Voices

By: ♥Icewish♥ 00:41, October 24, 2011 (UTC)
==Intro==
This fanfiction was inspired by the Karen Hesse book, Witness. It is a lyrical story, whitch means it is writen like a poem or a song. This story takes place in Mountainclan. You will hear the voices of Snowdawn, Wolfclaw, Nettlesting, Cougertooth, Featherfall, Nightwave, and Redlame like you have never heard before.
(Warning: This story is for a slightly more mature audience. Also, many parts of the story will contain an extream use of words like "y'all" and "aint," words that Icy hears a lot in Alabama, Georgia, and some parts of Texas.)
==Snowdawn==
My warrior ceremony
Held today
At high noon
My leader
The great Spottedstar
Her heart filled with joy
Granted me the name
Snowdawn
My mentor
My deputy
My friend
Gazed upon me with pride
My brother
Who's name is now Redflame
By my side
Eye glowing with happyness
A true moment
I will never forget
==Wolfclaw==
My best friend Snowdawn
Recieved her warrior name today
You can call me crazy
You can call me insane
But I truely felt
Her joy in me
Mabey it's time
To show her that specail place
The place I tresure
For she is my best friend
The one who does not treat me like a shadow
Of my brother
Wolfblizzard
He is older than me
Stroger than me
Handsomer than me
But she does not care
I've lived in his shadow
But she shows me the light
I shall show her
Before it's too late
==Nettlesting==
Ah, Snowdawn and Wolfclaw
Such young love
But with me and Cougertooth
Just a bunch of old love
Mabey I should settle down with him
Mabey even have kits
Na, not now
No tom can clip these wings
==Cougertooth==
Nettlesting
My best friend
I love her
But how do I tell her that
What if she doesn't like me that way
How do I tell her how I feel
I can't tell her
Not now
Mabey not ever
==Redflame==
A day and a night
After my warrior ceremony
I see my sister with that tom
Wolfclaw again
He took her out of camp
He is a good friend
But can I trust him that much
To let him be with my sister
He got hit in the head the other day
Heard he's never gonna fully heal
But still
He better not do anything
To mt dear sister Snowdawn
Or he's gonna get it
And he ain't gonna walk away
From that blow
So he better
If he valuse his life
Take care
Of my sister Snowdawn
==Wolfclaw==
Asked Snowdawn today
To go out with me
She said yes to my delight
I saw Redflame lookin' at me funny
He don't trust me
I can feel his glare burning in my pelt
He'll toss me around
Like a ball of moss
If anything happend to Snowdawn
But If anything happend to Snowdawn
I'd toss myself around like a moss ball
Cause I love her just as much as he does
I lead her to the waterfall
And I'd never seen such a happy look
On her shiny white furred face
==Snowdawn==
Wolfclaw asked me
To go out with him
How could I say no
To those sparkling blue eyes
He took me to this place
A beutiful place indeed
A waterfall lead glistening blue water down pearl white rocks
An aroura danced in the starlit sky
Silver fish flashed in the crystal clear water
Truely breath taking
We raced to the top
Of a white pillar of rocks
He let me win, of course
You could tell on his smiling face
When I asked him
And he asked me a question
One I would never forget
Five simple words
Will you be my mate
Again, how could I say no
To those sparkling blue eyes
But those very same eyes
Rolled into the back of his head
He plumited into the water below
I dove after him
I draged him to shore
He wouldn't wake up
Oh why, great Starclan
Why do you curse him so
==Nettlesting==
Somethin' didn't feel quite right
I looked to my side
Snowdawn wasn't their
And nither was that tom of her's
Wolfclaw, that mangy rascle
He ain't a bad cat
But a sly one at that
To sly you might say
Could out smart a fox
I knew he was with Snowdawn
Snowdawn my sister's kit
He better have her safe
Or I'll just find out right now
I woke up Cougertooth
That lazy scoundrel was already snoring his head off
We then found Redflame
Our unoffical search party
We passed outside clan territory
