Avataro Sentai Donbrothers

I prefer "Power rangers" over Super Sentai because it's less dark. But in my opinion this show was made with a very complicated plot, and I'll tell you how this Super Sentai should have been done: a less complicated plot and monsters that will really be a tribute to Super Sentai (and the group avoids being organized and cooperating on purpose).
== Plot ==
* The episode would begin with Taro Momoi being found in a strange object resembling a peach, alluding to the legend of Momotaro. Years later after Haruka went through the process of someone thinking she plagiarized someone, strange glasses would appear on her, and then on three people (Shinichi Saruhara, Tsubasa Inuzuka and Tsuyoshi Kijino). The four find themselves in a strange virtual world and see a trapped man talking about a place they have to go. The place is Taro Momoi's house, there they find him and he tells them about the need to become a group called Avataro Sentai Donbrothers, based on the fairy tale of Momotaro. As this happens a guy named Sonoi starts talking to a boy about his desire to be a great player, he starts to increase his ambition making him become someone just looking for fame and money. And then a strange portal appears and energy enters it making it Kishiryuki. Back at Taro Momoi's house the characters ask what exactly this "sentai" would be and why they are the ones who will form the group. But then an explosion is heard, and they see destruction in the city, Taro convinces them to take the objects that will transform them, and together they form the group and face the monster. When the monster becomes giant, a mysterious Zenkai Black helps Don Momotaro form a giant robot to fight it. The characters enter together in a place that serves coffee where Haruka works, she as well as the others wants to understand this better, but then he sees Zenkai Black there, he makes the fantasy appear and reveals to be her boss.
* The next episode involves the next day. Kaito and Taro tell the story: Taro is an alien and three beings from his planet are looking for him for unknown reasons. Taro's father is a scientist who long ago discovered an alternate universe protected by a group referred to as a "Super Sentai", he figured out how to create energy sources similar to theirs and attempted to team up with that universe's equivalent of the leader of the team, Kaito. But the next day he found his lab raided and nearly all of the Sentai Gears stolen. Only the gear he gave Kaito and the Juran gear remains. Unable to make new ones, he decided to make different gears and created the outfits for a Momotaro-themed team because he considers Taro's story to be too similar. But then the place is invaded again and the three invaders reveal their origin and that they look for Taro, since Taro was already in costume at the time they couldn't find out who he is. But his father was kidnapped, Taro says that his father is trapped in the virtual world, but ironically discovered that there he has a certain power over some of his inventions, and so he set up the team. Kaito said that his belt of gears is connected to their belts so if he or the others retrieve one of the stolen gears, everyone will have a copy of it. Haruka asks how that guy became a monster, and Taro tells him that the gears are in the virtual world, and they created a way for them to go to someone who has a strong negative emotion and turn him into a monster that will help them find the superhero he became. After that, Sonoza starts to be a bad influence on an old woman who starts to get really uncomfortable with it and decides to be superficial and want to stay young. And absorbs the energy of TQgers and uses it to mess with her age, but then in teamwork, Sonoi later teases her more to make her want to be younger, and for that she starts to absorb energy from the place. The characters break the event after Sonoza influences her to get even younger, and then she absorbs more energy and turns into a monster.
*This episode starts with a thief who works making deliveries with Taro, Sononi ends up seeing him turn into a monster and gives him the order to use the portals he now has access to to make more robberies. After he leaves, she talks about her plan to use him to make people have strong negative emotions. The group ends up discovering that Tsubasa is wanted for a crime he didn't commit, although he claims he is being wronged, Tsuyoshi becomes suspicious and begins to think that he may be responsible for the crimes that are happening. But everyone discovers that the real culprit is someone turned monster. They manage to break the chest compartment where he kept what he stole. Don Momotaro takes everything and leaves through a portal with it, the monster summons the Anoni army to attack them, but they stop them with the TQgers' powers. When Don Momotaro returns he reveals that he returned everything, but then when they are going to defeat him, Sononi appears and says that the monster failed her, she hits him with a strong attack and he reverts to a person and separates his gear. When she tries to kill him, the heroes stop her, she can't overcome them and escapes from there, jumping over the buildings. The character wakes up scared and ends up admitting the robberies (the ones he did when he was still a normal guy), Don Momotaro takes him to the police.
