Slithering Coils

(Note: Slithering Coils is where different breeds of snakes band together, and dislike each other. Partly inspired on WoF, but since snakes are my favorite animal.. yeah. I can‘t wait to begin writing this! Also, all of the snakes are MUCH bigger then they actually are in real life. Like, Titanaboa size.. lol. I hope you enjoy this random, cringe-ey story!)
Prologue 
One hundered years ago..
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Lime slithered off the tree branch, flickering her forked tongue out, to test the air. Something was unusual — the rainforest more silent than usual. The chirping insects, and howling monkeys seemed gone. There was a rustling in a nearby tree. Lime coiled up, her green scales dark. Suddenly, a green blur lashed out at her, wrapping around her. 
“Let me go!” She hissed, baring her fangs. The other green tree viper only hissed in amusement. 
“I haven’t seen you in this rainforest before. Are you a spy?” The unfamiliar tree viper asked. Green tree vipers usually weren’t the constricting type, but he tightened around her anyway. 
“S-Spy?! That’s absurd! I’m a tree viper, just like you!” Lime lashed out at her attacker, sinking her fangs into him. She injected her venom. She knew that it wouldn’t do anything, but she just wanted to show this unfamiliar viper that she was one of him. 
“Hmm. I guess you really are from here.” The viper said, uncoiling from Lime. 
“Yeah, doofus. Now why did you randomly attack me? Why is the rainforest so — quiet?” Lime asked, keeping her fangs bared just in case he decided to strike again. 
“Nothing to worry about. Follow me,” The viper said, slithering away. “You’ll see.” 
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I’m just putting out the prologue, so people can let me know if it’s totally horrible and cringe-ey, so I can abandon it, or improve it. Please give me some suggestions and feedback, if you can. I’d like to hear what you guys have to say of this, snake cringe-ey thing. Thank you for even taking the time to read this prologue, and have a wonderful day/night!
Sincerely, the author of Shattering Crystal (in progress) and Slithering Coils (in progress) 
Category:Literature