And saw them both out cold by a waterfall
==Redflame==
I saw them both
Sleeping by a waterfall
I was about slit Wolfclaw's throat and tear his limbs of one by one
But as I got closer
They weren't doin' anything unholy
Snowdawn fell asleep tending Wolfclaw's wounds
Mabey Wolfclaw could be trusted
After all he was my best friend when we were kits
We draged them back to camp
Eagleflight took a look at them
She said they were both fine
Snowdawn was just exausted
And Wolfclaw blacked out because of the brain damage Avalanchstorm did to him the other day
Snowdawn moved out of the medicine den that night
But Eagleflight held on to Wolfclaw
Now he better be alright
==Cougertooth==
I saw Wolfclaw
The second son of Flowerfur and Graynight
He was my sister Featherfall's apprentice
Poor tom
I can't even stand that good for nothing she-cat
Always blabering about how important she is being the former deputy's duaghter
Funny thing is
She didn't greive for him when our father died
At the paws of a rogue
I was the one who sat there
In the icy rain
The one who was eignored by him
He said I did the hunter's crouch O.K
But that was the only praise
I ever got out of him
==Snowdawn==
I got out of the medicine den
With only a few scars to show of it
But Wolfclaw
He's still in there
Eagleflight is not sure
If she can release him yet
He blacked out twice yesterday
Will he ever be fit to hunt
To fight
To be a warrior he is
Well even if he never comes out
He will forever be
The true warrior of Mountainclan that he already is
==Wolfclaw==
Woke up to Thrushpaw
Tending my wounds
He ain't a bad tom
But He sure gets in you business fast
What were you doing
With Snowdawn that night he says
Do you really need to know
I reply
You talk funny he remarks
You look funny I retort
Eagleflight shoose him away
That gray-furred she-cat
She looks at my wounds again
She says I'm free to go
I dashed outside that crapmt little den
To the freash clean air outside
Redflame called me over
He said he was sorry
For doubting me
And how he's sorry he didn't trust me
I told him not to say sorry
Because that just shows me
How much he loves his sister
==Featherfall==
That no-good Wolfclaw
With that no-good Snowdawn
How could he possibly be my former apprentice
A lousy half-breed if you ask me
Mother from Mountainclan, father from Leafclan
Spottedstar should have never
Let that filthy dog live here
Or let his two sons
Live to see their second day
On this earth
Flowerfur should have stayed
With Foxclaw
A decent Mountainclan tom
But she let herself slip
And fall in love with a
Filthy
Leafclan
Cat
==Nightwave==
I brought Featherfall
Some freash-kill
I asked her to share
She snatched it from my jaws
And gulped it down with greed
There must be some good in her
I just know it
If I could reach
The soft side of her heart
Mabey the clan
Would not hate her so much
==Snowdawn==
Look at that tom
He's hopelessly lost
Doing apprentice duties
For that dog we are forced to call
Featherfall
That Nightwave
A true kiss-tail if you ask me
I'm not trying to be mean
But come on
That's pathetic
He's her slave
But maby
Just mabey
It's something more than being a kiss-tail
==Nettlesting==
Cougertooth
That crazy tom
Actin' weired around me all morin'
He's got bees in his big ginger head
Poor old Eagleflight
She's gonna have her den full
Of crazy toms
==Cougertooth==
I want to tell Nettlesting
Who I really feel about her
But it's just too hard
I feel like a deer
In the path
Of a Twoleg Monstar
Traped
In my own mind
==Redflame==
I told Wolfclaw
How sorry I am
But he said not to worry
And I had a right to not trust him fully
But now
He's my kin
So I trust him with my life
My sister's new mate
I hope I don't sound
Vain and all
But that's one lucky tom
==Snowdawn==
One moon after becoming mates
I'm sitting
In a nest
At the nurrsury
Wolfclaw padded in
With some pray
We shared it
Thrushpaw became a medicine cat the other day
Now his name's Thrushstrike
I heard a sharp yell
It was Thrushstrike