*In the next episode one of the characters were going to hear the accident the trio Noto talking about their hatred of the late Don clan that stopped them from their first attack on the planet, because they wanted their kind to have a peaceful life with humans. And they comment that everything ended with their army dying along with the Don clan, but they managing to send their son to the planet.
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*In the episode of the monster that has the powers of the Patranger team, Tsubasa Inuzuka was going to tell why he is persecuted. He says he used to work in a library, one night he took a long time to get out of there. The next morning the place dawned with stolen books, stolen security cameras and the money stored there was stolen as well. But the cameras outside remained and showed that no one could have entered there, logically the only one who could have done that would be him, since he was the only one seen leaving there. In this storyline, a policeman doesn't understand why he can't catch Tsubasa, not knowing that the reason is because he escapes through the portals of the virtual world. The Noto group finds him and lies that they can help him and they give him the Patranger gear, lying that they are giving him the power of the Donbrothers. Obviously he turned into a monster. Tsubasa arrives late to help the team, and that's because on the way he found the trio laughing at how they tricked him; he starts recording and finds that they broke into the library using a virtual world portal to steal books to understand human society and money to use while pretending to be normal people. After the monster is defeated in its giant form, it doesn't remember anything other than the conversation, Tsubasa reverts to normal while the others remain Donbrothers, stop him from attacking him and reveal the recording. They say that the trio wants to hunt down Don Momotaro because his alien family prevented an ancient attack on Earth, and they now want revenge and turn the planet into their kingdom.
*In most episodes the Noto characters are not present and the monsters show a strange desire to hunt humans. The sixth member of the team (Don Doragoku/Don Torabolt) was going to appear in an episode where Taro Momoi apparently disappeared (actually this would be the moment he is teleported to the Zenkaiger universe). His origin story is unchanged, except for the fact that he was summoned by Jiro Momoi in the same way as the others.
*Don Musume was going to appear in an episode that would start with the villains Noto, wanting to create an evil Donbrother that would defeat Don Momotaro. One of them would suggest that they make a Donbrother Oni because these are Momotaro's enemies, but the other retorted that they already have a team member like that, so they would only make someone like the Oni Sister. But the woman on the team commented that she once saw an old movie where Momotaro fought a shark. The scene changes to the Donbrothers seeing people running away, and when they go to see they find a sword with a life of its own, which turns into Don Musume.
== Other changes ==
* Instead of earning Kibi-Points, the characters would simply eat kibi-dango, alluding to the food Momotaro gave to his companions and made them his friends.
*In the series the sixth member of the team has two themes, his armor has a Chinese dragon theme and in the rest he would be an allusion to the monkey king (a.k.a. Son Goku); with him having a spear that changes in size just like the Monkey King's Bo staff, and with a flying cloud appearing when he initiates the transformation. The tiger-themed version of his outfit is worn by his second personality who is highly violent, something the white tiger is associated with. In my version the character would also behave similarly to the monkey king, being playful and sometimes immature, and the group would be acting together to try to control him when he is in his second personality.
*Since the characters will work as a team so they will have a "roll call" like in the spin-off made to show what they would be like if they were an organized team.
Taro: Listen up!! Born from a peach! Don Momotaro!
Shinichi: Farewell, transient world! Saru Brother!
Haruka: The Manga master! Oni Sister!
Tsubasa: Number One fleet footed! Inu Brother!
Tsuyoshi: This bird is sturdy! Kiji Brother!
Taro: HAHAHAHAHA!! Avataro Sentai!
All: Donbrothers!
Jiro: Coming from the journey to the West! Doragoku!
Dangerous Jiro: Dangerous as a tiger! Torabolt!
== Monsters ==
# Kishiryuki - Since he has Ryusoulger's power, then he will have a sword similar to the team's.
# Resshaki - Since the theme is the steam train-themed armor from the TQgers team, your only weapon will be the weapon that comes with that armor, the weapon's operation will be simplified to a laser cannon.
#Kaitouki - This guy is still the same.
#Chourikiki - This character has an appearance more based on the sixth member of the Ohranger team than the team itself, so nothing fairer than him having the weapon of the sixth member of the team, Kingranger (who is an Egyptian character).
#Keisatsuki - This guy is still the same.
#Doubutsuki - His sword would be the same as the Zyuohger team's sword, since the gear is that team's. In this version the character is a nurse who lost her job and couldn't get a new job.
