AceMaker: Legends, Deepsea

this is a story i started for fun, it takes place around the time queen coral killed orca
please do not edit the story unless your fixing a grammar error
hey everyone! i wrote this story quite a while ago and recently i decided to come back and take a look at what i wrote, i relay did not like it, so here i am, going over the story again to try to improve what i can, if you want to see the original (for some mad reason) check here Untitled seawing story. this is still being made so expect weird placeholders
Prologue:
Krill was as surprised as anyone when Princess Orca challenged Queen Coral for the throne of the Seawing's, of course she had expected her to, but not nearly as soon as this, she had assumed that Orca, being as smart and responsible as she was, would be able to patently wait until her mother died of old age, or at least until Orca herself was a reasonable enough age to challenge the Queen, but yesterday Krill's expectations had been thrown out the window and into the ocean, like a bad coconut. she had been at one of queen Corals executions watching her slowly cut the disobedient dragons throat (shiver) when Princes Orca entered the room. DA THING IS GUNNA BE HERE Someone poked her shoulder and she turned around ‘hey Krill’ Carp flashed in aquatic ‘hello Carp’ she ruefully flashed back. She did not like Carp much, he was loud and annoying, and somehow always in the way. ‘Krill the challenge is about to start, come quick we need to get good seats’ she sighed, she knew that he would manage to get a seat next to her even if she tried her hardest to get away, so she gave in and  they swam off in the direction of the deep palace. The farther they swam more and more seawings joined them, some in front, some behind, until there was a huge line of them all swimming though the same current, leading straight to the deep palace. None of them conversed, none of them wanted to, a dragon was going to die today. Even if it was most likely Orca, Krill still didn't like it. They finally arrived at the deep palace and streamed in though the nearest entrance, Krill didn't know the palace very well so she followed Carp, which was honestly kind of infuriating. She didn't like to rely on anyone ever, so she usually did everything by herself but today, unfortunately, would half to be an exception. Carp lead her up and down, though twists and turns, and around bends, until Krill was thoroughly lost, she had a moment to wonder if Carp had lead her away somewhere to kill her, and another to wonder if Carp was even smart enough for that when she found herself in a large circular room with a line made of seashells ringing the middle. And in the middle of the ring stood Orca and coral both looked like the definition of royal, there snouts were raised slightly above the other dragons and both had haughty “i am at least two times better then you so don't even try” expressions on, they were staring so hard at each other that Krill thought that the battle might have already started. The only reason she didn't think so was that neither of them had moved an inch for the two seconds she looked at them
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