Eaglefilght Eagleflight
He shouted
His voice was muffled
But them
I heard him clearly
Eagleflight's dead
The earth stood still
For a breif moment
We held her ceremony that night
Even the clouds
Seemed to Mourn
For
That
Kind
Old she-cat
I tried not to cry
But how could you not
For someone who's close to you
Close to all of us
Wolfclaw tried to comfort me
Thrishstrike
Wolfclaw
And I
All sat vilgle
For the kind old she-cat
==Redflame==
The day after
Eagleflight joined Starclan
I should've sat vigle for her
I should've
Now I regret
She helped me
Helped all of us
Hundreds of times
The whole clan shoud've sat vilgle
For that kind old she-cat
We should've
We all should've
==Featherfall==
Look at those cats
Mourning for a sad old she-cat
Who no-one needs nor wants
Sickening
Just sickening
==Nightwave==
I know what the other cats call me
Kiss-tail
Featherfall's slave
And other
Worse things
But I love her
I really do
I don't know why
I have this attraction
To her
But what I think it is
What I know it is
A sign from Starclan
==Nettlesting==
Ya gotta fell bad for Eagleflight
And her young apprentice
Whom she's left behind
Hope ya like Starclan
Dear old friend
==Wolfclaw==
Eagleflight died the other day
It was her time
But ya can't halp but feel bad
For that old she-cat
At her ceremony
I had a loss for words
And every cat
Who's known me for
At least five seconds
Knows I'm full of them
I tried to comfert Snowdawn
But somethimes
Ya just can't comfert enough
==Cougertooth==
All I have
Is five words to say
Goodbye, we will miss you
==Nettlesting==
Heard some good new the other day
Avalanchstorm and Wolfblizzard are
Finally mates
Took them long enough
To admit it
But will I ever ber able to
Admit it myself
==Wolfclaw==
Ha, ha, Wolfblizzard's finally done it
Now I've seen it all
Avalanchstorm
In the nursurry
Expecting my brother's kits
Redflame couldn't believe his ears
And I busted up laghfing
I thought they'd only be mates
When hedgehogs took to the skys
==Snowdawn==
I got some company now
My former mentor's finally in the nursurry
Wolfblizzard's always yapin' to her
About how he's sorry about
Sending her to the nursurry and all
I saw Redflame outside
Talking to that Ashflower again
Sure took him long enough
To get a mate
Considering he's a fire colored cat
==Redflame==
Ashflower asked me to share some freash-kill with her
I saw Wolfblizzard laughfing his head off
But he's the one
Who sent Avalanchstorm to the nursurry
I shared a mouse with her
And oh holy Starclan
Was that the best mouse I've ever had
Or was it Ashflower
That made that mouse
Taste so good
==Featherfall==
Look at Redflame
And Ashflower
Together
No tom is good enough for me
I'm a deputy's daughter
I should be the one leading this
Filthy hole in the ground
Not Spottedstar
She should have fallen of a cliff
Like Morningstar before her
And I'll make sure
No half-clan
Will ever taint this clan again
With their fithy stench
Their dirty paws
And their discusting blood
==Nightwave==
Maby I just need
To tell Featherfall who I feel about her
Mabey she won't
Push me away like the rest of the clan
Or like the rest of the clan
Has done to her
==Cougertooth==
That's it
I will tell Nettlesting how I feel about her
Even if it kills me
Oh why do I have to be so shy
Not like her, telling cats off like a wild badger
That's why I like her so much
I padded up to her
I told her that I loved her
She smiled and licked my head
She said she loved me too
We walked together for a little while
Our pelts brushed
I think we have waited long enough
==Nettlesting==
Love is in the air
Ashflower and Redflame
Just more kits in the nursurry
Filling up that poor den with four queens and their kits
Including me
==Snowdawn==
I had my kits
On the night of the cresent moon
It hung there like a shinny silver claw
The sky covered with stars
And the mountain in mist
I named the tom Stormkit
And the she-cat Mistkit
To see my kits at my side
Brings joy to my heart
And that very same night
Nettlesting moved in to the nursurry