#Chikyuuki - When he was turned (because of the anger that the students at school gave him) the villains ordered him to use the Fiveman's analysis power, to find out who Don Momotaro is by analyzing his voice. When he met with the heroes, he managed to escape and began to mentally analyze the voice and realized that it is similar to the Taro Momoi (because he had met him before). He intended to find the villains to reveal, but the heroes found him and he used the V-Sword to fight them.
#Mashinki - This one is based on King Oradin who was technically the original owner of Team Kiramager's powers. So this will be the reasoning followed, when he summons the Anoni army, tells them not to attack, and then gives five of them weapons similar to those of the Kiramagers and then they attack. The Donbrothers will face them by transforming into Fiveman. During the fight someone asks what happened, and Taro explains the situation, after a while Shinichi Saruhara thinks and concludes that if his theme is who gave the powers and not one of those who received them then maybe he doesn't have much for himself. Haruka goes through the opponents and faces the monster and realizes that it's really true for himself he can't get almost anything. And in this version he is an ego-filled model who wanted to "shine."
#Tokumeiki - In this version this character would be alive and in his body. He for a while managed to outrun the characters with the greatest speed. But the Donbrothers used the TQgers' powers to move at the speed of a train and knock him down. And he would have no power other than speed.
#Kaizokuki - This character can't do things using the tentacles because it has nothing to do with the Gokaiger team, he will be shown grabbing a person using the grappling hook the Gokaigers used; and when the Donbrothers appear to face him, he will use the Gokaigers' weapons against them.
#Shurikenki - To heighten the similarities with Ninninger, at one point a character thought he had hit him squarely with a shot, but then what fell to the burnt ground was a straw doll, and the real monster reappeared elsewhere.
#Uchuki - Since this character is based on the Kyutama which gives the Red Ranger the power to use all weapons, he will also be rotating between each Kyurangers weapon.
#Zyudenki - When the characters met this monster, they tried to hit him with shots, but he dodged it dancing. The battery-like things he has on his head aren't going to be electricity guns, because in the Kyoryuger series the battery-like objects give different powers to the heroes' weapons. So the plot will be that one of them gave his gun a shot that looks like the head of the T-Rex robot. And then he used another one to make his weapon increase the force of gravity in that area and make everyone fall to the ground. All except the Inuborther who, being small, disappeared from sight more quickly and discreetly approached him. At the time he was going to give another power to his weapon, the Inubrother hit it and the weapon left his hand, and the Kijibrother used Ninninger's power to disappear and reappear near the weapon to destroy it and thus nullify its effect on the ground.
#Kousokuki - This guy is still the same.
#Gekisouki - He wouldn't have super speed because the Carrangers don't. Team Carranger's weapons can be joined not only into a cannon but also into a toy car. During the fight he summoned that same vehicle and it came and passed grazing some Donbrothers (and by franchise logic it hurt them). And he turned it into the cannon and used it to attack them, and then they fought him and this vehicle that seems to have autopilot at the same time. The characters are only able to defeat him because the Inubrother has turned into Kyuranger Black (i.e. Taurus Black) and has grabbed the toy car so hard it can't move.
#Kyoryuki - This character will take turns between each Zyuranger team's special weapon. And he won't have the power to nullify a shot.
#Choujinki - The character will not cause explosions using eggs, but using a laser pistol similar to the Jetman's Smash Bombers weapon.
#Engineki - This character will attack using Go-Onger Red's sword and his special attack.
#Goseiki - When the character traps people in orbs, he doesn't absorb them and leaves them on the ground, echoing the fact that the spheres associated with Dairanger's Mechas were physical spheres. And his weapon would be one of Dairanger's poles.
#Samuraiki - His sword is Shinken Red's sword, meaning it still shoots fire.
#Denjiki - This character would be a surfer who lost a surfing competition, but didn't accept it because he was obsessed with winning, and so he became a monster with the power of Megarangers who had flying surfboards. 
== Movie ==
The movie will still be with Haruka shooting a movie. The monster (Ninpuki) has a hurricane theme because it is based on the Hurricangers, but the truth is that the team itself is not exactly that themed, at most Hurricanger Red has power over the wind and the others don't. The theme is more present in the transformation sequence, so when the character starts to transform he will make a movement with his arms and hands that resembles the Hurricangers transforming, and then he becomes a monster that looks like a tornado. His only weapon will be the Hurricanger sword and of course he will have power over the wind.
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