,” he said handing me the flower. 
I took a deep breath before saying, “I enchant this flower to turn into a stone,” it’s pink colour slowly faded into grey, and it’s beautiful star shape changed into an oval, finally leaving us with a stone. 
”Wow…” Carp and I said at the same time. 
”Should we tell the queen?” Carp asked me. 
”I don’t really won’t anyone to know if that’s ok. I would prefer to avoid using the power at all actually.” I replied. “You know what using it did to Albatross.” 
Chapter 5 - 
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