Thought I would never see the day
That stuborn she-cat had a belly full of kits
She is my mother's sister, but my mother ain't around no more
Wish she were
But she got sick
Got these lumps on her tummy
That wouldn't go away
But Falconswoop my dad is still around
He said he ain't ever gettin' sick
And he also saod he would never die
Under the claw's of a cat
Or the fangs of one either
==Wolfclaw==
I walked into the nurrury
My kits have been born
And Snowdawn was fine
I was so overjoyed
My heart might have poped
I licked them all
But Thrushstrike kicked me out
Said Snowdawn needed rest and I shouldn't be bugging her
Saw Ashflower and Redflame sharing a mouse
We're gonna need a bigger nursurry
==Redflame==
Oh holy Starclan
I think the Dark Forest is rising or something
A whole patrol dead
Any scent of the murderers washed away by rain
My father, Falconswoop amung them
Starclan help us
Eagleflight and now four more
Oh great Starclan help us
==Nettlesting==
I'll get those cats
For killing my sister's mate
It slit their troats
And rip their unholy hearts out
I don't care that I'm full of kits
I just want them dead
At least Falconswoop can finally be with his mate after so many moons
==Snowdawn==
Coundn't believe my eyes
When I saw his body
In a ruby red pool of blood
Upon the rock ground
His bellr ripped open
And every bone broken
And tears welled up in those very same eyes
==Wolfclaw==
Littlepool, Starlingwing, Hareleap, and Falconswoop
All dead
Killed my mysteriouse murderers
Snowdawn, Redflame, Nettlesting, Cougertooth, and I
Sat vigle
For four more lost friends
==Featherfall==
Four more dead
Could we have stopted it
No
Not worth
Any cats time to save a few
Filthy peices of carrion
==Nightwave==
So many deaths
In such little time
And yet Featherfall
Still feels not pain
Nor simpathy
For her fallen clan mates
==Cougertooth==
A few days after the murder of four
I was sent on a night hunting patrol
With Swanfeather and Kinkfur
Before we even caught sight of any prey
We were ambusjed
The cats smelled of blood
And their fur was caked in dark brown mud
They moved as swif as shadows
Through the dence forest
I was down and bleeding
From a cut down my side
I saw Swanfeather and Kinkfur
Fall on the ground dead
Then black sweeped over me and I could see no more
==Nettlesting==
Night fell as fast as a rushing river
Somethin' didn't feel right
I when out of the nursurry
Cougertooth and his patrol were not back
I left camp to look for them
Swanfeather and Kinkfur were dead
And Cougertooth would soon join them
It bwas hard
But I got Cougertooth back to camp
He was still breathing
But he don't look to good
==Wolfclaw==
A thunderstorm broke out
Winds howled like a thousand wolves in the full moon
Lightning struck its bright claws to the earth
And black clouds swirled overhead
And then I saw Wolfblizzard doing something
Even I thought was crazy
What in Starclan is that tom doing up there
Said Fernshade
He's gonna get hit by lightning if he don't climb down from the mountain
Yowled Nettlesting
And the unspeakable hapened
Lighting fell from the sky
The very sound shook the mountain itself
And Wolfblizzard cam falling
To the ground
Starclan help us
Cried Avalanchstorm as she whatched her mate fall all the was
To
The
Ground
I rushed to him
I heard my kits screaming in horror in the nursurry
His fur burned black
Or at least the little he had left did
His flank rose
He was still alive
Thrushflight and I
Carried him into the medicine den
There I saw Cougertooth
Still out cold
Oh Starclan
Please don't let the death toll
Climb to seven
==Cougertooth==
When I awoke
My wounds were almost completely healed
Bless that medicine cat
He may be even better
Than Eaglestrike before him
I saw Wolfblizzard in a den next to me
Or at least I thought it was Wolfblizzard
He looked jsut as healthy as a rotted peice of carrion on a thunderpath
His fur sinnged
I'm not sure any cat
Could pull out of that
==Snowdawn==
I whatched Wolfblizzard fall
To the ground from the top of a mounatin pillar
He was struk by lightning
My kits screaming their tiny heads off
I tried to comfert them
And even Nettlesting helped me
She's been a lot kinder sence moving to the nurrsury
Avalanchstorm was already out side
In the freezing rain
That's not going to be good for her
With her kits in her tummy
Wolfclaw was carried away into the medicine den
Now the question is
Will he be alright
==Wolfclaw==
Wolfblizzard is going to pull throgh
He has to
H-He can't die
I don't want
To sit through
Another one of those vigles again
So he better pull through
He must
==Snowdawn==
Thrushstrike says
Wolfblizzars's life hangs in the balence
Of the next few days
He said
The lightning could have fried up his heart
He says it's beating funny
And he might not make it
Wolfclaw won't leave his side
And my kits are as worried as the Dark Forest
I bet that tom's gonna pull throgh
And shock each and everyone of us
==Nettlesting==
Wolfblizzard opend up his eyes today
Avalanchstorm is thrilled
He hasn't spoken yet
Thrushflight said
His heart was beatin' fine now
But he still can't speak
Nor move a muscle
That's one lucky tom
==Cougertooth==
I got out of the medicine den today
Thrushstrike said my wounds are all healed
But Wolfblizzard is still in there
He can't move
Nor speak
But his heart is beating
And his eyes have opened
But still
He could die any day now
But what was he doing
Climbing a mountain anyway
==Featherfall==
Dogs
A half-breed struck by lightning
Why should they care
About that stupid tom
And his brother
I don't care in the slightest
About if he lives
Or dies
==Nightwave==
Wolfblizzard is still in the medicine den
After three whole days
He might make it
He might not
It's up to Starclan to decide
==Wolfclaw==
Thrushflight said
For me to go and get some freash-kill
For me starving
Won't help my brother
I picked up a sparrow
And headed back
To the medcine den
And Wolfblizzard walked out
Like he was never struck by lightning
He ran over to Avalanchstorm
Completly forgetting about me
But after all
She is his mate
But I'm still his brother
If that means anything
Any more
==Snowdawn==
I saw Wolfblizzard talking to Avalanchstorm
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw him
I asked him why he was climbing the mountain
He looked down
Avalanchstorm shooed me away
Said not to bother him
I saw Redflame and Ashflower
Telling Wolfblizzard how happy they are that he's okay
I heard Wolfclaw and Thrushflight talkin'
About who Thrushflight had healed Wolfclaw up so fast
Thrushflight said that
Eagleflight
Helped guide his paws
Then Wolfclaw called him crazy
That Thrushflight
Such a nice tom
Healed Wolfblizzard up in only five days
Starclan bless him
==Nettlesting==
The night Wolfblizzard was healed
I had my kits
A brown tom
And a gray she-cat
I named them
Dustkit and Rainkit
Cougertooth was thrilled
And I had never had so much pride in my heart
==Cougertooth==
Nettlesting kitted tonight
The most beuitiful kits
I've ever seen
Duskit and Rainkt
My own two kits
My heart sweeled with pride and sheer happyness
Could not have been a better night
==Wolfclaw==
Sent on a border patrol
The day after Nettlesting kitted
With Wolflizzard and Ashflower
Sented a fox
Not to hard sence
That Starclan forsaken beast
Wizzed all over the place
It passed through with no harm done
But still
Our forest reaks with fox pee
==Redflame==
Wolfblizzard still won't talk about
Why he was climbing up the mountain
But does it matter
I'm just happy he's alive
Nettlesting had he kits
The same day Wolfblizzard go out of the medicine den
Starclan's blessing to the world
==Nightwave==
A hunting patrol
Found dead
Three more cats
Shinewater, Dewleaf, and Snakefang
Now hunt with Starclan
Their bodies thrown in a stream
To hide the murderers scent
And still
Featherfall does not care
But I still love her
I do
==Featherfall==
Nightwave
He's the only cat
Who has ever been nice to me
Mabey it's more than nice
Mabey it's love
And mabey I
Feel the same as well
==Snowdawn==
I couldn't beleave my ears
When I heard the news this morning
Featherfall's movin' into the nurrusry
Expecting Nightwave's kits
That's great news
But I don't want any of her crazy
Rubbing off on any
Of my kits
==Nettlesting==
I was shocked
When Featherfall walked n here
Expectin' Nightwave's kits
I didn't like it
But Snowdawn, Avalanchstorm, and I
Made a nest for her
That Avalanchstorm
She's been in her for moons and still hasn't kited yet
Thrishstrike isn't worried
So it must be normal
And I don't think that she-cat
Is gonna have any problems with stuff like that
==Nightwave==
Featherfall and I
Went for a walk in the moonlight
Ambushed by cats
Covered in blood and mud
Caked into their fur
Eyes blazing red
And fangs stained with blood
At least five of them
They made me watch Featherfall
Die a slow
Painful
Death
I saw the kits ripped from her stomach
And her eyeballs plucked from her head
She died in a pool of her own blood
They then cut my sides open
A horrible pain constantly pacing throgh my body
They smashed my skull agenst a tree
And I felt no more pain
==Cougertooth==
We had a long time of peace when Featherfall moved to the nursurry
But that peace ended
Tonight
Featherfall and Nightwave
Dead
Found together
And their kits ripped out of Featherfall's belly
They hadn't even been born yet
And they were murdered under the claws of a cat
Nightwave's head
Was a mess of blood and bone
And Featherfall's eyeballs
Torn out of her head
I was a horrible why to die
The most brutal out of all the murders
My sister and her mate
Dead
==Wolfclaw==
I wish I didn't see it
Starclan it was awful
The grass stained red
From Nightwave's and Featherfall's blood
And there kits
Hardly formed
Were torn out of Featherfall
Discusting
I can't believe
A cat would do this to another cat
==Snowdawn==
I went with Nettlesting on a patrol
To streach my legs
Avalanchstorm looked after our kits
With Redflame, Wolfclaw, and Cougertooth
We came across Featherfall and Nightwave
Dead
We burried them there
And said our prairs
To Starclan
We came back to camp
To see it destroyed
Ashflower, Minnowtail, Graynight
Only three amung the dead
And Then I saw Spottedstar's body
Stripped of all life
On the cold ground
Our clan mates started to hiss at us
They seemed to be lead by
Sharpfang
He was a horrible warrior
Never followed orders
And now he's leading the clan
Traitors
He yowled
Cold-blooded fox hearts
Shouted Swifttalon
I was so confused
Murderers
Shouted Galeflight
I saw Nettlesting's kits with my kits
Next to Avalanchstorm
She seemed to be trying
To hide them
You caused all this
Hissed Sharpfang
We did none of the sort
Shouted Wolfclaw
I saw Wolfblizzard in the distance
Looking ashamed of himself
I saw Thrushflight
Being held prisoner by two warriors
Was the Dark Forest raised when we were gone
==Wolfclaw==
The camp destroyed
Sharpfang leading the clan
My father and many others dead
Can't be true
Sharpfang leaped at Snowdawn
I was able to block her
But he ripped open a long cut down my flank
And I fell to my knees
How does it feel
To die like all those you killed
Wolfclaw
Hissed Sharpfang
Why would I
Kill my father
And all those close to me
I replied
Lier
He hised at he tore open a wound in my throat
I slowly started to bleed out my life
Wolfblizzard rose to his paws
Murderer
He cried as he tried to break through the crowd
Cats held him back
Sharpfang's followers
As my life ebbed away
I said these that word
I'll see you in the Dark Forest
You filthy son of a dog
Cougertooth and Redflame attacked Sharpfang
But then I saw no more
==Cougertooth==
Redflame and I
Attacked that son of a dog
Sharpfang
He hit Redflame
At least tree tail lenghts
Strait into a rock
He laied there motionless
Redflame
Screached Snowdawn as he rush to his eyes
Tears pouring out of her
Bright green eyes
Nettlesting helped me fight
But two on twenty
Not to much hope of winning
Wolfblizzard rose to his paws in anger
He then said
It was not them who murdered all those cats
It was you
Sharpfang
And your fox hearted followers
It was you
Who I was chaseing up the mountain
You were the ones
Who killed my father
My brother
And my friends
It was you who
Sucked the life away from
Featherfall and Nightwave
And their three unborn kits
I shall never forgive you
And your corupt
Blood thrirsty
Soul
A cat slashed across his face
And slamed him agenst the rock wall
And he lay motionless
==Redflame==
Half-awake
I saw through the haze
Of my mind
Wolfblizzard
Agenst the wall out cold
And I soon followed
==Nettlesting==
I slashed Sharpfang's face
I turned around
To see my kit's heads
Torn from their
Tiny bodies
There blood pooled around my paws
Along with those
Just dead
I vow
To kill that blood thrist
Sharpfang
And do to him
What he has done to everyone else
==Snowdawn==
Avalanchstorm
Had the kits snached from her jaws
Galestrike
Tore the heads of of
Nettlesting's kits
And thosed them on the ground
Next to their heart-broken mother
A bloody mess all over the camp
And then I saw
Mistkit
Implaed on a tree branch
Wounds oozing with blood
I slit Galestrike's throat
And pushed a rock throgh his heart
So he would feel
The pain of my kit
==Cougertooth==
My kit's head decapitated
Rage built up inside me
I slit that Starclan forsaken tom's throat
He choked on his own blood
As it rose up from his throat
He fell to the ground
Now he can go rot in the Dark Forest
Like he deserves
==Snowdawn==
All Sharpfang's followers
Fled like the cowards they are outside of clan territory
We burried the numerous dead
And the whole clan sat vigle for
Wolfclaw
Dustkit
Rainkit
Graynight
Ashflower
Mistkit
Nightwave
Featherfall
Spottedstar
And so many more
Cougertooth
Became our new leader
For slaying
The murderer Sharpfang
Redflame vowed he would never fell in love again
After the death of Ashflower
But I wouln't be so sure
Stormkit lived
And became a warrior
Many moons later
Named Stormwolf
In honour of his father
Nettlesting
Is in the nurrsury again
With Cougerstar's kits
And a great peace
Washed over the whole forest
And we all praise Starclan
For the gift of the warriors who have passed
And the blessing of thee warriors yet to come
For every cat means something
For we are the light in the dark
The salt of the earth
And Starclan's gift to the world
The End!
==Explaning: Voices==
This fanfiction was origialy titled "The Voice of Seven", because it was told from seven different pionts of veiw. The begining was based heavaly on the Montainclan Roleplay, but then strayed from it as the story prgressed. Many of the story's characters, inclueding Nightwave, one of the main characters, are not in the RP, nor do I want them to be. One of the main problems I've had writing this story is the character's diolouge. I have one thing to admit, I curse, a lot. When some of the characters speak, you might notice they say some odd things. This is beacause they are actually curseing, but since curseing is not allowed on this wiki, I have to change it a bit. When Wolfblizzard was struck by lightning, I changed it so he was climbing up the mountain instead of him being on the ground. He was on the mountain because he was chaseing Sharpfang, the true murderer. He was told to stay quiet or he, and his mate, would be killed. Another problem I had wrighting this is that the story hits the climax so sudenly. Sharpfang is only introduced at the end when Spottedstar died instead of apprearing in the body of the story. Hopefuly I will be able to avoid these problems in my next lyrical fanficion, Blood.
==Polls==
<poll>
Who is your favorite main character?
A. Wolfclaw
B. Snowdawn
C. Redflame
D. Cougertooth
E. Nettlesting
F. Featherfall
G. Nightwave
</poll>
<poll>
Who is your favorite major character?
A. Wolfblizzard
B. Avalanchstorm
C. Ashflower
D. Thrushstrike
</poll>
<poll>
Who is your favorite minor character?
A. Galestrike
B. Spottedstar
C. Sharpfang
D. Graynight
E. Falconswoop
</poll>
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